写记叙文要按照事物发展的\'客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。
这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。本文以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。
时常会望着眼前的那一片青青的麦田,那是一片属于我也需要我去耕种的麦田。可以在麦田里捉迷藏,玩扮家家,捏泥巴,捉小虫,或者当“孩子王”领着几个小孩子飞似的在麦田里乱窜,总不免要踩坏踩倒了几颗麦秆,惹来母亲的几声责怪,随后我们被各家的母亲拎回家。总是眷恋与年少时的轻狂与无邪,固执的认为那才是生命中的最本真的年代。丝毫不用顾及自己的责任,而年少的`急躁与任性就像麦田里遇到的干旱和暴雨,总不免损伤了麦田里的麦子,却依旧可以借用“年幼无知”的名义让父母承担结果。
年轻的心不会甘于寂寞,总是会被世俗的种种诱惑所吸引,在外界的万花筒中流连忘返,渐而遗忘了那片麦田,遗落在了心灵最清冷的角落。于是麦田里开始生出杂草,贪婪、嫉妒、仇恨、骄傲和懒惰,我的麦田几乎要被毁灭。心灵的疼痛让我幡然悔悟,及时拔去麦田里的杂草,接受阳光,让心灵获得重生。
守望麦田的生活是枯燥而乏味的,年少的心不愿徒做一个麦田的守望者。于是在麦田里有栽种了外表美丽的玫瑰,象征名誉的君子兰,地位高贵的牡丹花。的确,它们的色彩与身姿胜过单调的麦子,可因此我也要付出更多的精力为呵护娇弱如它,甚至于无暇顾及我的麦田。终于,在一场猛烈的暴风雨过后它们的花瓣洒落一地,互相斜倚着,往日的光彩荡然无存,而我的麦田经过了风雨的洗礼却显得更加生机而又富有活力,他们当中不免会有被暴风雨打败的,但更多的麦子是挺立高昂的,像一群身着军装的战士,向着天穹唱着嘹亮的军歌。我默然了,我开始喜欢麦田,他们不需要大自然太多的装饰。像守卫边疆的战士一般,因为有对祖国的热爱和操守,因为心怀崇高的理想,所以能耐得住寂寞,守得住辛苦。我不禁对眼前的麦田肃然起敬了。
麦田不语,我心释然。
现在的麦田,正值金绿交接的时候,它们却羞于人们的赞美,像红着脸的少女一般,丝毫无意显示她们成长的蜕变。麦子将要成熟,其实成熟的又何止是麦子呢?那不就是我苦苦追寻的“成熟”吗?成熟不拒绝天真,但拒绝幼稚;成熟不反对自我,但摒弃世俗;成熟不厌弃繁华,但懂得取舍。
我站在麦田里,静待麦田的成熟。
青涩的岁月常常是人一生中最缅怀的岁月,未必都是绿树浓荫,远山苍翠的金粉记忆,也许是一次努力后的喜悦,也许是一次失意后的收货,或亦是一次挑战中的成长。
教室中,气氛分外得尴尬,所有人都将头深深地埋进桌子,似乎是想将自己埋进尘埃中。老师正以严峻的目光扫视着我们,好生犀利。不错的\',正是因为运动会,班级里进入了一些低迷状态,轻松简单的项目早已人满为患,一抢而空。只剩下一些无人光顾的项目。你1000米,你400米老师正站在讲台上,挨个挨个地分配任务,而我却听得心惊胆战,依稀能听到我急促的心跳声,像只麋鹿似得到处乱撞。
老师走到我的身边,看了一下报名表,思忖了一会。那一刻,一种不可名状的进账喷涌而出。你就乒乓球吧!啊,可老师我熟悉啊,我惊讶地张大了嘴,都足以塞下一个鸡蛋了。的确,从小学到现在我都对乒乓球毫无兴趣可言,那乒乓球的次数也屈指可数。所以说一定要多加练习。老师推了推眼镜,竟不以为然地走了,只剩下我独自黯然神伤。
接下来的两天,便是疯狂的练习阶段。早晨,当睡眼还未完全睁开,十分朦胧的时候,像是条件反射似得在脑海里便弹出——乒乓球。一股脑便爬起来,迅速地洗漱完毕。
我站在一堵白墙面前,手中无力地拿着乒乓球拍,简直哭笑不得——显然不知该如何下手。管他呢,走一步看一步吧,我将乒乓球直接往墙上一掷,但没想到那球弹力极大,一个反弹,便直接朝我的脑门奔来,那气势简直锐不可当,无人能及,还未来得及躲闪,便吃了一记脑蹦儿。我只好再次捡球,再次往墙上掷去,可是这次又因为力气太轻,球只得滚回脚边。
一次又一次,那个力度却未能保持好,也许这就是乒乓球的难处所在,干脆我放下球拍,直接练习接球的训练。我不断地告诉自己:不积跬步无以至千里,从基础先试试。于是,我便从这最基础的步骤开始练习,经过几十次的失败,我才隐隐约约地掌握力度地大小——而当我稳稳地接过经过几次旋转而又抛下一条优美地弧线时,我都按倷不住自己澎湃的情趣因为我知道我已迈出了一大步。
