电脑已经成了现代的一种很方便的获取信息的工具,它不但可以看新闻、发电子邮件,还可以玩游戏、QQ聊天。我每天都看见那些大人在玩电脑,而且技术都非常的好,于是我迷上了电脑.
只要一有时间,我就会跑到舅妈家去玩电脑,而且一玩就是玩得很久.有一次,我又到舅妈家玩电脑,玩得正高兴,妈妈却叫我回家做作业,我极不情愿地下了楼,依依不舍地回了家。我把作业拿出来,只做了一点点,见妈妈出门买菜去了,就又跑回到舅妈家玩电脑,我专心致志地玩着游戏,就连舅妈进到房间来了也全然不知.
第二天是周末,我又跑到舅妈家去玩电脑,可是到了星期天的晚上,我才想起作业都还没有做完。我着急地把作业本拿出来,匆匆茫茫胡乱做了一番。星期一,老师改作业,自然被老师狠很训了一顿.
还是一个星期六的上午,我刚准备踏出家门去舅妈家大玩一顿,不料被妈妈给叫住了。妈妈大人吩咐我洗菜。我拿着一大袋的菜,心想:这么多菜要洗到猴年马月。为了节省时间,我灵机一动,还是把它放进洗衣机里去洗吧。我跑到洗衣机前,把菜放了下去,只听"哗哗"的一阵声音后,我打开洗衣机盖一看,吓了一大跳,菜都成了沙拉,我向妈妈说了实话,妈妈把我今天去玩电脑的机会给取消了.
电脑,你太让我痴迷了,你是我的最爱!
从前有一只小猫名字叫星卡,它天生非常的活泼,也很灵巧。可是它却没有什么好朋友,因为它非常的爱哭。所以伙伴们都不愿意理它了。它觉得很孤独,也很寂寞。
小猫星卡马上就要上学堂去了,它兴奋极了,因为这样它就可以交到许多的好朋友了。来到学校以后,小猫星卡发现学校里的老师们特别的严格,这里的环境真的是非常的压抑,小猫不喜欢这儿的环境。学本领的时候也没有好好的学习,于是它的本领学得不怎么样。老师很生气觉得小猫笨极了,爸爸妈妈也因此很生小猫的气。小猫星卡于是感到了非常的伤心和难过。它的心在默默的流泪。从此以后,它天天低着头走路,希望能有好运,说不定哪天能意外的捡到一分财宝,然后去换很多的粮食。这样它就可以离家出走了。再也不用受老师和爸爸妈妈的气了。
有一天,小猫星卡像往常一样在森林里低着头幽幽地漫步,忽然看见地上有一个亮晶晶的东西,它走上前去一看,惊喜地发现是地上有一颗明亮的珍珠,这颗珍珠非常的漂亮,还闪着光。小猫星卡心里非常高兴,因为珍珠可是价值不菲的,如果它有了这一颗珍珠,就可以实现心中的愿望了。它正在心里暗自高兴,身边忽然有一个说话的声音。“对不起,这颗珍珠是我的,能不能还给我呀。”小猫星卡顺着声音,抬起头来一看,原来是一只美丽小花鹿,小猫星卡愣了一下,对小鹿说:“你是谁呀,这颗珍珠是我捡到的就该是我的呀。”小鹿听了着急了伤心地说:“可是,这是我妈妈送我的生日礼物呀,如果你不还给我,我就没有妈妈的纪念物了。”小猫星卡有点心软了就把珍珠交还给了小鹿,失望地说:“还给你吧,以后不要再弄丢了。”小鹿笑了,对小猫星卡说:“小猫你真好,谢谢你。”小猫星卡有些不好意思的笑了。于是它低着头准备继续上路找宝贝,小鹿有些好奇望着它问小猫说:“小猫呀,你为什么总是低着头呀,你不觉得这样很累吗?”小猫星卡抬起头看着小鹿说:“没什么,我只是习惯了。”小鹿笑了,对小猫说:“小猫你真傻,你一直低着头,错过了前面多少美丽的景色啊,而且对身体也不好啊会变成驼背的。”小猫一听傻了,因为它从来没有想过这个问题。小鹿说得真的很有道理啊。它最爱漂亮了,怎么能让自己变成驼背呢。小猫星卡望着小鹿真诚地说:“谢谢你小鹿,你愿意做我的好朋友吗?”小鹿笑着说:“愿意啊,只要你愿意就可以。”小猫星卡忙说:“我愿意我愿意啊。”
就这样小猫星卡和小鹿成为了好朋友,它们经常在一起玩,也玩得很高兴。有了朋友以后,小猫星卡,也比从前开朗了许多,学本领的能力也有所进步。老师和爸爸妈妈也都对星卡满意了。有一天小鹿又把小猫星卡约了出来,小猫星卡以为又是找它玩的。可是它看见小鹿和往常有些不一样,它的眼神有点忧郁。小猫星卡好奇地问小鹿:“小鹿你怎么了,为什么不高兴啊?”小鹿说:“小猫以后我不能陪你玩了,妈妈说我们要搬到森林里的小河那边去住,这里的草太少了。小猫有些急了说:“一定要搬吗,能不搬吗?”小鹿笑了看着小猫说:“不行的,你以后学好了本领有空来看我吧。”小猫也傻傻地笑了,确实自己的问题有点傻呀。小鹿把头上的珍珠摘了下来,交给小猫说,这个就作我的临别赠物吧,小猫怔怔地看着小鹿说:“这怎么可以呢,这是***妈送你的礼物啊。”小鹿摇摇头对小猫说,现在我把它送给你,因为你曾是我最好的朋友,看见它就和看见我一样。”小猫很感动,幸福的哭了。
小鹿走了以后,小猫很想它,不过它也决定要练好本领,将来做一个有能耐的小英雄。也可以去看美丽的小鹿。小猫就这样一天天不知不觉地渐渐地长大了,每当小猫看到这颗明亮珍珠,就会想起小鹿这个朋友。珍珠是有价的可是它和小鹿的友谊是无价的。它感觉心里暖暖的,充满了感恩的心,它真的发自内心的觉得自己很快乐。
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
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