Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
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起初,影片让人觉得是一个找真凶、证清白的故事。封闭密室中男主的情人被***,他是唯一的在场者,难逃嫌疑。经验丰富、未尝败绩的女律师不满意男主的含糊与闪烁其辞,要求他讲出详细的来龙去脉,于是,一桩隐藏在案件背后的***人案逐渐浮出水面。
一开始以为男主是那种懦弱的男人,因为在他回忆的时候,男主的情人表现得过分坚强。站在女人的角度看,这是很难实现的,毕竟是一条人命。但是男主描述得也太过于夸夸其谈,让人感觉他是其中的受害者。在事故发生之后,男主还淡定的如常生活并且走上他人生的巅峰。伪装得什么事情都没有发生过,特别是跟情人,出事之后也没有跟她有多大的联系,明明是出轨在先,但是他却若无其事。
当所有真相大白的时候,世界上你只关心一个人,那就是你自己。女律师一语道破。接着,她在他对面楼摘下了假发,撕下面具。会自导自演的人永远不只有她一个。那个儿子死于非命的母亲也会。她用精湛的演技骗过了和盘托出的男主,最终让他自取灭亡。
每个人都会从对自己有利的那一面来叙述一件相同的.事。只有永远保持了沉默的死者,任凭活着的人诬赖无法反驳。《看不见的客人》用一个骗子被骗的故事印证了那句古老的箴言:人心莫测。
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很惭愧,开头我也骂了一句孔老二的经典语录“唯女子与小人为难养也”,我为此道歉,没想到最毒的是男人的心。所以,在不知道真相前,为一个角色定性是无稽之谈,不到最后,没有人有权利发表任何结论性言论,否则会后悔的。
就是算1V1的对手戏,也多是靠情绪渲染,情节推动,有时候甚至是靠主演嘶吼或者背景音乐强行尬上高潮。很少有这种不动声色,全靠台词对白让人愉悦,所以这部《看不见的客人》让人比较珍惜。
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影片经过数层反转,像欧亨利小说式结尾一般,既在意料之外,又在情理之中。作为观影者,我完全相信了老太太,如果她真的是律师,绝不逊色古德曼。这也是导演想给观影者的感觉吧,他get到我的点了。一个好导演一定是知道每个情节每个镜头能给观影者带来什么东西的,被导演牵着鼻子走的感觉其实没有那么坏。看一部电影可以有很多方式,我们可以有自己的想法,也可以去感受导演的传递,都不错。
真相的暗示蛮多的,其实当看到老头会做假证的时候应该想到的,无奈我只对美国人脸盲,对法国人不脸盲,所以没及早辨识出真相,应该算作一种乐趣吧,不然观影效果会大大下降的。
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