Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
谷穗、齿轮、金色的五星,簇拥着国徽下法律的圣洁。法在我心中威严而又炙热!在日常生活中我们有很多地方要用到法律,法律在我们生活中扮演着不可缺少的角色。“勿以恶小而为之”,这是三国时刘备告勉自己儿子刘禅的一句话,这位古代政治家的`至理虽然历经1700多年,但它的哲理光芒永存。是啊,“小恶不制,必然发展”,看看社会中那些犯罪分子哪个不是从“小恶”开始一步一步走向犯罪道路的呢?就如一只小白蚁在船板上咬一个小洞是很不起眼的,但如果任其发展起来,船就会沉没。我们少年预防犯罪要从预防不良行为的发生做起。
小时候,爸爸妈妈就在我心里播下了“法”的种子他们告诉我,要遵守交通规则,不要闯红灯;和小朋友一起玩时,他们告诉我不能欺负小朋友,要和小朋友互相谦让,一起玩。及至上学以后学校的老师们和爸爸妈妈一样,也告诉我们应该遵守学校的规章制度,学校还请来了很多警察叔叔阿姨给我们讲违法乱纪的危害,用活生生的例子教育我们要遵纪守法。在他们的教育下,我知道了:做坏事不仅仅是要被警察抓起来这么简单,更重要的是做了坏事会给别人也会给自己带来不方便,会影响别人的生活,也会改变自己的生活,让自己走向深渊。
时间一天天过去,我也在慢慢长大。在电视报道上,在报刊杂志上,甚至就在我自己的生活中,我看到了,也深深地意识到:遵纪守法应该从小做起,我们应该从小学会在法律的制约下生活。否则,很可能会触犯法律,而如果触犯了法律,最终后悔的会是自己!法律就是为了保障我们每个人正常自由地生活而制定的,如果我们从小不学会约束自己,争强好胜,就很容易会触犯法律了。到那时可是一失足成千古恨,很可能会抱憾终身。从此,法在我心里扎根了。将来我们还要走上社会。那时法更重要。我们更应该时刻提醒自己遵纪守法,让法的警钟声时刻在我们耳边响起。
作为一个公民,我们要遵守我们国家制定的法律,老师告诉我们,我们国家的法律是越来越健全了,我们儿童有《未成年人保护法》,老师有《教师法》,还有保护每个公民的各种法规,只有法制健全的国家,才是文明、发达的国家,因为有《未成年人保护法》,我们孩子的生活更加自由和快乐,我们要学习法律,好让自己的人生权利得到保护。
在日常生活中处处都离不开法律和道德。对于我们青少年来说,要懂法、知法、守法,还要爱护法,多看一些法律方面的书籍,为自己的人生道路撑上一把健康的绿伞。而道德又是一双手,推开封锁在心里的窗;道德是一扇窗,窗外是美好的天空;道德是一片天空,它孕育着无数纯洁的心灵。
我们不需要做这些大事,我们先要从小事做起,从一点一滴做起。在拥挤的公车上,我们让一让座位;在红灯面前,我们停一停脚步;在道路两旁,我们弯腰捡起一片废纸;在家里,我们替父母分担一些烦恼。这都是遵守法律和道德的表现,如果我们每个人都做到的话,那么,中国就会变的更美好。
我国有句古话“没有规矩不成方圆”。就是说,无论做什么事都要有一个规矩否则就什么也做不成。对国家,对社会来说这规矩就是法。作为国家公民和社会成员,人人都要遵守法律,维护法律。今天的青少年是明天的建设者。现在不仅要学好知识,练好身体,养成良好的习惯,也要树立法律意识和养成良好德道德修养。懂法、知法、守法,法律是我们健康成长的保护神,也是做为一个小公民必须遵守的行为准则,我们每个人都要认真学法,做一个遵纪守法的好孩子
法在心中,自然心安,法在心中,自然理得!作为青少年的我们,不仅要学法,懂法,更要善于运用法律。这,便是所谓的行动。应该学法、懂法、守法,以保护我们自己的权益,不损害他人和社会的利益。只有从小养成遵纪守法的好习惯长大后才能成为对社会有用的遵纪守法的好公民。
朋友,你我都处在花一样的年华,让我们在物质财富丰富的今天,用法律充实自己的思想!尔后,在灿烂阳光的照耀下,携手齐呼:法在我心中!
