上海的变化作文五年级英语【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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上海的变化作文五年级英语【二】
刚进大门，我们就先看见一座大钟塔，钟面上印着米奇的图像，米奇的两只手竟就是时针和分针，米奇好像就是这个乐园里时间的守护者。
我们来到了神秘的“米奇大街”。仔细观察，我发现建筑的每一层都会比下面一层矮一些。因此才会产生一种奇妙的感觉：我变高了！
走完“米奇大街”，经过“迪士尼小镇”，我们到了“明日世界”。“明日世界”里有在空中飞旋的喷气背包飞行器，有充满互动的巴斯光年星际营救，还有《星球大战》系列的精彩电影片段欣赏……
但我还是玩了全球迪士尼乐园中速度最快的过山车之一——创极速光轮。我排了两个小时的队，终于轮到了我。门打开了，里面灯火一片，赛车沿着轨道停了下来，我坐了上去。当广播发出“三、二、一、零”的`声音后。赛车“咻”的一声飞驰起来，顿时眼前一片漆黑，风从我耳边“呼呼”地吹过，速度快得我都无法呼吸。赛车一会儿快，一会儿慢；一会儿向左，一会儿向右；一会儿往上，一会儿往下，翻来覆去地左揺右晃。过程中，不断有人发出刺耳的尖叫。我却轻松极了，感觉就像在驾驶着一辆属于自己的赛车。
出了“明日世界”，我又去玩了“梦幻世界”、“奇想花园”、“宝藏湾”和“探险岛”里的各种游乐项目。
到了晚上八点半，我们还观看了城堡上精彩的烟花表演，我觉得自己收获满满。
上海迪士尼乐园之旅真是一次充满创造力、冒险精神和快乐的旅途！
上海的变化作文五年级英语【三】
这个暑假最使我开心的要数去上海的一日游了！
怀着喜悦的心情，踏上了上海一日游的汽车，行进的路上，我好奇地想：上海会是怎么样的呢，我们去的地方好玩吗？抱着这种好奇的想法，过了两个半小时后，我们来到了上海
“啊，上海真大呀！”我不禁脱口说道。我们首先来到上海老街城隍庙。城隍庙有许多小商品店，小商品店的东西琳琅满目，个个物廉价美，怪不得人都挤在商店里，好像不要钱似的。走道上人流如潮、人山人海。听说上海城隍庙的小吃很有名，果然名不虚传，我尝了红豆牛奶沙冰，牛奶冰加上红豆的点缀，那叫一个字：棒！
接下来，我们来到了上海人工滑雪场，一股凛冽的寒风迎面而来，只见有的人在堆雪人，他堆的雪人真漂亮呀，炯炯有神的眼睛清澈如水，小巧的鼻子恰到好处地点缀了那可爱的脸庞；有的在打雪仗，她们右手握着一大堆的雪，左手拿住滑杆，我想可能是用来凿雪的吧。慢慢地我掌握了滑雪的技巧，我想挑战一下自己，便乘着电梯来到了第2层滑雪，作好了心理准备，就往下滑，我觉得自己好像在高速公路上行驶的失控了的汽车一样，想停也停不下来，只听“砰”的一声我摔在雪地上，摔了个四脚朝天，没有办法，我只好摘下滑雪板，慢慢地走了下去。
时间过得真快，已经到了黄昏，由于时间问题，我只好依依不舍地离开了上海，踏上了回家的路程。
上海的一日游点缀了我的暑假，使我的假期更加快乐和充实了！
上海的变化作文五年级英语【四】
今天是周六，我们先搭爸爸的车来到上海同济大学的校园，在那里下了车，然后我和妈妈来到地铁站，开始了我们今天的征程。
我们先坐10号线来到了上海博物馆，上海博物馆门口真是人山人海呀，队伍排得很长很长，绕了很多个弯，我们也没找到排队的起点。我和妈妈不约而同地想，这要排到什么时候呀，排到天黑也排不到吧！
于是，我们妈妈来到了附近的上海工人文化宫，正好工人文化宫正好在举行邮票展，我们看到了很多漂亮的邮票。原来不仅要邮票漂亮，粘贴方式也是非常重要的，还有邮寄的地址。同一套邮票，不同的人，可以收藏出不同的风格。
接着，我们逛了书城，看了电影，买了小吃，最后来到南京路坐我最喜欢的小火车。好不容易挤上了小火车，你别说，风景还真不错！炎热的夏天，坐在小火车上享受着习习凉风，看看南京路的人山人海，还真是一种享受。这边不像太仓，这边有各色的人种，有黑人，白人，最多的是我们黄种人，还有浅咖啡色的人…。穿着的衣服更是各不相同，有红色的，有黄色的，有绿色的，有黑色的，有白的的，有橙色的……随着小火车的行驶，到处都是靓丽的风景线。
小火车的终点是上海外滩，外滩的人更是摩肩接踵。于是，我们选择在外滩坐上轮渡，享受下黄浦江上的风景，逃离会儿人声鼎沸。
上海真是个繁华的大都市，这一天我逛了好多地方，买了很多好吃的，过得很开心，很快乐，当然也很充实！
上海的变化作文五年级英语【五】
以前的马路都是坑坑洼洼的，一到下雨天，如果在马路上走，过往的车辆就会溅到你一身的.泥点子，你会很生气。姥姥家屋后有一条小溪。一到雨季，就会洪水泛滥，有时还会把姥姥菜园的一角给冲走，爸爸妈妈很是担心，可有无计可施。这些年发生了日新月异的变化，家家都住上了宽敞明亮的砖瓦房，室内还增添进了很多的家用电器。
有的人还在县城里买了楼房，有的人还开上了小轿车，人人都配上了手机，沟通起来真是便捷。现在的马路是又宽又长，铺上了柏油，人们不再为雨天赶路会溅到一身泥点而发愁了。姥姥家屋后的小溪两旁，村里给砌上了堤坝，雨季时，爸妈也不再担心洪水的到来了。这几年，在党的好政策下，农民种地不用花钱，而且还会得到一定的补贴。四周建起了铁矿、纺织厂、养殖场。农民不用外出打工，在家里也可以上班挣钱了。人们的收入稳定，真可以说得上是安居乐业。这就是家乡的变化，我希望家乡会变得更好，更漂亮！
