在写作时我们同样需要注意词汇搭配的问题,下面让我们来看一个雅思写作的常见句子:
Advertisements have influences on people.
相信所有备考过关于广告和传播话题的烤鸭对这个句子都不会陌生对不对,那么我们现在开始试着扩句。
Most female consumers and their girlfriends shop unwisely and spend too much money.
这时主语和谓语都已经进行了改善。但是你问还有提升空间吗?当然有!
一天,妈妈陪着我出去玩,我看到有人在卖小螃蟹,就让妈妈给我买了一只。
回到家,我把小螃蟹放在脸盆里,又放了些水。妈妈说:“螃蟹喜欢生活在泥里。”听了妈妈的话,我出门挖了些泥放在脸盆里,又特意买了几条小鱼儿跟它做伴,小螃蟹在它的家里快乐地爬来爬去。
它的样子十分可爱,身披盔甲,两只大钳子像剪刀一样,八条腿横着爬,还有两个米粒大小的眼睛。我用小棍子逗它,它就用有力的钳子把棍子夹住往嘴里送,当它发现不是吃的'东西时,就扔掉了棍子。我又拿出面条插在泥巴里,它便伸出它那有力的钳子夹住面条,塞进了它的大嘴巴……
我的小螃蟹是多么可爱呀!它陪伴着我度过了一个又一个开心而快乐的日子。可惜天渐渐冷了,小螃蟹越来越不爱动了。妈妈说:“小螃蟹是要冬眠的,你把它放了吧!”我虽然有些舍不得,但是为了这只小生命的未来,我还是依依不舍地把它放回了家门前的一个泥沟里。我祝愿小螃蟹生活愉快,并希望明年有一天能再见到它
这类考生往往缺乏刨根究底的精神,总是在主旨周围绕圈子,不达中心。这也是中国考生的通病,看似八九不离十,却总也不愿把话点破,让考官怎能不又急又气。
在所有的扩展方式之中,因果推理法是最受用也是最透彻的方法。凡事先追溯到其原由,再扩展其结果,这是将主题阐述清晰、论述有力并且具有逻辑感的最佳手段。例如在“出国留学利弊”这一题目之前,若考生单纯说“有可能会使青少年学坏”,难免缺乏说服力,但若紧接着扩展“因为孩子高中毕业后思想上还不成熟,若认识不好的朋友会难以抵抗社会上不好的诱惑”,那么此论点一定会让考官眉头舒展,点头认同。由此可见,善用此推理法会让议论文如虎添翼,事半功倍。
引出原因的表达方式主要有:Because../Since.../As....
引出结果的表达方式主要有:so.../Therefore,.../Consequently,.../Accordingly,... /As a result,.../In this way,.../result in.../Thanks to.../Due to.../ Owing to..
【写作真题】Aircrafts have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or ate out of season. Some people consider it a good trend, but some people oppose it. Discuss.
【名师献计】It is important to note that imports are now increasingly affordable to the general population. Thanks to the rapid development of the freight transport industry, air travel has become an economical mode of transport, resulting in the subsequent decrease in the cost of importing. Meanwhile, technical advance in the food processing industry has made it much easier to preserve fresh fruits and vegetables over a long-haul air flight. Because of the wide availability of imported crops, there are more varieties...
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