四级英语很快就要到来了,英语是占据重要的部分,快来看看下面的范文及写作指导吧。
下面请看一篇漫画式命题的作文预测题:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should express your views on the impact of air pollution. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
【参考模板范文】
The Impact of Air Pollution
The cartoon vividly reveals the phenomenon of air pollution or the decline of air quality. In the cartoon we can see the air pollution is so serious that the earth can't bear it.
What exactly contribute to this phenomenon? Possible reasons can be listed as follows: firstly, vehicle exhaust gases could be one of the most leading causes. With the improvement of economy and people's living standard, urban inhabitants in mounting numbers own their private cars. More automobiles will inevitably generate more exhaust gases. Additionally, household appliances widely used in cities also release a great amount of carbon dioxide gases, which further intensifies air pollution. Last but not least, many factories around the cities emit large quantities of untreated poisonous gases, which should also be responsible for the decline of air quality.
Definitely, air pollution will exert a detrimental impact on many aspects of people's life. For example, many diseases such as cough, skin problem and lung cancer are caused by it. Perhaps it is high time that we should adopt some measures to solve the problem of air pollution.
英语漫画作文写作指导
第一、读图审题
四级漫画作文中的漫画通常反映一个社会现象或生活哲理,要求考生根据自己对漫画的理解来写作。因此,要写好四级漫画作文,审题格外重要。考生在下笔之前要仔细看漫画,弄清漫画的寓意,这是文章切题的保证。此外,在本次四级考试的三道写作题中,Directions部分都给出了写作内容的大致方向,这也为考生把握漫画寓意提供了帮助。下面笔者就来逐一梳理2013年6月四级作文的三幅漫画及其传达的寓意。
第二、谋篇布局
在把握文章的主旨之后,考生就可以构思整篇文章的架构了。四级漫画作文的写作可以分为下面三个段落。
第一段:开门见山,简要描述一下漫画内容,并指出漫画的寓意。描述漫画内容是为了揭示其中的寓意,是手段而不是目的,所以描述要简洁明快,一般来说一句话足矣。需要提醒考生的是,写作的Directions部分虽然给出了大致的写作主题,但是也要求考生对漫画进行简要描述,因此考生切不可抛开漫画内容直接展开议论。
第二段:表达考生对漫画寓意的看法,这是文章的重心所在。比如,就第一道写作题目而言,考生应在第二段阐述阅读文学作品的重要性;就第二道写作题目而言,考生应在第二段论述为什么凡事必须从小事做起;就第三道写作题目而言,考生应在第二段论述掌握基本技能的重要性。
第三段:指出漫画的寓意对大学生的教育意义,或者提出解决问题的建议。考生需要注意的是,结尾段一般并不需要实质性的分析,其主要作用是总结和升华,使文章结构完整。所以结尾段的写作要简明扼要,点到即止。
第三、论证方法
漫画作文的'第二段要表达考生对漫画寓意的看法,这是文章的核心段落,也是作文字数达到要求的关键。因此,考生在这一段要浓墨重彩,写深、写透。在写这一段时,考生要尽量摆事实、讲道理,避免空泛的议论。针对这一核心段落,笔者在此推荐以下三种展开议论的常用方法,希望对考生有所启发。
1.条分缕析
在写作第二段时,考生可以从2~3个方面对观点展开论述,这种写法可使文章显得层次清楚、条理清晰。例如,本次四级作文第一道题目的第二段需要阐述阅读文学作品的重要性,考生就可以从以下两个方面展开:第一,相对于电子媒体,文学阅读更能培养人的想象力;第二,阅读文学作品能够帮助我们更好地了解社会。请参考下面的范文。
There wasa time when children could relish (欣赏/ 也可以使用appreciate 替换 literature. But childrentoday can enjoy the sounds and action on a TV or computer screen. “So why bother reading?” some ask. The reasonis obvious: It enriches our imagination. When we read apiece of literature, we are living the life of RobinHood or starting an adventure with Tom Sawyer. In addition, literature is the mirror of society,whether it be poetry, drama or fiction. We know thesociety better through literature.
2.举例论证
如果漫画所传达的是抽象的人生哲理,那么考生在论述时最好能举出具体的事例,尽量避免空洞的说教。比如,就本次四级作文第二道题目而言,考生可以在第二段中举出一些成功人士如何从小事做起的例子。笔者下面提供的范文中用到的是哈兰·桑德斯上校从一个小吃店做起,最后缔造出遍布全球的肯德基快餐帝国的例子,用以证明只有从小事做起,才能成就大事。请看下面的范文。
Everything is smallbefore it is big. A good example is KFC. In 1930 Colonel Harland Sanders beganserving food to his service station customers in Corbin, a city in Kentucky. He fried chicken in his own kitchen andperfected his secret recipe there. From the small roadside eatery, he went on to build an empire of fast food.
