四年级峨眉山英语作文【一】
今年暑假，我和我的家人去了峨眉山游玩，一共两天。我因为从没去过峨眉山，所以我对峨眉山的印象是空白的。人们总说“峨眉乐山”，总把峨眉山和乐山联系在一起，所以我也总把峨眉山相成乐山，把乐山想成峨眉山了。
出发的第一天早晨我们凌晨5点就起床了，踏着脚下的路，坐着车，我们3个小时就到了峨眉山。我们在宾馆里安排好了一切后，同样的，我们又迅速起程，向“报国寺”进发。一路上走着，走着，我们目睹了峨眉山那雄伟的身姿，庞大的阵容！不知不觉间我们来到了山中的旅游咨询中心，问明白报国寺在那里之后，我们得到了一张地图，以正确的方向，弯弯曲曲地走到了报国寺。只见那里人山人海多得不得了。这时，时间已经不早了，我们得回去为明天做准备了！
第二天早上，我们照样5点多起床，“今天我们得跟着导游走。”爸爸说。天还是黑的，如果你认为只有我们几个凌晨5点在街上走，那你就错了！街上不止我们几个，在峨眉山旅游的人现在全在这里呢！我们都朝着一个地方――车站。今天是最后一天，我们要游览完峨眉山，先要上“金顶”，坐车到“雷洞坪”就要1个多小时呢！不早走，怎么能游完呢？
1个多小时过去了，我们终于来到了雷洞坪。想要上金顶，还要冒点险呢！这里虽然冷，却是猴子的天堂，我们上去和下来的时候就看到了许多猴子呢！现在这里是阴天，而我们坐缆车上金顶的时候，云朵好像都在下面，我们却在云上面。这时，我真正感到了“天高云淡”啊！
啊！祖国！我真正领略到了，你是多么美丽啊！
四年级峨眉山英语作文【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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四年级峨眉山英语作文【三】
去年的暑假里，爸爸带我去成都峨眉山旅游，我高兴极了!这可是我第一次坐飞机去成都玩哦!
峨眉山位于中国四川峨眉山市境内，景区面积154平方公里，最高峰万佛顶海拔3000米。地势陡峭，风景秀丽，有“秀甲天下”之美誉。景区气候多样，植被丰富，共有3000多种植物，其中包括世界上稀有的树种。山路沿途有较多的猴群，常结队向游人讨食，成为峨眉山一大特色。它是中国四大佛教名山之一。
到成都的第二天，我和爸爸从宾馆出发去峨眉山。一路上，导游跟我们说：“游客一定要把食品放进包，小心被猴子抢走了。”我们下了客车，手里拿着花生，想逗一逗猴子，结果好半天也没有看见猴子。我们几个人流着汗爬着台阶攀登着，突然，不远处的松树上有只猴子，想拍照，可是拍不上，因为雾太大。之后我们座上了缆车，十多分钟就升上了我们向往已久的峰顶，看到了金顶上的大佛骑象塑像，只见大佛在太阳的照耀下闪着金光。广场上有许多朝圣的人，有的在扣头，有的在照像，有的望着大佛发着感叹……，忽然，一朵黑云飘来，山顶上大雾顿起，下起了雨，我在兴奋之余连忙把大衣穿起来。大雾加上小雨点形成了一幅美丽的图画，游客们高兴地欣赏着。
雨停了，我们也下山回宾馆了，一路上我的脚很疼，但是我们每个人却很快乐，大家都沉浸在幸福的喜悦中，能为有这次愉快的旅游而感到高兴。
