我的妈妈叫余平平,34岁,可是看起来还是很年轻的。她有双大大的黑褐色的眼睛,密密的眉毛,一双干净修长的手。一头长长的乌黑的笔直的头发,有时候我想给妈妈梳头,或扎小辫子。
我妈妈过年时总要和工人结账给他们发工资,平常在义乌的市场卖彩灯。我妈妈是彩灯店老板,每天都很忙碌,还经常要临海和义乌两地奔波。妈妈工作时很认真,严肃对待。经常要接待很多客户,包括很多老外,有非洲的,印度的……很多地方的老外。妈妈还会讲流利的英语和老外沟通把生意做好。
我的妈妈每天忙碌后还要给小妹妹喂奶喂水,利用小妹妹睡了,赶紧抽空帮我打扫房间,叠被子,拖地,烧水……
妈妈还经常呵护我,保护我。虽然妈妈监督我做作业的时候很凶,很严格,但是我知道这都是因为我听话惹妈妈生气的。妈妈很厉害的,会做生意,还会教我做作业,很多我不会的题目都是妈妈教的。我放假的作业都是妈妈批改的,帮助订正。妈妈很想我成为一个好孩子好学生。
妈妈经常不在家, 我希望妈妈能多多陪我。
爸爸、妈妈,如果你让我选择谁最好,我会毫不犹豫地说:“妈妈!”因为,妈妈的眼神多变而伟大。
当我受伤时,妈妈会用她那悲哀的眼神楞楞的看着我的伤口,想起了我以前是多么活泼,那草地上、花园旁,都曾留下我快乐的脚印、声音;当我生病时,妈妈都会寸步不离地守在我身边,这时,妈妈会用失落的眼神注视着我的那双稚嫩、满是针孔的小手,脸色苍白,从她眼里流露出来的都是我以前是多么健康,和我打针时痛苦的表情,让人感觉很温暖、惬意;特别是我得奖时的情景,跟其他母亲不一样的是,妈妈的眼神不是喜悦,而是一种理所当然的眼神,让我不禁更加努力地得到好成绩,所以,我觉得,这是一种独特的教育眼神。
……
这就是妈妈的眼神,一种慈爱的妈妈的眼神。
在平常,我与妈妈见面打招呼,都是边喊着妈妈,边向妈妈冲过去再抱住妈妈。可这一次,让我深深的感觉到了母亲对我的爱。
回家后,妈妈回来了。我正在看书,由于过于认真,根本没理妈妈。好一阵子我才回过神来,发现妈妈已经回来了。为了让妈妈开心,我决定等待时机。
吃完饭后,时机到了。妈妈出去给我买花了,我一个人在家。我想等到妈妈回来时再拥抱她。我边写作业边等,等呀,等呀,领导终于回来了!我跑过去一下子抱住妈妈。妈妈笑了,紧紧的保住我,我在刹那间感觉到了母亲给我的温暖,如春风般温暖,如细雨般柔和,如清泉般清澈,如鸟叫般欢快……千万种情绪聚在心头,我不由自主的笑了。妈妈的体温也温暖了我的心。让我联想到了爸爸和妈妈的养育之恩,我有愧于他们,长大后,我一定尽自己的全力去谢谢他们!
第“一”次拥抱母亲,虽然已经拥抱了无数次,只有这一次让我难忘,让我感觉到了母亲对我的爱!
这一天早上,爸妈都早早的`起床上班去了,我暗喜没人注意从枕头底下的手机,他们前脚走我后脚就起来床了,开始新的一天,洗漱完,就把枕头下的手机小心翼翼拿出来,放在桌子上开游戏大战,正玩着入神时只听到门‘咔嚓’一声响了,是爸爸回来了,吓了一大跳,赶紧藏起来,还好没被发现。他手机忘在家里回来取,我假装认真的写作业,爸爸一点也没查觉,拿好手机就出门了,我又开始在游戏的天堂里遨游,也不知玩了多久,只听到肚子在叫一看时间快一点多了,姐姐煮好面条叫我吃中饭,游戏也足也饭也饱了开始正事情了,把书本和作业拿出来,开始认真的写作业了。
天色惭惭黑下来,爸爸妈妈下班回家了,爸爸打开门看到我还在写作业就说,做了一天先休息下吧,你们去玩会,其实他不知道我们已经玩过了,但玩归玩,作业还是要写的。
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
让我最难忘的那一次,是我最感动的那一次,那一天,我生病了,我本来是在温暖的床上午休,睡了一会,头突然痛了起来,我告诉妈妈我头有点痛,妈妈就用了“二天油”给我摸一摸痛的地方,说”休息一下,一会就很了。过了一会儿,我变得头昏脑胀,全身没有力气,我好不容易才告诉了妈妈,妈妈赶紧去给我冲药,药很快就冲好了,妈妈着急地把药拿给我喝,因为怕我觉得太苦,所以还倒了一杯水给我,我把两杯水都喝下去了,妈妈担心地说:怎么样,怎么样,很些了没。我说:很些了,不用担心。妈妈说:恩,你好好休息,难受一定要告诉妈妈我。然后妈妈就走出去了。
我睡到了下午,头已经不痛了,我马上告诉妈妈,妈妈说:吃完饭后再喝一包药,晚上睡觉还要喝一包,这样烧才能控制住,不然明天烧又发起来了怎么办,我说:恩,也是,我可不想再生病了,晚上妈妈上床睡觉,我就把小脸蛋藏进了妈妈的怀里,甜蜜的睡着了。
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