这是一幅极具讽刺效果的漫画。图画的主要内容是在一片茂密的森林里,有一个伐木人,他手持一把板斧,狠狠地向一棵树砍去。有一只啄木鸟落到他的肩上,用愤怒的眼神望着他,用尖尖的嘴巴去啄他的脑袋,一边啄一边想:“这段木头里一定有虫……”在啄木鸟看来,乱砍树木的人的脑袋分明是一块长了虫的木头。
看完这幅画,我们笑完之后会觉得很可悲,不仅是为这个伐木人可悲,也为整个人类可悲。森林是地球是最重要的资源之一。它能够调节气候,保持水土;减轻早涝、风沙等自然灾害。可以这样说,有了森林,地球才能始终散发出勃勃的生机。但是人类却经常肆无忌惮地破坏头顶上的这把“太阳伞”,就像漫画中伐木人的所作所为一样。
伐木人脑袋中的“虫”是贪婪虫,是自私虫。这种“虫”破坏了太多人的脑袋。看吧,乱砍乱伐,大自然的生态平衡遭到到了破坏,乱捕乱***,人类的很多朋友惨遭灭绝。我仿佛看到,沙丘吞噬了良田,洪水冲毁了家园。真不敢想象,我们如果继续下去,这个世界将会是怎样的情景。
地球是我们的母亲,动植物是我们的朋友。所以像爱我们自己的母亲一样爱地球吧!像爱我们的朋友一样的动植物和睦相处吧!赶紧行动起来救救地球母亲,救救我们自己。
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第1段:提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
正文:
第2段:Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法
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第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚
写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心,详略得当
在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:
One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言,准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文:
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
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The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。
"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
最近我看到了一则幽默的漫画,而正是这幅漫画,启发了我很多,现在地球面临生态危机,有人还在无情的砍伐树木,于是,便有很多人呼吁人们保护地球。
这则漫画讲了:一名伐木工手拿斧子,嘴刁烟卷,正起劲的一下一下的砍伐着身旁的树木。这是,一只啄木鸟飞了过来,停在了伐木工的脖子上,摇了一下脑袋,便啄起了伐木工的木头脑袋,便啄还边想:“这段木头里一定有虫!”
这漫画形象的讽刺了不保护环境的举止,与作者呼吁保护环境成鲜明的对比。伐木工脑袋的形状可以充分的表现出伐木工不开窍。这则漫画主要中心思想是让人们保护好身边的一草一木,早晨人们晨练时将腿搭在树上;小孩子随手拔下一朵花,在树上刻下字体……这些事例都要给人一些严厉的教训。火山爆发、地震、洪水……这些都是大自然给予人类血的教训,它们是因为人类无知或有意的想法才形成的。所以,今天的我们要保护好地球,保护好我们自己!
因为它们,让我们的生活多姿多彩;因为它们,让孩子们天真的笑容时刻挂在脸上;因为她,才有了这个世界,才有了我们。我们的母亲早已白发苍苍、伤痕累累。这时,我们才应该尽自己地球子女的身份,去保护好地球,爱护好她的每一寸角落。将地球——可爱的母亲,她的躯体,她的灵魂守护好。保护环境,人人有责!
现在社会上,大家都知道“环保”,但是,没有多少人真正的做到环保呢?看,周月泉的一幅漫画就揭露了人类的险恶,讽刺了这所谓的“环保”。
这幅漫画清晰的向我们展现一位“木头脑袋”的所作所为:一位贪婪的伐木工人在悠闲地抽着烟,手里的斧头一刻不停地挥舞着,一只啄木鸟愤怒地飞到了伐木工人的肩上,用它那尖尖的钩子嘴,啄他那木头似的脑袋,说:“这段木头里一定有虫……”
不知道这幅漫画的含义大家看懂了没有,那个人脑袋的确有“虫”,不过此虫非彼虫,这个“虫”指的是破坏生态平衡的心虫,怪不得啄木鸟说他“脑袋有虫”。不过在我们平时的生活中,这类“脑袋有虫”的人数不胜数,可啄木鸟却是寥寥无几。
平时,不少同学的草稿子只滑了几笔就扔掉了;洗手时,水开得很大,洗完手,也不关水就走了,任凭谁哗哗的流淌,要知道,在干旱地区,水是多么宝贵啊!平时,随手将垃圾扔在地上,既影响环境,又影响美观……在如此触目惊心的事实面前,人类似乎没有觉醒,一意孤行,人们脑袋里那条贪婪的虫子越长越大,双眼已经被***蒙蔽了。
朋友,别再继续破坏环境了,别再为了利益不择手段,别再让地球衰老,别再做漫画中的“木头人”了。任何降临在大地上的事,终究会降临在人类身上。我们和大自然是密不可分的,如果破坏地球,那么到头来,承当这一切苦难只会是我们——人类。所以,善待地球就是善待自己。
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