写作文体英语如何表达【一】
三十三个小时，第一次读完一部科幻小说，雨果奖作品《三体》是一部科幻鸿篇巨作，整个过程充满了惊叹和深深的思考，在刘慈欣宏大的宇宙观中为读者总结了人类文明进程中的历史、政治、哲学、宗教、天文、数学、物理、计算机、人工智能等等领域的精髓。
把这本书看完了，实话实说牺牲了很多脑细胞，真是让我把所学的工科，历史，哲学都重学一遍！在此感谢度娘！
文中最喜欢这句话：给岁月以文明，而不是给文明以岁月；
自己的感悟：思想僵局和固有思维是科学创新的第一阻力；
1、当面对三体智子封锁的，很多科学家认为基础物理不可能有任何的发展，等待人类的终将是三体打击，没有任何反抗的机会，他们选择了自***；突破思想僵局和固有思维，才有黑暗森林法则的提出；
2、当人类制造了15％光速飞船时，认为自己有了对抗三体文明的法宝，不求进步，殊不知三体文明已经有了制造光速飞行器能力，最后等待人类只有毁灭；
3、当人类知道两次外来文明打击都是光速粒子时，面对人类文明的三条路，人类抛弃了黑域计划和光速飞船计划，选择了掩体计划，认为掩体能抵挡光速粒子打击，这种思想僵局和固有思维使人类做出了错误的判断，当更高文明二维打击出现时，整个银河系只能等待灭亡。
写作文体英语如何表达【二】
How to prevent the H7N9?
As is well known,the A flu is spreading throught our country. However, if we negnect it, the deadly H7N9 may cause more infectors,or even more deaths. So what is the most important is that we should take some effective measures to prevent it.They can be listed as follows.
Firstly,it is necessary for you to realize the Avian flu can be prevented if you develop good living habits. For example,you shouldn’t forget to wash your hands before meals.Besides,don’t spit everywhere and try to cover your mouth or nose with paper or hankerchiefs when you have to cough or sneeze.What’s more, remember to wear the mouth-cover if you have to go to the public places, such as the crowded cinemas,supermarkets, buses,where the A flu may spread easily.
Secondly,of course, taking exercise more often and taking good sleep to build your body are wise choices for you to reduce the risk of being infected.
Last but not the least, if you are unlucky to be infected with the slight flu cold, try to stay at home,and take some medicine. Do pay attention to your daily body temperature. If you have a high fever, go to the hospital without delay for further treatment. Make sure you are not expected to come back to school before the cold or flu is cured.
Only by doing like this can you prevent or defeat the A flu in the end.
写作文体英语如何表达【三】
前前后后大概花了两个多月了，看到三体的第三部，真的很震撼，笔者宏大的思维和优美的文笔，每次都深深地吸引着我，让我不能自拔地阅读下去。
还是像我在看这本书时写的一些粗浅的感想看法以及以往读笔者别的科幻作品一样，我始终认为，笔者的科幻，最终落脚点是人性，只是我最意外的是，笔者的文字功底竟然是这么深厚，在科幻的另一面，笔者给我展示的优美的文字，恢宏的宇宙，不可思议的微观世界，那些文字，像精灵一样在跳跃和组合，所展示的世界和画面确实那样让人有时充满神往，有时充满畏惧，有时却又无奈至极。
三体所描写的是地球文明遇到来自三体文明威胁后，人类世界和三体世界所发生的事件，以人类的发展为主线，以几个节点人物的生平事迹串联起整个小说，文章以宇宙之大，微观世界之小，在一个看似矛盾不可调和的两个世界中游刃有余地把握着节奏，需要脑补的不仅是天文物理，还有微观物理，放眼整个小说，放眼整个宇宙，这本来就是一个统一体。在我们认知的世界中，太阳系，银河系已经很大了，但是在整个宇宙，确实如此渺小，这就像在时间轴线上，人类文明的五千年看起来很漫长，但是，放眼整个空间，却又如此渺小。
看三体，我体验的是笔者恢宏大气的构架，欣赏的是笔者精灵般优美的文字，体会的是整个小说背后的人性
写作文体英语如何表达【四】
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先，提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段：提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段：正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段：摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次，提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性，连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity：段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛，也不可太具体，做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明，另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence：关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰，层层展开。
完整性(completeness：以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头，这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次，提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型：It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单，注意练习并接句的使用，会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as，如：
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头，句式简单，我们可以通过把since提前改变句式，如：
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后，提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法：millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论，辩论”的意思，而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.，相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略：使用最近所学的单词，如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后，我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文，以供参考：
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
