十篇英语作文五年级【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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十篇英语作文五年级【二】
日月如梭，我从美国哈佛大学回到了自己思念已久的家乡。
下了飞机，我抬头望了一下蓝如海的天空，闻了一下新鲜的空气，看了一下家乡。家乡完全变了。
我家的旁边原来有一条臭水沟，如今却变成了一条清澈见底的小溪，溪的两旁有许多亭亭玉荡漾在水面上。有时，几只小鸟还会来溪边品味那甘甜的溪水，然后，展现自己美妙的歌声。偶尔，小溪也会跟上鸟儿的节奏，一起唱歌。我走在溪旁，嘴里不禁说到：“独在异乡为异客，每逢佳节倍思亲”，“春草明年绿，王孙归不归。”“自在飞花轻似梦，无边丝雨细如愁。”之类的句子。
回到家，便看到一些人在我家里，一进去看见一位眉清目秀的美女在东张西望，好像在等什么人似的，我过去轻声问了一问：“你在等人吗？”“是的。”听见熟悉的声音，我又问：“你是艾希吗？”“你是易子萱？二十年不见，你的变化太大了！”艾希说。“你也一样。如今你的笑容还是和以前一样开朗。”我说。我们边聊边听家乡的变化。我问：“你们一直在这里工作吗？”“是啊！”同学们齐声说，“家乡有什么变化吗？”我问，“多得很！比如，臭水沟没了，空气更加新鲜了……”
第二天，我来到菜场旁边的小河，坐在小船上，欣赏这美丽的风景。看到这条美丽的小河，脑海里就会浮现出当时的情景来。
我爱我的家乡！那段日子，深深地印在我的脑海中，我一辈子也不会忘记。
十篇英语作文五年级【三】
20年后，我从美国回到了我日夜思念的家乡。
首先映入眼帘的是马路的两旁，简直比花园还漂亮！地上铺满了青草，这青草能吸收废气，呼出新鲜的空气，还拔不掉，也踩不死！还有那一棵棵参天大树，不但能抹去太阳的炎热，还能把热量收集起来，冬天时再把热量散发出来，使人感觉“夏如春，冬如秋”一样。马路也变成平坦又干净的马路。马路还会吸收汽车的尾气，这样，尾气就不会污染环境了。
一路上，我遇到了我的母校——宁波市实验学校。母校变了，变得不再像以前那样，现在的母校像一幢幢楼房一样，又高大又美丽。学校现在的书不是纸做的书了，而是一种电子书。这种书，你只要对着书上的小话筒说出你要学的课文和资料，电子书就会马上帮你查出来。这样就方便多了。
我到了外婆家。外婆家漂亮极了，有机器人保姆、多功能厨房、多功能电视机……机器人保姆可以帮人们干家务。多功能厨房可以教人怎样做可口的饭菜。多功能电视机最大的2个优点是：1、人们对准电视机说一个频道，电视机自动就会调到这个频道。2、如果人们连续5天晚上看这个频道，电视机就会收藏这个频道。
家乡真的变化了许多，家乡真的比我想像中的还漂亮。我爱我的家乡。
