作文句式变化【一】
改写括号中的内容，使其句式整齐，韵律和谐。
醒来眼里布满了泪水；（大病之后我疲乏，依依不舍的离别，旅行途中的辛苦，到家后可能的恐怖的事实，）都到心上来了。
分析：这是一道典型的语言运用试题，在近年中考语文试卷中经常出现。这类句式修改，一般要求句式整齐，语意连贯，可调整个别词语和句子顺序，但不得改变句子愿意。
句式整齐，语意连贯，其实就是修改为整句。整句是什么呢？整句就是把结构相同或者相似的一组句子整齐地排列在一起。整句形式整齐，音律和谐，气势贯通，能够把内容表达得鲜明集中，有利于突出作者的思想感情。
本题的实质是将原句修改为排比句（排比句就是整句的一种），但在题目中并没有明确指出，意在降低试题难度，只要句式基本整齐，意思和原句差不多都能得分。
查看本题中要修改的部分，我们很容易发现，出现了“大病之后”、“旅行途中”、“到家后”三个时间状语，只要第二个短语“依依不舍的离别”可以修改为时间状语修饰，句式基本上就整齐了。“依依不舍的离别”就是离别的时候依依不舍呀，“离别时”不就是一个时间状语吗？
看看，这样修改后就变成了“大病之后我疲乏，离别时的依依不舍，旅行途中的'辛苦，到家后可能的恐怖的事实”
是否还需要进一步修改呢？同学们在修改中也要试着读一读，看看还有不有别扭的地方。我们很快就可以发现，第一个短语和后三个是不同的。我们只需要把第一个短语也修改成的字短语修改的偏正短语就行了。
“大病之后的疲乏，离别时的依依不舍，旅行途中的辛苦，到家后可能的恐怖的事实”
这已经非常不错了，当然，你还可以进一步美化。
“大病后的疲乏，离别时的不舍，旅行途中的辛苦，到家后可能的恐怖的事实”
前三句字格式、字数完全相同了，最后一句是不能改为“到家后的事实”的，也不能改为“到家后的恐怖事实”，因为去掉“可能”，就改变原句的原意了。
作文句式变化【二】
作文句式变化【三】
1.If all those factors are contemplated, the advantages of... carry more weight than those of... From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that...
2.No doubt that we can’t control the problem... unless there is an immediate action... The chance is very good that...
3.From what I have mentioned above, we can see clearly that violence on TV has (a great influence on young adults’ behavior. Therefore, one can naturally reach this conclusion that...
4.In conclusion, .../In short, .../All in all, .../By and large .../To summarize...
5.In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of... Only in this way can... in the future.
6.Taking into account all these factors offered above, we may carefully reach the conclusion that...
7.From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that...
8.This fact provides strong reason for thinking that..., thus... is actually preferable to ... rather than the reverse.
9.Judging from all given evidences, we can safely come to the decision that...
10.With the two opposite opinions discussed above, it is clear that neither of them is reasonable. As for ...I think, the latter... .If, on the other hand, the former...
作文句式变化【四】
1.So far as I know, such a phenomenon comes up as a result of the following facts. To begin with, ... And more than that, ... Last but not the least,...
2.So far as I know, some factors that contribute to the above tendency may be summarized as below. First of all, ... What’s more, ... The last one is ...
3.Some people favor... as..., and they argue that.. It seems to be so at the first sight, however, on reflection, we are convinced that it is just another coin with two sides. Firstly, ... is, of course, valid as far as it goes, and we can benefit from this point... However, we must be fully aware of its potential danger, taking into account the risk resulting from...
4.As far as I know, the above tendency may inevitably give rise to some effects as follows.
5Considering the social atmosphere today, it is not a time to... It is high time to... The fact that... is what should be emphasized. Those who object to this idea forget a universal truth that... As I remember... In addition... An instance that accompanies this reason is that... On the other hand, ... Finally...
6.There are several significant reasons as follows. Firstly, ... Secondly, ... Thirdly,...
7.It would be possible to think that ..., but it would be more foolish to claim that..., and it would be more foolish to believe that...
8.We all know that... plays an important role in... However, many people believe that... depends on two aspects of... The first is... The second is... A further argument is...
9.In many cases, however, there is something beyond our expectation: yet we can compare and contrast all the relevant factors and find a way out /in/ between.
10.There are, I think, at least two possible ways to cope with it. The first way to tackle it is to appeal to the authorities to take drastic measures to (do... The other policy that is worth adopting
is to work out new regulations to (do ... Only in this way can we succeed in dealing with the problem in the near future.
