好的文章动静结合、张弛有度有节奏感。句式也是一样,要有变化性,这不仅能使文章更生动,也是语言表达方式的需要和表达能力的体现。句式的`变化,主要是要注意两点:
● 不要从头至尾使用一种句型。
● 长短句结合。
由于语言功底的欠缺和惯用思维,很多人写的文章一种句式到头,如:
I think …
I hope…
He does it.
He will take it
这样的文章虽然意思表达出来了,却显得呆板,欠生动。解决的办法是:
1.间或使用主从复句。
Because he is very much determined, he will carry it out this time. (原因
比较:He is very much determined. He will carry it out this time.
2.使用分词结构句。
The weather being fine, a large number of people went sightseeing.
比较:The weather is fine. A large number of people went sightseeing.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.
比较:Africa is the second largest continent. Its size is about three times that of China.
3.使用不定式句。
To be or not to be, that is a question. (莎士比亚
To study or not to study, that is much different.(引申
To do it well, you must plan it well.
比较:You want to do it well. And you must plan it well.
4.倒装句
Only when we fully recognize its importance can we have control of its essence.
比较:After we fully recognize its importance, we can have control of its essence.
No sooner had he arrived home than it began to rain.
比较:He arrived home. And it began to rain.
5.失衡句
whether or not he will come is still unknown to all the people present.
比较:No one present knows whether he will come or not.
That he has done it all by himself is known to everyone.
比较:Everyone knows that he has done it all by himself.
当然,句子并不是越长越好,也不是越复杂水平就越高。凡事皆有度。太多长句的堆砌让人觉得是买弄。有时侯,一个短小精辟的句子可以起到画龙点睛的作用。特别是在文末段尾。比如:
●As a creature, every one knows.
●Actions speak louder than words.
●Practice makes perfect.
补充原文的读书笔记,是在读完原书或文章之后,感到有不满足的地方进行补充。需要注意的是补充原文不是随意地加以补充,而是要围绕中心思想加以引申或发挥。
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进了迎泽公园的大门,往右走绕过海底世界,就来到历史悠久的迎泽湖。静静的湖面就像一面镜子,湖上有个中心岛,如果竖着看,踮起脚尖也是很难看到头。这个悠久的迎泽湖占总体面积的三分之一。在湖的两侧长满了郁郁苍苍的绿树、绿草,在湖的中心岛上长满绿树。那些绿树就像挺拔的士兵一样站在那里,如果上了中心岛,站在那里,一阵风拂过,就会使人神清气爽。
看完迎泽湖,就来到了藏经楼脚下。抬头一看,一座八角宝塔的三层建筑耸立在陆地上,棕色的木头在阳光下闪闪发光。那就是藏经楼。下面的一排排鲜艳的花朵,都在捧着它。走上藏经楼,站在上面往下望。迎泽公园的景色大半收入眼底。可看的最清楚的就是儿童娱乐场地,那里有:碰碰车、摩天轮、激流勇进……各式各样,说也说不清。
迎泽公园到处有美丽的景色,说也说不尽,希望你有机会细细游赏。
札记,是读书时把摘记的要点和心得结合起来写成的。这种札记的形式是灵活多样的。可长可短。
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