这不,今天老师又让我们背课文了。这可是一个超级难的事情。我怎么背也背不好,时间一分一秒的过去了,可我只能记住两三句,经常是记住了前面,忘记了后面,要么是记住了后面,就忘记了前面,这可咋办呢?妈妈对我说:“你不要这么着急,心越急柴越湿,你先通读几遍课文,理解了课文的'内容,然后再一句一句的记住,如果句子短的话,可以两三句一起记,最后,窜起来再记一下,要是碰到忘记的地方,再看看书,再记记,肯定会记住的。”我按照妈妈的方法,试着去记。可是,发现效果还是不怎么好。于是,妈妈又说:“记忆讲究的是方法,死记硬背是行不通的,即便你能背出来,但也很快会忘记的。其实,记忆可以有联想法,你自己试着用什么联想,印象更深刻,这样记起来既快又不太容易遗忘,你再试试看。”我又照妈妈的方法试了一下,发现好了一点,比原先记起来更容易一点了。接着,我就照这样的方法去背课文。总算谢天谢地的把这篇课文勉勉强强的背出来了。妈妈又对我说:“再多读几遍,有助于记忆,要不然,很快要忘记的。”我又照妈妈说的,又多读了几遍课文。
哦!天哪!这要命的文字,真够捉弄人的呀!
to prevent H7N9 we should know some common sense. First of all, it is important for us to prevent H7N9 from ourselves. For example, clean our hands frequently.
Sencondly, do more exercises. Such as running. Lastly, change our diet to keep balence. For example, eat more types of vegetables and drink more water
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
依稀记得三年前的一个温暖的午后,妈妈笑着对我说:“民民,人要有一技之长,你想学什么呢?”
“画画。”我平时比较喜欢欣赏那些美丽的画,所以便不假思索,脱口而出。
“要想学好画画就要肯吃苦,你想好了吗?”妈妈语重心长地说。
“嗯。”我点了点头。
记得那个暑假,妈妈带我去青少年活动中心报了名,那是我第一次见到卞老师。卞老师中等身材,一脸的笑容,给我的第一印象是挺和气的。
上课了,卞老师手把手地矫正了我的抓笔姿势,然后在我的画纸上画了两条直线,让我照样子先学拉线,然后再学画正方体。
因为刚学,所以我感到很新奇,立刻就开始专心致志地拉线了。过了一会儿,我就画了一整张纸的线条。我仔细地打量着那张纸,才惭愧地发现笔直的线条,竟然只有七条,与我预想的相差甚大。我气愤极了,从画板上拿下那张纸,随着几声“咔嚓”那张无辜的画纸被我撕成了碎片,扔进了垃圾桶。
坐在我右边的同学目睹了这一切,吃惊地问我:“那么好看的一张画,你撕掉干什么,你不要给我,我要啊!”我愣了,随即看了一下她画的线条。她有点不好意思地说:“我知道……我画得挺难看的',不过,我右边的那几位……”她边说边用手指指了指右边的两个人,我朝着她手指的方向看,果真如她所说。
“原来我画得还可以。”我小声地自言自语道。我感觉自己那破碎了的自信心被拼好了。过了一会儿,一张纸又被我画完了,一看还不错,再数一数,“一条,两条……三十四条耶!”我兴奋得嚷了起来。坐在我右边的那个同学不可思议地问道:“真的有三十四条吗?”我点了点头。
过了一会儿,老师来检查我们的画,卞老师满意地对我说:“嗯,线条画得还不错!你练习画正方体吧。”说完他给我找了一幅正方体的素描作品让我临摹……
在以后的每一堂美术课上,我画画都很认真,每次都有进步,现在我已经能从容地进行静物写生,我画的石膏人物头像老师赞不绝口……在高邮市“诵蟹、画蟹”征文、绘画比赛中,我的美术作品荣获一等奖,同学们向我投来了羡慕的眼光。
回首三年学画画的历程,虽然辛苦,但是看到一幅幅惟妙惟肖的美术作品从我的笔下诞生时,内心是那样地幸福、甜蜜!
Expert tips on how to prevent avian influenza H7N9 collated by current argument data dictionary
1.平时加强体育锻炼,多休息,避免过度劳累,不吸烟,勤洗手;注意个人卫生,打喷嚏或咳嗽时掩住口鼻。
1 usually strengthen physical exercise, rest more, avoid excessive overworked, do not smoke, wash their hands; pay attention to personal hygiene, when sneezing or coughing and cover your nose and mouth.
