上海中考英语作文的分类

上海中考英语作文的分类

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上海中考英语作文的分类

上海中考英语作文的分类【一】

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第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题

As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对

The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句,承上启下

正文:

第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由

结论:

第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段,构成"总—分—总"结构

上海中考英语作文的分类【二】

垃圾分类,人人有责

地球是人类美好的家园,在宇宙里是一个非常美的蓝星,可是在地球里却有很多臭水沟、黑色浓烟……这都是怎么一回事呢?其实大部分都是垃圾填埋法和垃圾焚烧法造成的,让我细细道出它们俩办法的特点吧!

垃圾填埋法:简单地说也就是把垃圾放进人类事先挖好的大坑里,在用泥土稍微盖上去。可这种办法根本没用,除了可以不在生活中看见垃圾。可是在垃圾上面的土壤是寸草不生,不能在房子,也就是说这里是一个弹丸之地。经过人类多年来的改进,将衬垫隔离了土壤与地下水,将臭气从排气管排到高空,下雨造成的污水不会外泄,可这里还是不能造房子,所以这个办法怎么说都是不好的。

垃圾焚烧法:这种办法可以快速将垃圾“消失”,缺点有费电、有遗留物、黑色费烟……可这个方法受到了大多数政府的一致肯定,因为填埋法又破地又破财而且没什么用。垃圾分类主要用于垃圾焚烧法,第一步将可回收垃圾排去,剩下别的垃圾;第二步是将有害垃圾与其他垃圾这些干垃圾用普通火烧掉;第三步将厨余垃圾用电烧去。这样可以有效减少费电情况。

虽然垃圾分类很重要,但是减少垃圾“生产”更重要,所以人人都要担当起这个责任。

上海中考英语作文的分类【三】

1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚

写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。

2。 突出中心,详略得当

在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:

One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。

When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。

I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"

3。 用活语言,准确生动

记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。

原文:

One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。

修改后:

The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。

"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。

"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。

"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"

And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。

When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。

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