英语作文带批注范文【一】
The Father and His Son
Father had a family of sons who were perpetually quarrelling among themselves. When he failed to heal their disputes by his exhortations, he determined to give them a practical illustration of the evils of disunion; and for this purpose he one day told them to bring him a bundle of sticks. When they had done so, he placed the faggot into the hands of each of them in succession, and ordered them to break it in pieces. They each tried with all their strength, and were not able to do it.
He next unclosed the faggot, and took the sticks separately, one by one, and again put them into their hands, on which they broke them easily. He then addressed them in these words: "My sons, if you are of one mind, and unite to assist each other, you will be as this faggot, uninjured by all the attempts of your enemies; but if you are divided among yourselves, you will be broken as easily as these sticks."
一位父亲有几个孩子，这些孩子时常发生口角。他丝毫没有办法来劝阻他们，只好让他们看看不合群所带来害处的例子。为了达到这个目的，有一天他叫他们替他拿一捆细柴来。当他们把柴带来时，他便先后地将那捆柴放在每一个孩子的手中，吩咐他们弄断这捆柴。他们一个个尽力去试，总是不能成功。
然后他解开那捆柴，一根根地放在他们手里，如此一来，他们便毫不费力地折断了。于是他就告诉他们说：「孩子们!如果你们大家团结一致，互相帮助，你们就像这捆柴一样，不能被你们的敌人折断;但如果你们自行，你们就将和这些散柴一般，不堪一折了。
英语作文带批注范文【二】
打开尘封的记忆，首先浮现在眼前的就是那个“温暖”的冬天，我和她手牵手，在冬日底下……
第一次见到她，高个子，微胖，扎着马尾辫，身穿一件长袖T恤和一条休闲牛仔，面无表情，看起酷酷的样子。后来不知怎么回事，迷迷糊糊的，我们成为了好朋友。她乐观开朗，大大咧咧。而我极其内向，沉默寡言。我们性格迥异，最后却成为了知己，到现在我也弄不清原因。她很勤劳、很勇敢、很善良、很大方、很执着……当然，她也很冲动、很暴躁、很贪玩、很迷糊……
那天，刺骨的寒风无情地撕扯着干枯的树枝，街上的行人寥寥无几，地上堆积的洁白的雪还未融化，一片银装素裹……在公园里，有两个女孩，穿着厚厚的棉袄，围着围巾，戴着帽子，手牵着手，另一只手里拿着热气腾腾的包子，边吃边一起说笑。时而两人开怀大笑；时而两人伤感哭泣；时而手牵手散着步；时而背靠背唱着歌……就这样，两个女孩踩着雪，一步一个脚印，伴随着“嘎吱嘎吱的声音，绕着公园走了一圈又一圈……天气虽冷，心却温暖……
那段日子，纯真，美好，简单，浪漫。那时，我们在一起看“人狗奇缘”，哭的稀里哗啦，一塌糊涂；那时，每天我几乎都会吃到雪糕，而那却不是我掏的钱；那时，我们偶尔会吵吵小架，但几分钟后又迅速和好；那时，我们一起聊天聊到深夜，结果第二天上学迟到；那时她不好意思向一高年级男生问题，结果还是我去问了再告诉她；那时，我被欺负了，她会替我打抱不平；那时，我们一起为考试而拼搏；那时，我们手牵手，在冬日底下……
毕业后，我们各奔东西，有了新的学习和生活。我们依然保持着联系。那段日子，我永远也不会忘记，我很想再和她在一起学习，于是我们约定好，将来要考进同一所高中，这个约定使我更加努力的拼搏。我期待着，我们将在一起度过我们美好的青春年华。
又是一个冬天，有谁愿意与我手牵手，在冬日底下…
批注：这是一篇感情真挚的叙事散文，作者着重描写了与同学的学习往事，语言朴实流畅，故事饱满圆润，人物形象突出。文章中运用了排比的修辞手法，增强了语气。全文结构安排合理，首尾呼应，有极强的回读意味。
英语作文带批注范文【三】
我的同桌是一个活泼开朗的女生，她长着一双小眼睛和一个小嘴巴，常常一副聪明其实的样子，她就叫刘田庆。
My deskmate is a lively and cheerful girl, she has a pair of small eyes and a small mouth, often a pair of smart in fact, she is called Liu Tianqing.
我和我的同桌刘田庆从三年级一直坐到五年级，可她总是打我或骂我，但也会对我好的时候，就说：有一次刘田庆过生日，她竟然请了我参加她的生日派对，可我并没有拒绝，到那天她的妈妈对我们都很热情，点了好多好吃的，可我大吃一顿，还有一次刘田庆在中午的时候要带我踢毽子，我说我不会踢毽子，她说：没关系随便踢，就在中午玩着玩着我就好像会踢了一样，就是我的同桌让我会踢毽子，让我热爱踢毽子。
My deskmate Liu Tianqing and I sat down from the third grade to the fifth grade, but she always beat me or scolded me, but also said when she was good to me: once Liu Tianqing had a birthday, she invited me to her birthday party, but I did not refuse, until that day her mother was very warm to us, ordered many delicious food, but I had a big meal, and once Liu Tianqing was in the middle I want to take me to kick shuttlecock at noon. I said I can't kick shuttlecock. She said: it's OK to kick shuttlecock casually. Just playing at noon is like I can kick shuttlecock. It's my deskmate that makes me able to kick shuttlecock, which makes me love to kick shuttlecock.
这就是我的同桌
This is my deskmate
英语作文带批注范文【四】
Our campus is beautiful and clean.