2.保持室内清洁,使用消毒液清洗的地毯,避免使用难以清洗的地毯,保持地面、天花板、家具及墙壁清洁,确保排水道通畅;保持室内空气流通,应每天开窗换气两次,每次至少10分钟,或使用抽气扇保持空气流通;尽量少去 空气不流通的场所。
2 keep the room clean, use disinfectant cleaning carpets, avoid the use of hard to clean the carpet, keep the floor, ceiling, furniture and walls clean, to ensure smooth drainage channel; maintains the indoor air circulation, ventilation windows should be at least two times a day, 10 minutes each time, or use a fan to keep air circulation; as little as possible to airless places.
3.注意饮食卫生,进食禽肉、蛋类要彻底煮熟,加工、保存食物时要注意生、熟分开;养成良好的卫生习惯,搞好厨房卫生,不生食禽肉和内脏。解剖活(死家禽、家畜及其制品后要彻底洗手。
3, pay attention to food hygiene, eating meat, eggs should be thoroughly cooked, processing, preservation of food to the attention of raw, cooked separately; develop good health habits, good kitchen hygiene, do not eat raw poultry meat and offal. Anatomy of living (dead to wash hands thoroughly, livestock and poultry products.
同时,在户外洗手不方便的时候,可以使用免洗洗手液,随身携带,随时随地隔离病菌,呵护您的健康。
At the same time, when the outdoor hand-washing is not convenient, can use hand sanitizer, carry whenever and wherever possible, isolate the pathogen, take care of your health.
4.发现疫情时,应尽量避免与禽类接触;公众特别是儿童应避免密切接触家禽和野禽。
4 found in the epidemic, should avoid contact with poultry; the public especially children should avoid close contact with poultry and wild birds.
5.注意生活用具的消毒处理。禽流感病毒不耐热,100°C下一分钟即可灭活。对干燥、紫外线照射、汞、氯等常用消毒药都很敏感。
5 pay attention to disinfection and living appliances. Avian influenza viruses do not heat, 100 ° C, one minute can be inact
How to prevent the H7N9?
As is well known,the A flu is spreading throught our country. However, if we negnect it, the deadly H7N9 may cause more infectors,or even more deaths. So what is the most important is that we should take some effective measures to prevent it.They can be listed as follows.
Firstly,it is necessary for you to realize the Avian flu can be prevented if you develop good living habits. For example,you shouldn’t forget to wash your hands before meals.Besides,don’t spit everywhere and try to cover your mouth or nose with paper or hankerchiefs when you have to cough or sneeze.What’s more, remember to wear the mouth-cover if you have to go to the public places, such as the crowded cinemas,supermarkets, buses,where the A flu may spread easily.
Secondly,of course, taking exercise more often and taking good sleep to build your body are wise choices for you to reduce the risk of being infected.
