太多专业数据会给人捏造的痕迹,缺乏真实性。考官会质疑数据的出处。
例:A survey indicates that the number of people smoking has increased to as high as 65 percent in China.(一项调查显示。。。)
"65%"让文章看起来有些假,有捏造的嫌疑。"A survey"又不够具有代表性。
这类考生往往缺乏刨根究底的精神,总是在主旨周围绕圈子,不达中心。这也是中国考生的通病,看似八九不离十,却总也不愿把话点破,让考官怎能不又急又气。
在所有的扩展方式之中,因果推理法是最受用也是最透彻的方法。凡事先追溯到其原由,再扩展其结果,这是将主题阐述清晰、论述有力并且具有逻辑感的最佳手段。例如在“出国留学利弊”这一题目之前,若考生单纯说“有可能会使青少年学坏”,难免缺乏说服力,但若紧接着扩展“因为孩子高中毕业后思想上还不成熟,若认识不好的朋友会难以抵抗社会上不好的诱惑”,那么此论点一定会让考官眉头舒展,点头认同。由此可见,善用此推理法会让议论文如虎添翼,事半功倍。
引出原因的表达方式主要有:Because../Since.../As....
引出结果的表达方式主要有:so.../Therefore,.../Consequently,.../Accordingly,... /As a result,.../In this way,.../result in.../Thanks to.../Due to.../ Owing to..
【写作真题】Aircrafts have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or ate out of season. Some people consider it a good trend, but some people oppose it. Discuss.
【名师献计】It is important to note that imports are now increasingly affordable to the general population. Thanks to the rapid development of the freight transport industry, air travel has become an economical mode of transport, resulting in the subsequent decrease in the cost of importing. Meanwhile, technical advance in the food processing industry has made it much easier to preserve fresh fruits and vegetables over a long-haul air flight. Because of the wide availability of imported crops, there are more varieties...
这世界还相当有秩序,人们建的房子排成一排。一条道路要么直,要么弯,要么粗,要么细,反正如果直,那么一直都直,有时也会一段直,一段弯,但还是很有秩序。
太阳不停地上山下山,月亮也不停地变胖变瘦,樱桃树给鸟儿果实吃,鸟儿消化完樱桃后还剩樱桃种子没消化,鸟儿排出粪便后樱桃种子就可以生长了,长成大树再结果,结了果鸟儿再吃果实,吃了再消化……
人们也排队,人也有秩序。人们排的队也是直的或弯的,看起来也很有秩序。
很久很久以前,当世界年纪还小的时候,小鸟开始学飞行,学着在天空中怎么转弯,它也试过做其它的事,可是都没成功。譬如说唱歌,它叽叽喳喳的声音,把这个安静的世界破坏了。
种子学着怎么发芽,学着怎么长高。它也试过做别的,但是都没有成功。比如说跳舞,它丑陋的舞姿把爱美的蝴蝶和蜜蜂吓跑了。
云朵开始学飘浮,它很快就学会了。因为只有一种方式,那就是:一直向前飘呀飘,飘呀飘,飘呀飘……
那时,生活就是那样简单……
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