How to prevent the H7N9?
As is well known,the A flu is spreading throught our country. However, if we negnect it, the deadly H7N9 may cause more infectors,or even more deaths. So what is the most important is that we should take some effective measures to prevent it.They can be listed as follows.
Firstly,it is necessary for you to realize the Avian flu can be prevented if you develop good living habits. For example,you shouldn’t forget to wash your hands before meals.Besides,don’t spit everywhere and try to cover your mouth or nose with paper or hankerchiefs when you have to cough or sneeze.What’s more, remember to wear the mouth-cover if you have to go to the public places, such as the crowded cinemas,supermarkets, buses,where the A flu may spread easily.
Secondly,of course, taking exercise more often and taking good sleep to build your body are wise choices for you to reduce the risk of being infected.
Last but not the least, if you are unlucky to be infected with the slight flu cold, try to stay at home,and take some medicine. Do pay attention to your daily body temperature. If you have a high fever, go to the hospital without delay for further treatment. Make sure you are not expected to come back to school before the cold or flu is cured.
Only by doing like this can you prevent or defeat the A flu in the end.
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
100多年前狄更斯曾经说过,这是一个最好的时代,也是一个最坏的时代。而在今天,在这个互联网的时代。互联网把我们的世界变成了一个地球村,把世界各地的人们都联系在了一起。
也许有人说互联网带来的好处是有,但是弊端也很多。在互联网时代,你在网上聊天,但是你永远不知道对面和你聊天的是人还是狗,虽然这是个玩笑话,但也明显地昭示出这互联网时代的弊端。欺骗,虚假,在这个互联网信息满天飞的时代,已不少见。网络暴力,也存在于日渐发展的互联网中。可以说在某种程度,互联网使人们的联系越加方便,但却把人们的心给拉远了。
在中国,人们最常用的一个社交软件,便是微信,在微信中朋友亲人们经常畅所欲言,而到了真正见面的时候却觉得无话可说,这便是互联网时代的一个弊端。
但互联网时代也给人们带来了诸多好处。有时甚至能起到挽救生命的作用。比如当一个人,在生命垂危之时直播自***,而网友们迅速报警,联系警方,挽救了这个人垂危的生命,再比如,阿里巴巴集团与公安局联合开发的一款软件,团圆,致力于寻找丢失孩子,通过网友们的爱心接力及精准的GPS定位实现了迅速找到丢失孩子的目标。迄今为止。在这款团圆软件中。已经促成了无数家庭的团圆,互联网带来的诸如此类的好处比比皆是。
这是一个最好的时代,也是一个最坏的时代,但是,互联网在其中起到的作用是好是坏,最终还是掌握在人们手中。
虽然我有时也会在电脑上玩游戏,但是,我会正确利用网络。网络有利处,也有害处,所以,我们要小心谨慎地使用网络。
某个星期六,我遇到了不会做的语文题目。过了一会儿,我把全部的作业都做好了,除了不会做的。收拾完东西之后,我来到楼下,问妈妈可不可以开电脑上网查一下不会做的题目,妈妈竟然爽快地答应了。
时间如利箭一般流失,我已经拿着要查的题目来到了电脑桌前。我像被兔子附身了,开电脑的速度比以前快多了。打开电脑之后,我急忙点击“连接”,然后打开“百度”,认认真真地查起来。没过几分钟,几道难题便被网络一一“消灭”了,我还记了记,以防下次碰到这种题目还得上网查,因为毕竟电脑辐射很大,对人的眼睛不好。
因为我的好奇心很强,所以,遇到什么不懂的事就会问,问不出来就会开电脑通过网络去查找。有一次,我看见一些蚂蚁成群结队地爬来爬去,而且每只蚂蚁身上都有一块十分小的食物。我看见了,连忙拿来一盆水泼它们,因为我向来对蚂蚁不仅没有好感而且颇为反感。没想到,过了一会儿蚂蚁队伍便恢复了原貌。真是怪了!我心里想:蚂蚁为什么这么团结?难道是因为它们有首领吗?我想啊想,始终没有想出来。这时候,我突然想起了电脑。经过妈妈的同意之后,我来到了电脑前。终于,我查到了资料,解开了心中的疑惑。
虽然网络也不是十全十美的东西,但是,如同世上万物一样,使用在人,在不同的人手里会有不同的结果。因此,我常常对自己说:我要让网络为我服务,但我不要让这张网网住自己!
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