“国的家住在心里,家的国以和矗立。“我们的国家因为和平,因为和谐,所以能够屹立在世界民族之林,我们作为一位炎黄子孙,有责任去维护我们祖国的和谐,而作为一名中学生,更应该去了解、去遵守我们国家的根本大法《宪法》。
12月4号是我国的全国法制宣传日,同时也是宪法宣传日。以宪法实施日作为“全国法制宣传日“,就是要在全社会进一步强化宪法意识,树立宪法观念。
宪法的意义在于它是国家的根本大法,这一特点决定了它的法律地位高于普通法,具有最高法律地位和最高法律效力。宪法是制定普通法律的依据,普通法律的内容都必须符合宪法的规定。与宪法内容相抵触的法律无效。
20XX年10月中华人民共和国成立后,第一届、第四届和第五届全国人民代表大会分别于20XX年9月、20XX年1月、20XX年3月和20XX年12月先后制定,颁布了四部《中华人民共和国宪法》。20XX年3月14日,第十届全国人大二次会议通过宪法修正案,对原宪法作了修改。宪法修正案确立“三个代表“重要思想在国家政治和社会生活中的指导地位,增加推动物质文明、政治文明和精神文明协调发展的内容,完善对私有财产保护的规定,增加建立健全社会保障制度的规定,增加尊重和保障人权的规定等。
遵守宪法,可以更好地维护我们的生命安全。阻塞交通的道路,频频发生的交通事故总令我们痛苦不堪。每年因交通事故导致的死亡人数数以万计,直接经济损失达到几亿之多。谁曾想过发展的背后竟会有如此残酷的数据?面对死亡的悲剧,我们在埋怨,我们在斥责,想想那些因失去亲人的痛苦,我们是否要深思?面对车祸的原因:酒后驾车、疲劳驾车、超速等。这些法律所禁止的行为,被无视而导致了悲剧的发生,有人抱怨:“这禁止,那限制,没有了人身自由。“可是我们不难发现不遵守宪法的背后等待我们的是什么。只有遵守宪法,宪法才会保护我们。
我们作为中学生应该做到:刻苦学习,积极进取,提高素质,全面发展;遵守《中学生日常行为规范》及学校的各项规章制度;积极为学校和班级争光;尊敬老师,团结同学;听从父母教育,尽力承担家务劳动,体谅父母;诚实守信、热爱劳动、爱护公物、保护环境。真正做到宪法在我们的一言一行之中,宪法更在我们的心中。
英语老师:
您好!
在辽阳过得好吗?工作也顺利吧?在这里我给您写一封信,借此问候您。
老师,我永远忘不了那个下午,当我听说您要调到辽阳去教书时,泪水充满了我的双眼——要知道,我舍不得您走,舍不得您,好舍不得!
记得刚学英语的时候,您第一次来给我们上课,您那天穿的好美:白色的连衣裙,长长的头发,大大的眼睛,甜美的声音,我们所有同学都被你迷住了,打那一刻开始,我就喜欢上了您,喜欢您的美丽,喜欢您的甜美的声音。
还记得那次演讲比赛,我在耿庄镇中脱颖而出,代表耿庄镇去海城参加演讲,是您带我去的.,虽然我努力了,但是还是只得了一个优秀奖,您安慰我说:"没关系,毕竟你这是第一次,下次你一定会取得好成绩的,失败是成功的开始,别伤心了。”我听了,擦干了眼角的泪水,眼里又重新绽放出光芒,我知道,那是希望。从那一刻起,我决定做您最优秀的学生,我下功夫,拼命的学,努力的学,本以为还有机会,可谁知道,比赛之后的第3天,就传出了您要调走的消息。我们不敢相信,简直不敢想象,我们大家都哭了,所有人都哭了。那一刻,想见您,拼命的想见您,我当时都有了那个想法:只要能见您,付出生命我都愿意!您对我们比妈妈还亲,您教给我们的知识,我们会铭记在心,我们知道,您不可能在调回来了,就算调回来,教的也不再是我们了!
老师,自从您调走后,我们做梦都天天梦到您,满脑子想的全是您,您甜美的声音,美丽的笑容,充满希望的眼神…
老师,我们好想您!
祝:永远年轻美丽,开开心心的生活!
XXX
20xx年XX月XX日
敬爱的老师:
您好!
