今天,阳光明媚,妈妈决定带我去月湖公园玩。
刚下车,映入眼帘的是一块大石头上面刻着“月湖公园”四个苍劲有力的大字。旁边有许多花草树木。一排排整齐的竹椅子上坐满了游客。有的在打瞌睡、有的坐在椅子上给花草照相、还有的在一边休息一边吃着东西。
刚进大门不久,就看见不远处有跳跳床、蹦极……我缠着妈妈要玩个蹦极,妈妈无可奈何只好答应了。当绳子弹起,我就开始尖叫起来,再看下面,人都成米粒了。山山水水,花花草草都出现在我眼前。当我又被弹下时,只觉得耳边的风在嗖嗖地响。当我正玩得不亦乐乎的时候,时间到了。
下了蹦极床后,我们继续往前走着,来到了月湖中央。月湖上有一座坚固的桥,大约有十几米高。我们站在桥的最高处,一眼就望见了远处的高楼大厦。近处湖面上微波荡漾,在阳光的照耀下闪闪发光。微风吹来,心旷神怡,给人带来无限的暇想。
我们继续往前走,看见了一个大亭子,里面有许多人,站的站,坐的坐,围在一起。我挤进去一看,原来湖中的鱼多如牛毛,数也数不清。大的、小的、红的、黑的……大家买了鱼食都在争先恐后地喂着。
我们又参观了许多地方。最后要出后门时,看见了一棵古怪的树。树墩上长出了五棵粗壮的大树枝,笔直而又挺拔。更神奇地是从每个角度看都是一样的。我和妈妈情不自禁地给它留了影。
时间过得真快!不知不觉就过去了四个小时,到中午十二点半了。我们随着人群恋恋不舍地走在了回家的路上,月湖上空还荡漾着游客们的欢声笑语呢!
太原的迎泽公园是个历史悠久的公园。
进了迎泽公园的大门,往右走绕过海底世界,就来到历史悠久的迎泽湖。静静的湖面就像一面镜子,湖上有个中心岛,如果竖着看,踮起脚尖也是很难看到头。这个悠久的迎泽湖占总体面积的三分之一。在湖的两侧长满了郁郁苍苍的绿树、绿草,在湖的中心岛上长满绿树。那些绿树就像挺拔的士兵一样站在那里,如果上了中心岛,站在那里,一阵风拂过,就会使人神清气爽。
看完迎泽湖,就来到了藏经楼脚下。抬头一看,一座八角宝塔的三层建筑耸立在陆地上,棕色的木头在阳光下闪闪发光。那就是藏经楼。下面的一排排鲜艳的花朵,都在捧着它。走上藏经楼,站在上面往下望。迎泽公园的景色大半收入眼底。可看的最清楚的就是儿童娱乐场地,那里有:碰碰车、摩天轮、激流勇进……各式各样,说也说不清。
迎泽公园到处有美丽的景色,说也说不尽,希望你有机会细细游赏。
How to prevent the H7N9?
As is well known,the A flu is spreading throught our country. However, if we negnect it, the deadly H7N9 may cause more infectors,or even more deaths. So what is the most important is that we should take some effective measures to prevent it.They can be listed as follows.
Firstly,it is necessary for you to realize the Avian flu can be prevented if you develop good living habits. For example,you shouldn’t forget to wash your hands before meals.Besides,don’t spit everywhere and try to cover your mouth or nose with paper or hankerchiefs when you have to cough or sneeze.What’s more, remember to wear the mouth-cover if you have to go to the public places, such as the crowded cinemas,supermarkets, buses,where the A flu may spread easily.
Secondly,of course, taking exercise more often and taking good sleep to build your body are wise choices for you to reduce the risk of being infected.
Last but not the least, if you are unlucky to be infected with the slight flu cold, try to stay at home,and take some medicine. Do pay attention to your daily body temperature. If you have a high fever, go to the hospital without delay for further treatment. Make sure you are not expected to come back to school before the cold or flu is cured.
Only by doing like this can you prevent or defeat the A flu in the end.
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
要转入新的学校了,我的心里别提有多高兴。那一天,妈妈再三地叮嘱我我去了要听老师的话,要和同学们搞好关系,不要一意孤行。妈妈把我送入了学生寝室,却怎么也放心不 下我,不要太担心我,让我体验体验独立生活的感受。
一进新学校,眼前一亮,整齐优雅的\'教学楼,绿树成荫的走道,安静浓烈的学习气氛,使我心旷神怡。开始,我还有点紧张,不愿意和同学们说话。后来慢慢地就熟悉了,就像在以前学校的好姐妹一样,有说有笑,蹦蹦跳跳。好喜欢好开心哦!
晚上,我们进了教室,我忐忑不安地等候着老师得到来。终于进来了一个戴着眼镜的男老师,第一眼的感觉他和蔼可亲,知识渊博。果然,他说话刚劲有力,而且还很幽默风趣呢!我的心慢慢地平静下来,觉得这就是我想要的老师。
第二天我们就开始上课了,我慢慢地熟悉了教我的所有老师,感觉都很好。我也渐渐地懂得了这里的学习方法,能和同学一起学习,一起讨论,每天过得非常快乐,非常充实。
经过几天的学习和锻炼,我习惯了这所学校的生活,喜欢上了我的老师,我的同学。想家的时候就给妈妈打个电话问候一声,希望能同她一起分享我的快乐。
晚上,寝室里的生活更是有趣,有的在聊天,有的在唱歌,我敢肯定,只要有烦恼的人一到那里,烦恼就没有了。最开心的事往往是最短暂的。我们寝室的同学都非常友好,如果有什么困难,她们一定会热情帮助你!
在绵外里,我沐浴着阳光健康快乐的成长。我希望在好的学校里能锻炼自己的独立,能一个人处理好生活中的小事情。在困难面前勇往直前,相信在老师的关怀下,我会做得更好,相信自己是最棒!
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