Especially the view of the school just built soon pool, the water is clear and clean, several small koi fish alive in the water, really cute. Cascade tank top and a small spray, a start the water flow in the flowing and metope, give a person a kind of very pure and fresh and lively feeling. Also used by the side of the pool of some plants to decorate, I did not know at the moment the water and a few small lotus flowers purple, little fish in water activities after a while, a short while again drill to lotus holed up people's eyes. Although this tank nothing special, but it is not only to school spring scenery and move feeling, and it is a beautiful scenery, I really like the fountain. The center of the pool, there are a number of aquatic plants. Look, a spirited big carp tail up addicted, the chest, the pieces of fish scales, in the sun a bit, a bit, just like a crystal pearl! Beside the pool has a special management department of the pool, near the previous administration and buy some books about pool, isn't it a shame now has moved out.
? A circle near the pool and dedicated to pool of flower every day. Against the sun to the school, students can see the beauty into the gate of the pool, visible this pool is quite popular with the students, it has a good time to school students will come to visit, even after a long time, some students came to visit a pool view. All of them are actually swam to see those life - carp. But since carp died, and I have no students came to see, actually I also very sad, good carry of life did not have.
Oh, I think of it, beside the pool and two kirin, in their mouth with little water, how I wish come in to add a few water in vibrant life! This school pool is more interesting and more to the campus scenery, the fountain has its matchless magical color!
我们的'校园又美丽又干净。
特别是学校刚修建不久的景色水池，水又清澈又干净，几条小锦鲤鱼在水里活蹦乱跳的，真可爱。水池小瀑布上面还有一个小型喷水器，一开动水就顺墙面潺潺而流，给人一种非常清新活泼的感觉。水池旁边还用了一些我一时也说不上来的植物装饰，水中还有几朵紫色的小莲花，小鱼儿一会在水上活动，一会又钻到莲花下躲藏人们的眼光。虽然这个水池没什么特别，可是它不但给学校增添春色和动感，而且又是一处好看的景色，我真喜欢这个喷水池。池正中，有许多水生植物。瞧，一条欢蹦乱跳的大鲤鱼翘着尾嗜，挺着胸脯，那一片片鱼鳞，在阳光下忽闪，忽闪，真像一颗晶莹的珍珠哩!水池旁有一个专门管理水池的管理处，以前管理处旁还有一些关于水池的的书买呢，不可惜现在已经搬走了。
?水池旁有一圈专门来装饰水池的鲜花，每天。学生们迎着朝阳到学校，一进大门就能看到这个美丽的这个水池，可见这水池挺受学生们的欢迎，刚建好的时候学生一到学校都会上来参观，即使过了很久，还有学生来参观景色水池。其实他们都是来看那些游动着的生命——鲤鱼的。可是自从鲤鱼死后，就没学生过来看了，其实我也很难过，好端端的小生命一个个就没了。
哦，我想起来了，水池旁边还有两个麒麟头，在它们的嘴里会喷出小水柱，我多么希望快快在水里增加几条有活力的生命啊!这样学校的水池才更有趣，也更给校园增添风光，这样的喷水池也有它无比神奇的色彩哦!
英语作文带批注范文【五】
Ivan came home with a bloody nose and his mother asked, "What happened?"
"A kid bit me," replied Ivan.
"Would you recognize him if you saw him again?" asked his mother.
"I'd know him any where," said Ivan. "I have his ear in my pocket."
伊凡鼻子流着血回到家里。他妈妈问，“发生了什么事?”
“一个男孩咬了我一口，”伊凡说。
“再见到他你能认出来吗?”妈妈问。
“他走到哪里我都能认出他，”伊凡说。“他的耳朵还在我衣兜里呢。”
英语作文带批注范文【六】
优秀与成功
作家周国平说：“在为人生确定目标时，第一目标应该是优秀，第二目标才是成功，成功是优秀的副产品。”努力可以成功，也可以优秀，成功和优秀是相辅相成的。我十分赞同作家周国平的.观点，因为他道出了人生目标的含义。
先来说说优秀吧，因为这是拥有成功最基本的资质。那么优秀是什么呢？可以把它看成成功成功之师，或许是一张满分的成绩单，或是一个红色的优星，或是老师对你说的一句：“你优秀了，你很棒！”，或是，总的来说优秀可以是语言上的，也可以是物质上的。优秀对我来说近在眼前，但又遥不可及。怎样才能成为真正意义上的“优秀”呢？首先，你先要具备优秀的道德品质。其次，品学兼优，学习上的优秀。最后，你要做到内心的优秀。谁又能真正地优秀呢？
再来谈谈成功吧。或许你更爱听成功这个词，因为它“表面颜色”比优秀更丰富。“只有优秀了才会成功”，成功是多么多么的遥不可及啊！一个成功者和一个失败者或许就只有那么一点点的差距，因为失败者没有在失败时再等等。如果他们等了等，或许下一刻迎接他们的将会是成功的号角。
如何才能做一个成功者呢？首先，成功者应具备的是宽阔无比的胸襟。其次，才具备“优秀”。最后，要有懂人、识人、用人的能力。对于我来说，好的学习方法是优秀的第一步，首先我会给自己设定一个好的目标，我会努力地去完成它。其次，我会用良好的心态去面对所有。最有，我会把精力集中在十分钟内，过一个又一个十分钟，我的精力一直集中着，我会为一个又一个目标而乐此不疲。当然我还没有算得上是优秀。
批注：你可以选择成功或者选择优秀。当然这中间需要时间、汗水和努力。优秀和成功的人其实并没有什么天生的本领，而是他们比别人花去了更多的时间、精力去努力。端正态度，认真仔细地努力吧，相信自己，你一定可以品尝到成功的甘露，聆听到成功的号角，看到优秀之神在向你招手
