Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
转眼间,人类社会已经发展成了一个令人惊叹的“多元”社会。它改变了我们的生活,让生活中处处充满了现代科技的气息,比如:智能手机、电脑、电视机、电子计步器、学习机等;就连小朋友的玩具都功能各异:可以一分为三的陀螺、可以手动加速的陀螺、用手抓住都不会停止旋转的爆旋悠悠球。
科技造福了全人类,也使我们的地球变得更加美丽!
一天晚上,我们一家人在一起吃饭,外公望着我给他盛来的香甜可口的米饭,不禁感叹道:“现代科技多么发达呀!你们一定要好好珍惜这美好生活。我们那时,每天能喝到一碗稀粥就满足了,吃树皮树叶的都有呢!现在的稻谷和各种蔬菜、瓜果都种在大棚里,不分春夏秋冬,随时随地都可以吃到营养价值高的食品。”
妈妈也很赞同外公的看法,连忙点头说:“是呀,我们小时候虽然比你外公那时生活条件要好些,但如果饿了,哪还有什么营养食品吃呀,冷干饭泡开水就是我们最喜欢的了。哪比得上现在喝的牛奶都经过了高温灭菌,包装也用的是无菌的。我们当时想喝都喝不着呢!”听了外公和妈妈的一番话后,我也学着用善于发现的眼睛去观察世界,体味生活。
那次,我去爸爸上班的地方――保税商品展示交易中心参观。
一走进大厅,琳琅满目的商品让我眼花缭乱、应接不暇。突然,非洲进口水果展销区吸引了我,也让很多人驻足留连。其中刺角瓜很有意思,外表长得像只金黄色的刺猬,可是果肉却异常细腻、鲜美。还有黄金果,又名五指茄,茄子形的身子下长着五个大“手指”,令我感到惊奇不已。
最让我难忘的是我精心挑选的袖珍南瓜――非洲太阳果。口感面甜,还可以在中间加入冰糖、蜂蜜炖来食用。真是吃到嘴中,甜在心里。擦一擦我那流口水的馋嘴,仿佛自己来到了非洲,再一次让我感受到了时代的变迁和科技的大发展!
同学们,我们在享受科技给我们带来的幸福生活的同时,也要争做科技小能手,好好学习,善于发现和创造,将来为科技的进步,为社会的发展贡献出自己的力量!
细细回味反思,原来和小学相比我们的状态变了:虽然我家距学校不远,但每天早上6点就得从美梦中惊醒,匆匆洗漱、匆匆早餐、再匆匆挤上公交,每天都要和时间赛跑;和小学相比,中学的科目多了,任务重了,时间不够用了。好几次周末跟父母外出,因心中记挂着作业,活动都还没结束,就迫不及待的要提前回来;还有面对精英的群体,神经绷得更紧,学习有压力了;面对新的学习生活问题,父母的帮扶少了,自己独立思考解决的问题多了是啊,走进初中,也许要感受酸甜苦辣的滋味,也许要忍受蚕蛹化蝶的`等待,也许要经历风霜雨雪的洗礼,初中将是人生的第二起跑线!常言道:不以规矩难成方圆,不以六律难正五音。
美心灵,诚德行,礼举止,端仪容,亮气节,存大志,方为雅正。要成为一名优秀的广雅人,在课堂上,我们要安静严肃,专心认真;升旗仪式时,我们要庄重肃穆,整齐有序;课间休息,我们不得打闹喧哗,要文明讲理;做早操时,我们要动作规范,整齐有力。因此只有遵守校纪校规,才能养成良好的道德行为习惯,才能给我们创造一个良好的学习环境。一枝独秀不是春,万紫千红春满园。我们要融入班级这个大家庭,在老师给我们提供安全呵护,指引我们健康成长的同时,我们每一个人也都应该为班级的成长出一份力。
只要我们团结友爱,互相帮助,我们的校园生活就会充满快乐,充满阳光。还记得军训汇演前,我们班站在后面的同学会帮前面的同学整理衣领,比较自信的同学会鼓励心理紧张的同学,这一幕幕赠人玫瑰手有余香的情景,至今还温暖着我的内心。在开班会前,我们班每位同学都是志愿者:有的打扫卫生、有的装饰门墙、有的出黑板报还有的帮老师拿道具,那一时刻我们班流淌着41份快乐!宋代思想家朱熹曾说过:不勤于始,将悔于终。勤奋是学习中最重要的一部分。在初中阶段,学科逐渐系统化,程度不断加深,所谓初一不分上下,初二两极分化,初三天上地下,其实保持勤奋好学的态度是治理这种疾病的灵丹妙药。
因为勤奋,安徒生从一个鞋匠的儿子成为童话王子;因为勤奋,爱迪生才有一千多种伟大的科学发明;因为勤奋,爱因斯坦才得以创立震惊世界的相对论,只有一分耕耘,才能一分收获。学习还要讲究方法。许多同学会因为一次考试的失败变而得闷闷不乐,或放弃努力,或没日没夜拼命做题和恶补,这样反而会增加心理压力和身体负担,适得其反,学习要努力,但不能用身体健康来换。我们要根据自身情况作出分析,制定一个合理的学习计划,学会自主学习,科学的安排时间,提高学习效率。在学习中要学会质疑,举一反三;要养成课前预习,课时听讲,课后复习的好习惯,让学习不再被动。知之者不如好知者,好知者不如乐知者,所以我们要培养学习的兴趣,有了学习的兴趣才会有学习的动力,轻松学习,没有负担。最后,我们还要保持良好的心态,多参加各种有益的课外实践活动。把脸一直向着阳光,这样就不会见到阴影。积极乐观的去看世界,相信我们的世界定会充满希望!
随着科技日新月异的发展,我们的社会突飞猛进,现在生活中有很多我们平常习以为常的事情,现在都变得跟以前不一样了。比如:以前坐公交车我们都会掏一些零钱硬币,但是现在上公交车都是用刷卡了,投币的人也越来越少了,但是这种改变却简化了人们的生活,方便了人们的生活方式。
科技的力量是强大的。记得以前的时候,人们跟远在他乡的朋友家人通话,只能用一台小小的座机,而且不是每家都普及,可能很多人想给远方的亲人打电话,还要跑到邻居家朋友家才能联系上,随着现代社会的发展,人人都有一部手机,人人都有一台电脑,想要联系多远的朋友,都能很快的联系上,而且现在的视频通话也非常的方便,不仅可以听到声音,还可以看到他们在做什么,他们生活的怎么样,生活的好不好,科技真的改变了人们的生活方式。
以前人们出行全部都要靠走着,最多有一辆自行车,有的时候路程比较远,要走好几天,可是现在电动车,摩托车,汽车全部都在大街小巷,家家户户都有,现在出行无论多远对于人们来说都是一眨眼的功夫。这都是科技的力量。
现在的生活真的是越来越方便,而且生活也越来越有乐趣,人们越来越会享受生活,这一切的功劳都源于科技的力量,科技改变了我们的生活,这离不开我们国家科学家的.辛苦劳动,辛苦付出,我非常敬重科学家,没有他们,我们的生活不会发生如此天翻地覆的改变。所以我立志也要成为一名科学人员,能够改变人们的生活,改变人们现有的生活方式。
科技的力量是无穷无尽的。
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