接着,便是配合着球拍,这需要的不仅仅是快,准,更需要的是一份注意力。当你的注意力稳稳地放在球拍上时,你才能发出一道漂亮的弧线。然而要做到这点,对我来说要比登天般难,刚刚花了那么多的时间,才勉勉强强得接上几个球,但乒乓球拍配合起来,明显便乱了分寸。我开始焦急与迷惘——下个星期就要比赛了,可我这技术还是弱爆了——昏暗的黄昏,拉长了我的身影,那么孤独,我望着背影兀自地发呆,惆怅。飞鸟悄悄舞过,不留一点痕迹,短促的几声蝉鸣划破了寂静。静默了一会儿,站在十字路口上的我,经过一番心理斗争,终于选定方向,我拿起球拍,心中多了个信念成长需要挑战更何况你应该为集体而战。
发球,捡球,发球,捡球我不免想起一句话成功就是一个不断付出的过程即使你失败了99次,也要第100次得站起来,当我能够连续发上5个球时,一道希望的曙光赫然出现在我面前,定眼一看,前方的那轮太阳正徐徐升起。
赛场上,我不断地告诉自己人生需要挑战虽然心里很紧张,但为了自己的梦想也值得奋勇一战。最终我获得了女子组的第三名,那一刻,喜悦瞬间在我全身荡漾开来。
路上,我们会遇倾盆大雨,泥泞寸步难行,丛生的荆棘也许会划破双手——一次次挑战等待着我们,学会奔跑,终将收获那最美的太阳!
作者:李艳丽
it's so late, almost 11:00 at night. have you entered into the sweet dream yet? i haven't seen you for a long time. i miss you so much. can you hear my sincere words? maybe you'll never know i miss you so much!
do you still remember the happy days when we were all together? during those days we were full of sunshine. you and mum often took brother and me to the park. we always saw the ice-cream tear. sometimes, you stayed at home and cooked some delicious food for us. we often waited for you and played with you. you could lift me very high. we always had a good time. you also concerned about my lesson. but you have never chastised me and lectured me. you were full of thoughts for me. what's more, you were my best father in my heart. you were the envy of my friends. i was happy for a long time.but now, all things have changed. you can't take care of me. you aren't at home all day. sometimes, i go to bed late, but i still can't see you. are you busy? no! you often play cards with your work friends in the factory. so you can't go back home early. i'm angry to hear that! do you know? if you don't come back, we'll worry about you. i often see you and mum should divorce in my dream. i'm very scared, because i want to have a happy family. i can't control my tears and often suffer from insomnia the whole night.
dad, i want to see you and talk with you. but i have no courage to tell you. but i hope you can care our family. dad! could you hear my voice?
hope you keep healthy and best wishes.
your lovely daughter
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