老师,您曾在那神圣的七尺讲台,洒下您的汗水滴滴;老师,您曾亲切的教育我们;老师,您曾送过多少界届毕业班啊!老师,您把您的一生都用在学生身上,您就像一只蜡烛一样,永不停息的绽放着光和热;老师……
老师,在您接这个班以前,说实话,我的作文并不是很好,可是就是您的一句话,改变了我对作文无趣的想法:
您说过:“作文一定要真,真的事情就是从生活中积累来的。”从此,我便观察起生活,我发现了生活其实也很有趣。比如,听完同学讲的一个小笑话后有什么想法;逛街时看见有人买衣服在讲价;考试前后的心情。还有我不停的看作文书,有时觉得看没有读记得快,便一个人躲在厕所高声朗读。再加上我学了一年的作文,作文水平有了明显的提高。老师,我的点滴进步也有您的一份功劳,是您为我打下了一定的基础。
老师,9月10日那天,有好多同学都送了礼物表示感谢,我却没有送,那是因为我知道您不是希望每年都得到学生的礼物,而是每年都希望得到学生最好的成绩,因为那是学生的改变,也是对您工作的肯定。
老师,您的爱,像一股暖流,永远温暖着学生的心;老师,您的爱,又像一把熊熊燃烧的火焰,照亮我学习的前程,我将终生难忘!
老师,您辛苦了!
祝:
一帆风顺工作顺利!
XXX
20xx年XX月XX日
How to prevent the H7N9?
As is well known,the A flu is spreading throught our country. However, if we negnect it, the deadly H7N9 may cause more infectors,or even more deaths. So what is the most important is that we should take some effective measures to prevent it.They can be listed as follows.
Firstly,it is necessary for you to realize the Avian flu can be prevented if you develop good living habits. For example,you shouldn’t forget to wash your hands before meals.Besides,don’t spit everywhere and try to cover your mouth or nose with paper or hankerchiefs when you have to cough or sneeze.What’s more, remember to wear the mouth-cover if you have to go to the public places, such as the crowded cinemas,supermarkets, buses,where the A flu may spread easily.
Secondly,of course, taking exercise more often and taking good sleep to build your body are wise choices for you to reduce the risk of being infected.
Last but not the least, if you are unlucky to be infected with the slight flu cold, try to stay at home,and take some medicine. Do pay attention to your daily body temperature. If you have a high fever, go to the hospital without delay for further treatment. Make sure you are not expected to come back to school before the cold or flu is cured.
Only by doing like this can you prevent or defeat the A flu in the end.
to prevent H7N9 we should know some common sense. First of all, it is important for us to prevent H7N9 from ourselves. For example, clean our hands frequently.
Sencondly, do more exercises. Such as running. Lastly, change our diet to keep balence. For example, eat more types of vegetables and drink more water
Expert tips on how to prevent avian influenza H7N9 collated by current argument data dictionary
1.平时加强体育锻炼,多休息,避免过度劳累,不吸烟,勤洗手;注意个人卫生,打喷嚏或咳嗽时掩住口鼻。
1 usually strengthen physical exercise, rest more, avoid excessive overworked, do not smoke, wash their hands; pay attention to personal hygiene, when sneezing or coughing and cover your nose and mouth.
2.保持室内清洁,使用消毒液清洗的地毯,避免使用难以清洗的地毯,保持地面、天花板、家具及墙壁清洁,确保排水道通畅;保持室内空气流通,应每天开窗换气两次,每次至少10分钟,或使用抽气扇保持空气流通;尽量少去 空气不流通的场所。
2 keep the room clean, use disinfectant cleaning carpets, avoid the use of hard to clean the carpet, keep the floor, ceiling, furniture and walls clean, to ensure smooth drainage channel; maintains the indoor air circulation, ventilation windows should be at least two times a day, 10 minutes each time, or use a fan to keep air circulation; as little as possible to airless places.
3.注意饮食卫生,进食禽肉、蛋类要彻底煮熟,加工、保存食物时要注意生、熟分开;养成良好的卫生习惯,搞好厨房卫生,不生食禽肉和内脏。解剖活(死家禽、家畜及其制品后要彻底洗手。
3, pay attention to food hygiene, eating meat, eggs should be thoroughly cooked, processing, preservation of food to the attention of raw, cooked separately; develop good health habits, good kitchen hygiene, do not eat raw poultry meat and offal. Anatomy of living (dead to wash hands thoroughly, livestock and poultry products.
同时,在户外洗手不方便的时候,可以使用免洗洗手液,随身携带,随时随地隔离病菌,呵护您的健康。
At the same time, when the outdoor hand-washing is not convenient, can use hand sanitizer, carry whenever and wherever possible, isolate the pathogen, take care of your health.
4.发现疫情时,应尽量避免与禽类接触;公众特别是儿童应避免密切接触家禽和野禽。
4 found in the epidemic, should avoid contact with poultry; the public especially children should avoid close contact with poultry and wild birds.
5.注意生活用具的消毒处理。禽流感病毒不耐热,100°C下一分钟即可灭活。对干燥、紫外线照射、汞、氯等常用消毒药都很敏感。
5 pay attention to disinfection and living appliances. Avian influenza viruses do not heat, 100 ° C, one minute can be inact
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