I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
要求:1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。2、字数在100字以内。
思路点拨
写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。
这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。
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My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
Hi! Boys and girls! My name is kelly,I am 12 years old. I am a student. I study at XiShan Primary School.I am in Class 1,Grade 5.I have three good teachers. They are Mr Lai, Miss Huang and Miss Lu.
My chinese teacher is Miss Huang. She is beautiful. She wears glasses. She always helps us study and.Music is her favourite. Eevrybody likes her because she has a kind heart.
Miss Lu is our math teacher. She,s very active and smart. She has tress. She,s young and pretty. She,svery strict,but kind. Her class is so much fun.My favourite teacher is Mr Lai. He is our English teacher. He has two small eyes and big mouth. He wears a pair of glasses, too. Because he is a university student. He,s very humoar. He speaks English very well.we like him so much.They are my teachers. Do you like them?
Thank you
每个人的一生都会遇到挫折和打击,但是有的人放弃了,也有的人坚持与挫折对抗,最终打败了挫折,挺过了艰难的一关,人生不可能一帆风顺,每个人也都不可能缩在自己的壳子里度过黯淡无光的一生,所有的雏鹰总有一天要振翅高飞,可振翅高飞,就要面对残酷的挫折和打击。
我学习国画已经有七年了,虽然中途有些磕磕绊绊,但我还是坚持了下来,其实全都因为妈妈对我讲了一句话,宝剑锋从磨砺出,梅花香自苦寒来,还记得那天我学完国画,情绪低落地跟着姑姑从金爷爷家出来。一路上,我们谁都没有说一句话。
回到家里,姑姑叹了一口气,对妈妈说,要不别学了吧,我看娟娟不像是学国画的料,我趴在门缝口听着动静,然而妈妈的回答却是长久的沉默。
下午吃过晚饭,写完作业,我和堂弟跟着妈妈和姑姑去小姨家看望小表弟,一阵寒暄过后,大家走到院子里散散步。这时我蹲下身看见了一只甲虫,小小的',躺在那里,没有了生命,又过了不一会儿,一只蚂蚁觅食到了此处,忙招呼同伴来搬运食物,"面前这个庞然大物其实你能搬动的?"我觉得他们很可笑。
显然蚂蚁也感受到了这个大块头是他们顷尽了微薄之力,也无可奈何的。便走了,我笑了,觉得他们真是螂臂挡车,还不如知难而退,另寻食物呢,就在我看够了好戏准备走的时候,一片黑压压的东西吸引了我的注意,是一片蚂蚁,我吃惊地注视他们齐心协力地抬起甲虫朝蚁穴离去,我愣在原地思绪万千就连小小的蚂蚁都知道坚持不懈的道理,我还在思考是否放弃国画时,小蚂蚁已经完成了任务,我抬起头看着天上的白云。嘱咐自己"锲而不舍,金石可镂,锲而舍之,朽木不折"。
这一次,我不退缩,将来,我也只会超越self。
My chinese teacher is Miss Huang. She is beautiful. She wears glasses. She always helps us study and.Music is her favourite. Eevrybody likes her because she has a kind heart.
Miss Lu is our math teacher. She,s very active and smart. She has tress. She,s young and pretty. She,svery strict,but kind. Her class is so much fun.My favourite teacher is Mr Lai. He is our English teacher. He has two small eyes and big mouth. He wears a pair of glasses, too. Because he is a university student. He,s very humoar. He speaks English very well.we like him so much.They are my teachers. Do you like them?
Thank you
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