要求:1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。2、字数在100字以内。
思路点拨
写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。
这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。
参考范文
My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
前些年看的话,可能会以女主的视角为主线,看到她处处受到责难进退两难。看多了,就能感觉到每一个冲突点,都是在拍电影,不是很自然,太多了。每个点都在指向“不懂英语不行”。似乎所有人都在嘲笑她。所以,她找到了学习英语的意义,把它变成了一个刚需,就有了内生动力。
话说这孩子教育得也挺失败的,跟他父亲的影响不无关系,跟印度整体的环境不无关系。
人类社会处在一个巨大的进程当中,总有一天,不平等会消失。
我们中国人(汉族)敢于穿着自己民族的服装(是什么?)出现在曼哈顿吗?
小球洒一地的时候,真的感受到了女主那种绝望,这是她此次来美国最大亮点,之前的麻烦和劳作,都是为了让客人尝到小球时那种惊喜和incredible的赞叹,这是她生命的全部意义,现在,没有了。
有没有中国父母能做到被小孩子破坏成那个样子的时候,不发飙?现实生活中是怎样的?印度父母在这种情况下会不责备孩子?表示怀疑。或者,这只是剧情需要,此处教育孩子不是重点。
女主太漂亮。
Hi! Boys and girls! My name is kelly,I am 12 years old. I am a student. I study at XiShan Primary School.I am in Class 1,Grade 5.I have three good teachers. They are Mr Lai, Miss Huang and Miss Lu.
My chinese teacher is Miss Huang. She is beautiful. She wears glasses. She always helps us study and.Music is her favourite. Eevrybody likes her because she has a kind heart.
Miss Lu is our math teacher. She,s very active and smart. She has tress. She,s young and pretty. She,svery strict,but kind. Her class is so much fun.My favourite teacher is Mr Lai. He is our English teacher. He has two small eyes and big mouth. He wears a pair of glasses, too. Because he is a university student. He,s very humoar. He speaks English very well.we like him so much.They are my teachers. Do you like them?
Thank you
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