3.类比论证
如果漫画中的寓意不容易通过具体的事例来证明,那么考生还可以使用类比论证的方法,即通过打比方来论证一个抽象的道理。比如,对于本次四级作文的第三道题目,考生可以在第二段中用学习打篮球的过程来打比方。学习打篮球时,只有先学会了投球、运球、传球这些基本技能,才能进一步学习高难度的技能。以此类推,无论做任何事情,只有掌握了基本的技能,才可能取得更大的成功。此外,考生还可以举出统计数字,用具体的研究结果来证明论点。请看下面的范文。
Simple as they mayseem, basic skills serve as the first link in the chain of success. Thisis analogous to learning to play basketball. If shooting, dribbling and passing are not mastered,learning advanced skills will become difficult, if notimpossible. A growing body of research has also documented that such basicskills as reading, writing and computing are highlycorrelated with success later in life. A 2012 study surveyed 300 CEOs ofFortune 500 companies and found that 87% attributed part of their success tothe basic skills they learned in primary school.
Recently, there is a popular saying: the world is so large that I want to have a look! As more and more people travel around during their holidays, tourists have brought large sum of money to the local people.
However, too many tourists also bring some problems to the local life. The most serious problem is the pollution caused by the uncivilized tourists. It’s reported that there were thousands of tons of rubbish left after the flag-raising ceremony on Oct. 1st. The uncivilized tourists left their rubbish wherever they go, polluting the local environment. Another problem is the traffic jam caused by so many tourists.
Tourist can promote the economic development of the local areas, but the pollution caused by those uncivilized tourists has brought severe problems. The local tourist authority should set up relative laws to protect the environment of the local areas, and every tourist obey the laws and help to make the places of tourist more beautiful!
Everyone may encounter a scene when he or she wonders what the meaning and purpose of life is. Answers to this question vary from person to person. As for me, I agree with the view that the meaning of life is to discover your gift and the purpose of life is to make the best of it.
On one hand, one's gift could be the source of his inner happiness, providing spiritual impetus and correct orientation. Take the world-renowned Chinese pianist Lang Lang as an example. His gift was noticed before he was 3 years old, which laid the foundation of his glorious life. On the other hand, proper use of talent helps people to realize their value in a positive way, thus making contribution to the society as a whole. For instance, Isaac Newton made a universally amazing discovery by digging into his gift and finding the Newton's law of gravitation.
In conclusion, let's search for our true gift and utilize it to the fullest to achieve a happy and valuable life.
To Whom It May Concern,
I am a student in this university who regularly comes to the library to spend my spare time. Generally speaking, the services you offer here is quite good; however, I have some suggestions for you to adopt.
To begin with, will you please prolong the time for reading? In the daytime, most of the students are having class, so they can’t come to the library. Moreover, some of the books on shelves are out of date. If you are so kind as to provide us some books such as the latest magazines, we will be greatly honored.
I really wish to have a more comfortable library. I would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you are so kind to take my suggestions into consideration. /Thank you for your time and consideration.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
(1 模版1
Different people have different views on_____.Some people think that_____,whereas others aegue that __________.
As far as I am concerned, I agree with the opinion that ___________.For one thing,I firmly believe that ___________.For another,_____________.Just think of________,who/which_______.
Taking all these factors into consideration,we may safely come to the conclusion that______.Only if_______can we _______,just as the saying goes,________________.
(2模版2
In recent years there have been many reports of ________.It turns a new chapter of _________in China,and will have far-reaching effects in the forthcoming years.
The biggest benefit,in my eyes,is that_______.In addition,_______.Finally,______________.
Apart from the benefits mentioned above,we should also face several unavoidable challenges.In the first place,_____________.In the second place,________.What’s more,_______________.In summary,we should_______________.
(3模版3
Nowadays more and more ______are commonly and widely used in everyday life,ranging from __________to_____________.
The popularity of _______will have a great influence on ______.On the one hand,_________.On the other hand,__________.
To conclude,____________are just like a double-edged sword.With them we may________.However,one point should be kept in mind that we should make sensible use,always being a master instead of slaving of them.
我要是有一只尼尔斯的鹅,那该有多好啊!不过我自己也知道,这是不可能的。
当我正在这样想时,突然,我发现我的房间突然之间变大了,怎么回事?对面的镜子一闪一闪的,我才知道,原来是我变小了啊。我顿时舒了口气。可是好像又想起了什么,“什么?!是我变小了!”我顿时尖叫起来,要是平时的话,可能整间房子都会震动起来,不过我变小了,声音也变小了。别说让房子震动起来,谁也听不见我的声音,我顿时石化。
就在这时,一只鹅从窗口飞进来,缓缓的落在了地上,对我说:“嘿,那边的女孩,你怎么这么小啊?”我听后,差点被吓死了,“鹅怎么会说话?!恩,肯定是在做梦!再睡会。”说罢,我随手拿了一张‘被子’盖在身上,其实是一条抹布。“喂,你没有在做梦,是真的!”鹅推了推我,说。我听完后,缓缓的起身,对他说:“是真的吗?好悲剧!”鹅头上顿时出现三条线,对我说:“我叫马丁,你好呀!”马丁友好地向我伸出翅膀。我也友好地伸出手,握了握马丁的翅膀。过了一会儿,我问:“对了,马丁,你怎么会在这里?”“哦,小精灵让我去寻找拇指般大的小女孩,并让我带她去三个地方。你符合条件,说吧,你想去哪里?”
