写一篇英语五年级作文【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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写一篇英语五年级作文【二】
这五年来，我们在一起玩耍，经历了许多风风雨雨。有时候，我们还小打小闹，不过，几分钟过后，雨过天晴，我们又和好如初。我们彼此更加信任，友谊更深。在学校，我们是好同学，放学后，我们一起玩耍，成为最好的姐妹。在学习上我们互相帮助，取长补短；在生活上，我们互相关心，有了美食共同分享，不分彼此。
我们的关系特别好，无论是谁生病了，同学们都会抽出时间去看望，送去温暖。有一次，我不小心摔倒了，腿上流出了许多血。我疼得忍不住掉下了眼泪。同学们看到了马上报告了老师，我们的班主任郭老师跑过来，心疼地问我：“菲菲，疼不疼？要不，我们送你去医务室看看吧！”说着，就把我扶上自行车，送我到医务室。
那几天，你们很关心我，上操时让我好好呆在教室里休息。下课后，你们都守护在我的身旁，生怕我再有个什么闪失。尽管腿上还有伤，但你们的关怀让我忘记了疼痛。
现在，我已经是五年级的学生了，还有一年的时间我就要升入中学，就要和敬爱的老师，亲爱的同学们分手了，真的舍不得！好想每一天都能看到你们的笑脸，好想永远和你们在一起！同学们，你们也一定舍不得我吧！那就好好珍惜我们我们在一起的美好时光吧！
祝同学们
学习进步，快乐成长！
你们的好朋友：闫怡菲
写一篇英语五年级作文【三】
这次五一我玩的真是太痛快了，像李白醉酒。你们知道这是为什么吗？因为我和爸爸、妈妈一起到武汉玩。有在那里有许许多多学不尽的知识，就让我给大家讲解这段美好的“武汉游乐记”吧！
我向老师请假后就和家人们搭上了向武汉开往的火车妈妈在路上给我讲了武汉的旅游胜地。大概就在8点多钟的时候，我们就来到“汉口火车站”为什么我们来到的是“汉口火车站”，是因为武汉分为三大区有汉口、武昌、汉阳，武昌是学校区，汉阳是工厂区，汉口是商业区，所以我们来到的是汉口。
第1天，我们“武汉动物园”里玩，在那里有许多珍贵的动物。这里最威武的要数"非洲豹"，只见它一身乌黑发亮的皮上呈现出暗色的梅花状的图案，这种暗花需迎着光才能看见，还有四只雪白的爪子，一双发光的眼不时的扫过人群，不停地走来走去。我想如果不是铁网拦着，它早就回到它的家乡和伙伴们在一起嬉耍了。它专吃牛羊不说，还吃鳄鱼呢！
第2天，我们来到科技馆，真是不看不知道，一看吓一跳。有趣的是：我们一进门就看见一个悬在半空的没有水管的水笼头，正向下流着水，你能知道这水是从哪儿来的呢？呵，让我告诉你吧：它是运用水循环让人产生了错觉。好奇的是：风力发电。它是通过把大自然的风转为电能，风速越快，电能就越多。利用大自然为人类造福。还有好多知识，有关于利用光制作的喷雾电影、利用凹凸镜原理制作的看得见摸不着的东西……哇，真是科技真奇妙，我直觉得自己的知识太薄浅了。
你们看了报纸上介绍的武汉的"光谷"了吧，我顶着太阳来到了光谷场，一至三楼都是动漫世界，最让我兴奋的是四楼，这里简直就是一个科技大世界，里面是四核电脑，听介绍这些电脑都是戴尔公司从美国空运过来的，我们也在这些电脑上耍了一盘CS，太过瘾了。还开上了宝马F1赛车，坐在里面的滋味就是不一样。还有激动人心魔兽世界中韩对抗赛，在万人呼喊中，中国队获得了冠军。
