自从那次山庙被烧以后,他们每天下山打水,但这却是杯水车薪。于是三个和尚就决定到城里去学文化,回来好解决喝水、用水的问题。
来到城市,城里一幢幢高楼大厦耸立在公路的两旁,一座座美丽的立交桥拔地而起,桥上、桥下车水马龙,川流不息地行驶着各式各样的车子,不由得让他们大吃一惊。“哇噻,好美啊!”人行道上也全部装上了自动输送带,人们一站上去,自动输送带就可以把人们送到他们想去的地方。三个和尚到处打听,找到了清华大学的张教授,拜师学艺。张教授对他们十分严格,他们自己也很用功。功夫不负有心人,几个月过去了,他们学会了许多真本领,回到了山庙。
回庙后,他们立刻把油灯换成了电灯、把灶台换成了燃气灶、微波炉,还安装了一个大功率的水泵抽水机,把水引上了山,用上了自来水。从此,他们的山庙发生了翻天覆地的变化,他们再也不用为吃水发愁了。三个和尚还在山上种了许多的花草树木、还种了不少的庄稼,天天给它们浇水。
一年过去了,树长高了,庄稼也收获了,盛开的花朵穿着色彩斑斓的花衣裳绽开了笑脸,对着太阳在点头微笑,好象在说这儿真美!小鸟也飞来了,站在树枝上叽叽喳喳地唱起来,一个个交头接耳,可开心了。
山庙变了,三个和尚也变了,他们变得勤奋、好学,现代技术让他们尝到了甜头,他们正准备启程下山学学电脑呢!
1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚
写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心,详略得当
在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:
One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言,准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文:
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后:
The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。
"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.
Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?
Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.
导入:
第1段:提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
正文:
第2段:Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法
结论:
第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法
从前,有座山叫“和尚山”。山非常的高大,山里长着许多花草树木,茂密的树丛挡住了山路。和尚山的山顶上有一座古庙,古庙叫“和尚庙”,庙里有一个小和尚,长着一对小的眼睛,小的鼻子,小的嘴巴,圆的脸。圆圆的头上有六个戒巴。小和尚每天拿着佛珠念经。山上没有泉水、也没有水塘,只有下几里山路到山下去挑水,因为小和尚才十一二岁,提着一个大大的水桶很吃力,每走几步就坐下来歇一歇,不过小和尚的水缸里总是满满的,小和尚的日子过得非常幸福。
可是过了三个月,来了一个瘦和尚,瘦和尚真是可以用“骨瘦如柴”来形容,瘦和尚长着不大不小的鼻子,一双炯炯有神的'眼睛和一个非常小的嘴巴。自从瘦和尚来了后,小和尚就变得不勤快了。小和尚认为瘦和尚是新来的,就让瘦和尚去挑水。可是瘦和尚说:“我是新来的,不认识路,”小和尚说:“那你是怎么上山来的?”小和尚和瘦和尚小和尚整天吵个没完没了。缸里的水也一天天的少了下去。终于有一天,缸里的水没了。瘦和尚和小和尚经商量,决定抬水喝,抬水比一个人提水轻松多了,瘦和尚和小和尚的生活还算过得平静。
又过了两个月,庙里来了个胖和尚,胖和尚头上有九个戒巴,一双大大的眼睛,一张大大的嘴巴和大大的鼻子。自从胖和尚来了后,三个和尚都不挑水。小和尚说:“你们两个一个瘦,一个胖,应该去锻炼”瘦和尚和胖和尚说:“你不锻炼,长大了还从前,有座山叫“和尚山”。山非常的高大,山里长着许多花草树木,茂密的树丛挡住了山路。和尚山的山顶上有一座古庙,古庙叫“和尚庙”,庙里有一个小和尚,长着一对小的眼睛,小的鼻子,小的嘴巴,圆的脸。圆圆的头上有六个戒巴。小和尚每天拿着佛珠念经。山上没有泉水、也没有水塘,只有下几里山路到山下去挑水,因为小和尚才十一二岁,提着一个大大的水桶很吃力,每走几步就坐下来歇一歇,不过小和尚的水缸里总是满满的,小和尚的日子过得非常幸福。
可是过了三个月,来了一个瘦和尚,瘦和尚真是可以用“骨瘦如柴”来形容,瘦和尚长着不大不小的鼻子,一双炯炯有神的眼睛和一个非常小的嘴巴。自从瘦和尚来了后,小和尚就变得不勤快了。小和尚认为瘦和尚是新来的,就让瘦和尚去挑水。可是瘦和尚说:“我是新来的,不认识路,”小和尚说:“那你是怎么上山来的?”小和尚和瘦和尚小和尚整天吵个没完没了。缸里的水也一天天的少了下去。终于有一天,缸里的水没了。瘦和尚和小和尚经商量,决定抬水喝,抬水比一个人提水轻松多了,瘦和尚和小和尚的生活还算过得平静。
又过了两个月,庙里来了个胖和尚,胖和尚头上有九个戒巴,一双大大的眼睛,一张大大的嘴巴和大大的鼻子。自从胖和尚来了后,三个和尚都不挑水。小和尚说:“你们两个一个瘦,一个胖,应该去锻炼”瘦和尚和胖和尚说:“你不锻炼,长大了还走浦东了”。
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
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