我看了看自己,对马丁说:“我想去雪山,可以吗?”马丁点点头,表示可以。我爬上它的脖子,稳稳地坐在那里。“坐稳喽!我们要出发喽。”马丁貌似也很高兴,开心地对我说。我应了一声‘嗯’,马丁便向雪山飞去。用不了一会儿,我们就到雪山了,我被眼前这一大美景迷住了——漫天飘雪,地上积了厚厚的一层雪,树上也有一些雪,就连山上,也有这么美丽的大雪覆盖着,真美啊!雪山上,满山遍野里到处都是小孩子堆出来的雪人,可爱极了。这些雪人真是栩栩如生啊!我仔细观察这些雪人,有的眼睛大大的,嘴巴红红的。其中有一个雪人,它的鼻子是胡萝卜,耳朵是树枝,衣服上还有个大钮扣,真可爱!“哇!这就是雪山吗,好美啊!比我在电视上看到的壮观多了。”我开心地说。但我还沉浸在美景中时,一个孩子向我扔来一个雪球,“哇!好大的雪球啊!救命啊!”我急忙跑起来,想躲避雪球,雪球穷追不舍,老是不放过我。但雪球快要砸向我时,马丁迅速飞来把我叼起来。我骑在马丁背上,舒了一口气,说:“真是千钧一发啊,谢谢你啊,马丁。”马丁微笑着说:“不用谢!我们是朋友嘛。对了,你还想去哪里?”“那,去海滩吧,小学六年级作文《假如我有一只尼尔斯的鹅作文》。”我回答说。马丁说:“那坐稳喽。”我们又开始新的旅程。
很快我们就来到了海滩,“哇!我梦寐以求的.海滩。”我感叹道。马丁看着我,笑了笑。迎面扑来的是粘粘的海风,和着丝丝的腥味。我光着脚丫踩在海滩上行走。远远望去,黄色的沙子在太阳的映照下,金光闪闪,好像上面有黄金珠宝似的。突然,远处传来一阵求救的声音,我醒过神来,对马丁说:“马丁,我们去看看!”马丁懂得我的意思,把我叼起来放在背上飞向求救的地方,果然有人在求救,原来是一只船翻了,十几个人都掉进了海里,刚才就是他们在呼救。我和马丁飞了过去,对他们说:“你们不要担心,我们去请求支援。”他们听后,一致的点点头,我对马丁说:“马丁,这附近有海豚吗?”马丁听后,对我说:“好,你坐好,我飞上天找找。”马丁说罢便飞上天,过了一会儿,马丁发现了一只小海豚,连忙飞下去,跟他沟通:“小海豚,你能把附近的海豚都召集过来吗?”小海豚点点头,叫了几声,顿时海面泛起水花,一群海豚迅速飞来。小海豚向他们说明情况,他们都点点头,向那个呼救的地方游去。很快,那十几个掉进海里的人们都获救了,他们感激地对我说谢谢,我不好意思地说:“你们要谢就谢马丁和海豚吧,是他们救你们的。”人们听后友好地摸了摸海豚,向马丁道谢,马丁很有礼貌地向他们说了一声:不用谢。就跟我一起飞走了,人们向我们招手,表示道别,海豚叫了几声,好像也在跟我道别。我也想他们招了招手,可惜他们看不见。“虽然想玩玩不成,不过帮助了人,还认识了可爱的海豚,这可比玩快乐多了!”我对马丁说。马丁点了点头,对我说:“嗯,助人为乐!想好了接下来要去哪里了吗?”马丁说完脸色黯淡起来。我看出来了,安慰马丁说:“虽然去完最后一个地方后我们就要分离,但我们经历了这么多,已经满足了不是嘛!我们不是朋友吗?”我虽然嘴上这么说,但内心非常舍不得马丁。“是啊,我们是朋友啊,又不是永远见不到,呵呵!”马丁说完,我们两个都笑了起来。笑得很开心!突然来了一只老鹰把我从马丁身上掀下来,我顿时掉了下来。“喂!!”马丁喊道,可惜他被老鹰缠住了。“再见了世界!”我微笑着说。接着往下掉。
“哎哟!好痛!”我看了看附近,恍然大悟,“原来是个梦,不过,感觉很真实。”我摸了摸头,突然看见书桌上有一张纸条,我走过去看,纸条上写:我们永远都是好朋友!“原来,那个梦是真的!”我既惊讶又高兴。窗外飞来一群鸟,围成了三个字:好朋友,我看了很高兴,“马丁,我永远的好朋友,谢谢你!”我把纸条放在胸前,望着外面的那群小鸟,欣慰地笑了。
© 2022 xuexicn.net,All Rights Reserved.