关于冬天的作文英语五年级【一】
冬天又来临了，理所当然，纷纷扬扬的雪花也随着天气的变化，从阴沉的天空中飘落了下来。散布在这个城市的每一个角落。
第二天早晨，一缕缕阳光从彤云密布的天空中撒落下来。一群穿着大棉衣、戴着大棉帽子，像一个个大面包似的孩子们嘻嘻哈哈地跑向了公园。
只见公园里静得出奇，连鸟叫声也没有。地上、光秃秃的树枝上、路灯上、到处都是一片白，像是给大地穿上了一件白色的大衣。就连冬夏常青的松树和柏树也被一层蓬松松的白雪覆盖了。
可不一会儿，孩子们的到来又显出了公园里的另一番景象。他们有的在堆雪人，有的在打雪仗，还有的想用照相机把这美丽的景色记录下来。瞧，站在雪人旁，头扎一个红蝴蝶结的那个小姑娘就是我，我和小伙伴们正在热情洋溢的为胖雪人“修补”身体。旁边的小伙伴也在满脸微笑地“锻炼身体”，头上那大滴大滴的汗珠也滴了下来。
也许同学们会说，冬天有什么好？寒风吹得人直发抖，还很容易生病，而春天则让人觉得阳光明媚，十分温暖。但是，这样的季节，难免会使人觉得太舒服了，一点也不想锻炼身体。冬天就不一样，天起越冷，你就越要运动，而正是这样，你的身体也会越来越好。
我是多么想再过一个大雪纷飞的冬季啊！我爱冬天的公园！
关于冬天的作文英语五年级【二】
冬季又来临了，理所当然，纷纷扬扬的雪花也随着季气的变化，从阴沉的季空中飘落了下来。散布在这个城市的每一个角落。
第二季早晨，一缕缕阳光从彤云密布的季空中撒落下来。一群穿着大棉衣、戴着大棉帽子，像一个个大面包似的孩子们嘻嘻哈哈地跑向了公园。
只见公园里静得出奇，连鸟叫声也没有。地上、光秃秃的树枝上、路灯上、到处都是一片白，像是给大地穿上了一件白色的大衣。就连冬夏常青的松树和柏树也被一层蓬松松的白雪覆盖了。
可不一会儿，孩子们的到来又显出了公园里的另一番景象。他们有的在堆雪人，有的在打雪仗，还有的想用照相机把这美丽的景色记录下来。瞧，站在雪人旁，头扎一个红蝴蝶结的那个小姑娘就是我。我和小伙伴们正在热情洋溢的为胖雪人“修补”身体。旁边的小伙伴也在满脸微笑地“锻炼身体”，头上那大滴大滴的汗珠也滴了下来。
也许同学们会说，冬季有什么好？寒风吹得人直发抖，还很容易生病。而春季则让人觉得阳光明媚，十分温暖。但是，这样的季节，难免会使人觉得太舒服了，一点也不想锻炼身体。冬季就不一样，季起越冷，你就越要运动，而正是这样，你的身体也会越来越好。
我是多么想再过一个大雪纷飞的冬季啊！我爱冬季的公园！
关于冬天的作文英语五年级【三】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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