Last but not the least, if you are unlucky to be infected with the slight flu cold, try to stay at home,and take some medicine. Do pay attention to your daily body temperature. If you have a high fever, go to the hospital without delay for further treatment. Make sure you are not expected to come back to school before the cold or flu is cured.
Only by doing like this can you prevent or defeat the A flu in the end.
把卫生工具摆放好,我走出教学楼。斜阳快要消失,一丝残红留在天边。校园里已经没有学生了,才打扫完卫生的我望着偌大空旷的校园,叹了口气,向着自行车区走去。作为毕业班,本来放学就晚,再加上我这一周打扫卫生,天色已是不早。麻利的开锁,我快速推着自行车,想尽快回家。但是车轮的异样让我停了下来。车链无力的搭下来,弯成了一抹弧,像是在对我发出嘲笑。我找来一根树枝,试着用它去挑车链,可是对于毫无的我来说,无疑是没用的。怎么办?家离学校本来就远,骑自行车都要二十多分钟,现在难道要我推车走回家吗?天色已擦黑,我呆立在原地,望着地上树木被残阳拉长的影子,心中涌起了一阵恐慌。
“涵?”闻声我抬头望去,是我从小玩到大的好朋友筱蔷,“你干嘛呢,快走吧,天都黑了。”“我车链坏了,走不了了。”我有些沮丧的看了看旁边的自行车。她来到我旁边,俯下身子看了看说“是链条掉下来了,我来帮你修。”不等我说话,她已经将肩上的'书包丢在一旁,挽起袖子放倒了我的自行车。
筱蔷端详了一会儿,像刚开始我那样,找来一根树枝戳弄着,可是这链子就像是蜿蜒的长蛇,一点也不听话,前面套上齿轮后面又掉下来,筱蔷折腾了好一会儿,还是老样子。蹲在一旁的我这才明白,原来她也不会修自行车。望着旁边头也不抬,努力地用树枝戳着自行车的身影,我有些失望地说:“这么晚了,别耽误你回家,你先走吧。”“那你怎么办?现在还有公交车吗?你总不能走回家啊!我再试试!”筱蔷突然像下定决心似的,将棍子一扔,用手指去挑动链条,车链上的油污全沾在了她手上。天已经黑了,筱蔷努力的盯着车链,神情专注。此时的她已经跪在地上,额头也微微冒汗。车链一次又一次的掉下来,她仍一次次的去尝试,双手满是油污,校服上也沾上了油渍。
多次失败后,她像是发现了什么方法。筱蔷将链条挂上后轮后,让我按住,拼命地拽住车链往前轮上套,终于把车链挂上了。“成功了!”我兴奋的抓住筱蔷的胳膊,却弄了她一胳膊的油污。筱蔷如释重负的擦了擦脸,却弄了一脸,望着她,我不禁哈哈大笑。“哎呦。”哭笑不得的筱蔷反手又抹了我一脸。望着彼此脏兮兮模样,我俩一同笑了起来。无人寂静的校园里,这声音格外清脆明亮,一如我们的友谊。
是你,在我最害怕的八百米测验中陪我跑完全程,是你,为了帮没带书的我几乎借遍了所有的班级;是你,在我受委屈的时候都我哈哈大笑,是你,从幼儿园以来一直陪我到现在逗我开心,给我帮助……一路走来,你总是在我最无助的时候像个英雄般挺身而出,因为有你,我更幸福快乐。
把卫生工具摆放好,我走出教学楼。斜阳快要消失,一丝残红留在天边。校园里已经没有学生了,才打扫完卫生的我望着偌大空旷的校园,叹了口气,向着自行车区走去。作为毕业班,本来放学就晚,再加上我这一周打扫卫生,天色已是不早。麻利的开锁,我快速推着自行车,想尽快回家。但是车轮的异样让我停了下来。车链无力的搭下来,弯成了一抹弧,像是在对我发出嘲笑。我找来一根树枝,试着用它去挑车链,可是对于毫无的我来说,无疑是没用的。怎么办?家离学校本来就远,骑自行车都要二十多分钟,现在难道要我推车走回家吗?天色已擦黑,我呆立在原地,望着地上树木被残阳拉长的影子,心中涌起了一阵恐慌。
“涵?”闻声我抬头望去,是我从小玩到大的好朋友筱蔷,“你干嘛呢,快走吧,天都黑了。”“我车链坏了,走不了了。”我有些沮丧的看了看旁边的自行车。她来到我旁边,俯下身子看了看说“是链条掉下来了,我来帮你修。”不等我说话,她已经将肩上的书包丢在一旁,挽起袖子放倒了我的自行车。
筱蔷端详了一会儿,像刚开始我那样,找来一根树枝戳弄着,可是这链子就像是蜿蜒的长蛇,一点也不听话,前面套上齿轮后面又掉下来,筱蔷折腾了好一会儿,还是老样子。蹲在一旁的我这才明白,原来她也不会修自行车。望着旁边头也不抬,努力地用树枝戳着自行车的身影,我有些失望地说:“这么晚了,别耽误你回家,你先走吧。”“那你怎么办?现在还有公交车吗?你总不能走回家啊!我再试试!”筱蔷突然像下定决心似的.,将棍子一扔,用手指去挑动链条,车链上的油污全沾在了她手上。天已经黑了,筱蔷努力的盯着车链,神情专注。此时的她已经跪在地上,额头也微微冒汗。车链一次又一次的掉下来,她仍一次次的去尝试,双手满是油污,校服上也沾上了油渍。
多次失败后,她像是发现了什么方法。筱蔷将链条挂上后轮后,让我按住,拼命地拽住车链往前轮上套,终于把车链挂上了。“成功了!”我兴奋的抓住筱蔷的胳膊,却弄了她一胳膊的油污。筱蔷如释重负的擦了擦脸,却弄了一脸,望着她,我不禁哈哈大笑。“哎呦。”哭笑不得的筱蔷反手又抹了我一脸。望着彼此脏兮兮模样,我俩一同笑了起来。无人寂静的校园里,这声音格外清脆明亮,一如我们的友谊。
是你,在我最害怕的八百米测验中陪我跑完全程,是你,为了帮没带书的我几乎借遍了所有的班级;是你,在我受委屈的时候都我哈哈大笑,是你,从幼儿园以来一直陪我到现在逗我开心,给我帮助……一路走来,你总是在我最无助的时候像个英雄般挺身而出,因为有你,我更幸福快乐。
要记住这篇文章哦:因为有你陪伴,我更快乐,如果喜欢,可以经常来找我,我是你的“秀秀姐”。
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