请外教修改文章的英语作文【一】
我家养了一只小狗，名叫花花。它长着一身黑白相间的皮毛，两只耳朵尖尖的，小尾巴向上翘，四肢粗壮有力。
花花见到我，小尾巴摆个不停，光想让我给它好吃的。花花最高兴的时候，是家里来客人，特别是客人住下吃饭时，它会扒你的背，让你给它好吃的。
可家里一来生人，它立刻就翻脸。就算是有人从门外走过，它也叫个不停。
花花吃饱了，就去它的小窝里甜甜蜜蜜地睡上一觉。
这就是我家的花花，一只活泼可爱的小狗。
请外教修改文章的英语作文【二】
Dear Mr Pan:
It has been a long time since I wrote the last letter. Nowdays, people write letters less and less, instead, they make a call or send a SMS. However, it is still a good way for us to communicate with each other by sending a letter.
It's my honour to get the chance to write to you. "Approachable" is my first impression of you, because you always keeps smiling. Students may fear the teachers that are serious both in and out of class. Smile makes a teacher popular with his students, you are a teacher of this very kind.
You always arrive at the classroom ahead of any of the students, from which we could imply that you are a diligent man with regular habit. Before the class, you like to talk to us, at this very time, you are more a friend than a teacher. To be honest, I was surprised in the first class when I learned a teacher at your age could speak English in such a fluent way.(I didn't mean you are old, you're young at heart. Moreover, you know well how to keep your class attractive. You've got such an active mind that you can keep talking during the whole class without a pause. I always appreciated your ideas and enjoyed listening to you. In your class, I learned not only the writing skills but also the presentation skills as well as much knowledge of other areas. Thanks for your excellent teaching.
I've got some suggestions for you. It seems that we students have got few chances to participate in discussion during the class time. Most of the time, we are listening. Seldom did we express our own ideas. I suggest that teachers should interact with students more frequently in the class. Besides, I'd like to practice writing more, so would you please leave us more assignments?
Happy new year.
With every good wish.
Yours sincerely
Dali Wang
XXXX.X.X
请外教修改文章的英语作文【三】
添加符号先开了口：“观众们，请肃静一下，因为我，小主人才得以在原文中加入精美语段，因而得了一条又一条鱼鳞般的波浪线。所以我才有资格……”添加符号未说完，删减符号就***嘴：“去去去!你也有资格评国王?每次你肚子里的不少“虫子”(错别字不还是我纠正的吗?怎么一下子好了伤疤忘了疼了?要不是我，你的波浪线早就成了一个个电灯泡(问号了。而且，每次荣誉总加在你头上，而我呢?则是个无名英雄，天天如啄木鸟一般辛勤。请各位评评理，到底谁的'功劳大?”删减符号顿了顿说：“因此只有我当国王才是你们最理智的选择!”说完了，它得意地坐在了桌子中心，跷起了二郎腿，得意地瞟了添加符号一眼，便目中无人地哼起了小调。添加符号气得脸色都发青了，可就是拿它没办法，谁叫自己被它抓住了把柄呢?
“我看哪，你们就别争了，小鸡肚肠的人也能当国王，真是天大的笑话!其实，我才是国王的最佳人眩”对调符号慢悠悠地开了口：“你们一个个不是增加，就是删减，而“我”呢?最公平了，堪称修改符号上的天秤!不多不少，不加也不减。还有最重要的一点，那就是———”“是什么?”添加符号与删减符号的脸上挂满了问号，异口同声地问道。“嗯——号吊了吊两个符号的胃口，缓缓地开了口：“当然我有大将风度??
吵声惊醒了字典，字典揉揉红肿的眼睛，抬了抬深度的眼镜说：“你们各有各的用处，谁也不能少，而且只能在用得着你们的地方发挥作用。只有发挥了自己的长处，才能成为一个真正能***符号，为小主人做出贡献，使自己更加完美!”
听了字典的话，大家都鼓起了掌，从此，修改符号三兄弟不再说选国王这件事了，而是同心协力，将文章修改得更加美，老师看见了，禁不住竖起了大拇指。
瞧!这就是和睦的力量!
请外教修改文章的英语作文【四】
Dear Mrs. Nelson,
My name is Rick Schultz. I don’t know if you remember me, but I was in your English class at Westview High School in 20xx. I used to argue with you about the merits of science fiction as a form of literature. Recently I met several other former students of yours, Gerald Bryant, Ron Brown, Dawn Smith, and Dave Lee. Naturally we spent much of the time we were together talking about your class and how much we enjoyed it. So I decided to write you and find out how you are doing.
As I said, we all remember your class with great fondness. If you are still teaching, I hope your current students appreciate how fortunate they are.
Sincerely yours,
Rick Schultz
XXXX.X.X
请外教修改文章的英语作文【五】
在外教家门口，我敲门。本来想到是外教来开门，没想到是一个陌生女子出来开门，我问：“你是谁呀？”“我是外教的朋友。”我便大概知道了这位陌生女子的身份。
一位同学来了，也开门见山问她：“你是谁？”“我是外教的朋友。”一样的回答。我们初步确定那女子是外教的女朋友。
我们想法一致，就又去问她：“你是外教的女朋友吧？”“不是，不是。”女子连忙表示反对。“难道你不是女的吗？”她一言不发了。
难道外教要娶一位
难道真是这样吗？
请外教修改文章的英语作文【六】
星期二的英语课终于来了，我们互相猜着“大海冰激凌”的.样子。“大海冰激凌”推门走了进来，哇！！他高高的个子，黝黑的皮肤，寥寥无几的头发散在头上，强壮有力的大手来回挥着一进门就朝着我们微笑地说了一声：“Hello！”我们全班就开始哈哈大笑看上去蛮可爱的呦！
直到“大海冰激凌”高声说了几次“stop！”的时候，我们才停止了大笑声，全班安静了，静得掉一根针都能听得见。外教老师开始讲课了，他用洪亮的声音教我们读单词和句子，他读得非常顺利，我们跟着“大海冰激凌”一起高声读着，他一会儿教我们“apple”怎么读，一会儿又教我们“Whatcanyousee？”怎么念，他走到我跟前，让我读一读英语书上的一篇小短文，我站起来，流畅地读完了英语小短文，“大海冰激凌”还连夸我“verygood！”他还给了我一个毛绒玩具呢！我非常高兴。我时而随着他遨游英语的海洋。时而漫步英语的花园，我感到从未有过的惬意。我对英语产生了浓厚的兴趣。
时间过得真快，往日觉得漫长的英语课不知不觉就下课了，我们恋恋不舍地依偎在“大海冰激凌”的身边，我们盼着下一节英语课快点来到。
难以忘记那生动幽默的外教体验，幽默可爱的“大海冰激凌”，我们喜欢您！！
