临考的前两天,我去参加了考前冲刺班,看着一道道难题,我不禁觉得有些沮丧:考试如果考这么难的题,我做不出来可怎么办啊……妈妈和爸爸的态度截然不同:妈妈是那个跟我一块着急的人,是那个火急火燎的上网找题并努力钻研讲给我听的人;而爸爸则是那个若无其事的人,那个劝我不要熬夜复习,早点睡觉的人。爸爸认为:“功夫要提前下,都临考前一天了,应该多休息会儿,考试时保持一个好状态更重要。”都这关键时刻了,我该听谁的呢?我想了想:“还没开始考试呢,犯不着今天就那么沮丧,关键是明天好好考。”于是,我看了几道题,洗了洗就早早休息了。
紧张兴奋的一天终于来临了,我站在考生中间,跟着他们“***气腾腾”地冲向考场。“镇定,镇定……”我努力地让自己狂跳的的心平静下来,可还是七上八下的。 “叮——”这铃声不知怎么大得吓人,考试开始了。第一场考的是语文,可是我这个马大哈在第一关就掉了链子。试后,同学们议论纷纷,我也过去旁听,当我的好朋友问我:“你看试卷上的答题区是不是印歪了?”的'时候,我立刻就懵了。选择题没写在答题卡上!哎呀呀,那选择题要是很难就算了,可是那偏偏是几道挺简单的题!要知道,选择题可是占二十分的啊!完蛋了完蛋了,刚刚建立起来的自信心又被击垮了。天性乐观的我转念一想,不行,这可是关键的时候,不能丧失信心。语文已经白白丢了很多分了,数学一定要好好考,一定要把那二十分给捡回来!我又重新找回了自信和勇气,我要把刚刚的打击和压力化为下一轮“战役”的动力。
“数学大战”开始了,开始还算一路顺风,可是当我一路过关斩将“***”到最后一关时,一道行程问题拦住了我。我都想到“山穷水尽”了也没想出来到底该怎么解决它,万般无奈下只写了一个“解:设…”交卷的铃声就响了,我只能乖乖地“缴枪”停笔。
“死伤惨重”之后,等待我们的是“敌军”的王牌部队“英语大将”------据说是“小外”最难的考试。一道道让人头晕目眩的排序题之后,是凶猛的“阅读大军”,最艰难的一场战役开始了!好在我是有备而来,平时课外班的大量练习练就了良好的基本功。兵来将挡,水来土掩,没有把握的题靠语感“蒙”,呵呵!精神高度紧张中时间过得飞快,考试结束的铃声响了,我恰好完成最后一道题。最后一仗好像打得最漂亮,走下考场的感觉难以言表。
直到听到了进入面试的消息后,我的心情才放松下来。所以面试就轻松许多了,我终于如愿以偿拿到了心仪已久的“小外”的入学通知书。
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
“儿子,不要再看啦,看这么长时间,眼睛很快就会近视的`!”爸爸换完衣服,又苦口婆心地劝我。但我还是克制不住动画片的诱惑继续看,他又提醒了我第三遍、第四遍,我依然置之不理。爸爸说到第五遍时,声音渐渐变得严厉起来:“我最后再提醒你一遍!我现在数到三,如果你还看,我就把它砸了!”
我以为爸爸只是在吓唬我,继续装作没听见。不料,爸爸数到“三”,见我还没有停下来的意思,二话不说,劈手夺过我手中的电脑,走到阳台拿出锤子,几锤子下去电脑就没声了。我顿时惊呆了,爸爸怎么能这么做?那可是我最心爱的东西!我含着眼泪狠狠瞪了一眼爸爸,跳下沙发,带着满腔愤怒和不解离开了客厅,回到自己的房间,“砰”地摔上了门,并上了锁。
大哭了一场后,我渐渐平静了下来,慢慢意识到爸爸确实是为我好,自己确实做得不对。正在这时,爸爸敲门进来向我道歉,说他不应该发那么大的火。我们父子俩总算是和好了。
人人都会有坏情绪,控制不好,坏情绪还会转化成暴怒。这个时候,就需要我们用足够的理智去面对它,让自己尽快冷静下来,想方设法赶跑坏情绪。现在,我们一家人约法三章,今后再遇到坏情绪,大家要先想一想自己做得对不对,冷静下来后再该讲理的讲理,该认错的认错。你别说,这办法还挺管用的,你也不妨试一试啊!
情绪我们人人都有,或好的,或坏的,或积极的,或消极的。情绪引导我们做出判断,从而决定我们的行为。当个人行动与思维方式被个人的强烈情绪所触动时,我们的思考方式,行为方式会完全按照此类情绪的引导不断改变。
著名学者尼尔?唐纳?沃许在自己的著作《与神对话》中曾经如此表达自己的见解:“每一个灵魂都必须做出抉择而且正在抉择自己的命运。”可以说,这一抉择过程直接体现于个人情绪选择上:有些人在情绪中感受到了生命的'美丽,并将美丽带到了世界上的每一个角落;有些人在情绪中受到了鼓舞,并将这种鼓舞带给了所有与自己交流的人;有些人则在现实的打击中不断沉沦,让自己的人生充满了黑暗,也让他人唯恐避之不及。你要选择成为哪种人,你需要哪种力量来左右自己的人生,决定权在你。因此意识到情绪的力量才是掌控自己人生的关键。
一个拥有极高情绪控制能力的人,肯定具备极高的个人修养,而这本《哈佛情绪控制课》正是我们达到自我控制情绪的引路之书。书中提到的那些有趣的情绪控制故事和提高情绪控制力的方法让人读起来如醍醐灌顶。
情绪的力量可以帮助你对自我理想进行激励,更能帮助你克服创伤,我们可以对自己的情绪进行控制,让它来引导我们创造一种自己渴望的生活,从而使自己的命运得到改变。一旦你对情绪有了一个较为透彻的理解,学会在生活的各个方面运用自我情绪控制力,你将不会再继续听任各种消极情绪的摆布,可以从容地调动自我积极情绪,并最终实现自己美好的人生。
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