英语作文五年级城市生活【一】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
英语作文五年级城市生活【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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英语作文五年级城市生活【三】
动漫，正逐渐融入我们的生活，把我们平淡的成长日子点石成金。从公共汽车上孩子们打招呼的口头语，到美眉互相吹捧的开场白，甚至文学作品的动漫化包装……还有少女装上的”卡哇依“人头、挂在手机上的玩偶链条。
还记得当初的《空中大灌篮》吗，那曾经轰动世界的动漫？那是第一部卡通和真人混合的影片，篮坛巨星乔丹的主演和众多球星的客串，再加上这些卡通人物全是往昔的经典，在电脑特效师的撮合下，形成一部非常好玩的儿童片。这，就是人类智慧的体现！
所有童心未泯的人，所有心怀梦想的人，所有喜爱微笑的人，都是动漫迷。青山刚昌笔下足智多谋的名侦探柯南，井上雄彦笔下热血拼搏的湘北篮球队员，岸本齐史笔下追逐梦想的木叶村忍者们……他们是多少人心目中的支柱？鸣人在一次次激战面前毫不畏惧，冲着天空高喊：“我要成为火影”；柯南为了保护市民的安全，不惜使自己身受重伤；鲁路修为了使世界踏上正轨，以自己的牺牲唱响了序曲；三代火影为了保护村子里的每一个人，拼了性命与大蛇丸血战；琴美的父母在飞机坠机前的那一刻，丢弃了重要的科学论文，却把给女儿买的玩具熊放进了旅行箱，还附上了一张纸条“如果你捡到这个箱子，请把它交给我的女儿”，最终跨越了千山万水，经过无数人的`传递，通过十几种语言的交流，来到了琴美的身边……他们的坚持，他们的勇敢。他们的奉献，他们的真情，都深深印在我们的心中，动漫，让我们重拾那份久违了的感动！
一群正值妙龄的女孩，一帮富有主见的女孩，一伙天真无邪的女孩，围成一团，开始了创作。她们有的续写动漫，你瞧，贴吧上的杰作都是她们的；她们有的自己写动漫，也当上了作家，过了一会编导瘾。可别以为她们只是单纯地写故事，她们还自己画图、上色，为自己创造的人物配上形象呢！她们这个不是小儿科，也没耽误学习，要知道，这反而是锻炼了她们的写作能力和想象力。动漫，使她们用双手描绘出自己的一片蓝天！
所有动漫中的英雄人物，仿佛都能成为服饰搭配的主题。从1980年代流行于幼儿园和小学的阿童木手帕，到如今把点缀成整幢房屋的软装饰。那些表情憨厚、眼神可爱，或是胖都都，或是精精瘦的猫、熊、兔，总是以各种形式，霸占女孩子的床头、车厢后玻璃、鼠标垫甚至电脑屏保程序。动漫，使我们追求美感！
处在21世纪的你——
如果对动漫产生了兴趣，并且在认真探索，恭喜，你会获得一小笔财富。
如果还能自由创作动漫，或者续写，来吧，让我们共同感谢人类的智慧。
如果动漫让你抛弃了连续剧，呵呵，喜新厌旧不是你的错。
哪怕你只是看动漫放松一下，也罢，就当给生活涂抹一道新的色彩。
动漫，早已无声无息地潜入我们的生活，悄悄地改变我们的生活，使我们的生活更精彩！
