小学生五年级英语作文课本【一】
??着课本游桂林五年级作文自从学了《桂林山水》这一课后，能去欣赏甲天下的桂林山水是我梦寐以求的事情。五一春假，我终于如愿以偿。我们彩虹假日小队一行11人和爸爸妈妈起去桂林亲子游。
当我真正来到桂林时，我被它深深地震惊了，桂林美得简直无法用语言来形容。那山，那水，跟课文中写得一模一样。特别是山，无处不是景。
当我们坐着竹筏欣赏百里漓江风光时，我更近距离地感觉到了这些山的诱人魅力。漓江上最先看到的景点是鲤鱼挂壁，真像一条大鲤鱼挂在山壁上。漓江上，很多竹筏来来往往，打破了江面的平静。我们几个调皮的孩子兴奋地玩起了水槍，直到水警在湖面上巡逻，才让我们安静下来。坐在竹筏上，“水绕青山山绕水，山浮绿水水浮山”的美景让我感觉我就在仙境中，真是好惬意。不一会儿，我们来到了九马画山，那是一座奇特的山，石壁上好像隐隐约约有各种姿态的马的图案，不仅具有欣赏价值，还 需要眼力才能找到九匹马。我们一家人目不转睛地盯着，可怎么数，就只数出了五匹，我们还 在数，竹筏已经驶过了九马画山。
在导游的带领下，我们游览了桂林最著名的溶洞——银子岩。银子岩位于桂林市荔浦县，距桂林市有85公里。它属于层式溶洞，分为下洞、大厅和上洞三大部分，洞里聚集了不同地质年代发育生长的形状各异的钟乳石，特色景点有数十个，以音乐石屏、广寒深宫、雪山飞瀑“三绝”和佛祖论经、独柱擎天、混元珍珠“三宝”为代表，真是惟妙惟肖。我觉得最有趣的是“佛祖论经”，真像一位佛祖坐在高处兴致勃勃地讲着什么，很多神仙聚集在下面认真地听着。我们跟着导游往前走，导游生动的讲解，让我一次又一次神游于一个个动人的神话故事。在导游的指点下，我似乎能清楚地看到四大天王手中的神伞，得意洋洋的\'孙悟空，日夜守神伞的雄狮。使我一次又一次地感慨于大自然的鬼斧神工。
我们在导游的安排下，还 游览了千年大榕树、桂林城徽“象鼻山”和充满异国情调的一陽一朔西街，欣赏了世界上最大的山水实景文艺表演“印象刘三姐”，参观了世界民俗文化奇观60甲子摩崖石刻。
春假一晃就过去了，可我还 意犹未尽。美丽神奇、充满梦幻的桂林，等着我，下次我一定来细细游赏。
小学生五年级英语作文课本【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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小学生五年级英语作文课本【三】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的\'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
