英语作文评分网页【一】
假如你在一间书店(该书店卖各种杂志和书籍里打工，书店的老板是一个英国人。
每天很少顾客光顾，书店老板请你提出一些吸引顾客的建议。
注意：1、用英语表达，词数：120字左右。
2、可以编写对话或使用其他叙述方式。
One possible version：
them with interesting magazines and books．a poster outside announcing subjects of interest，such as music，films，video，football and so on．a special introductory price for first—time customers．Once they have come into the shop they will then see the other attractions．
where they can trade old books for new ones at a special price．in the shop where books and magazines interesting to them are on show．Invite them to come and sit in the comfortable chairs provided to meet their friends and look through books and magazines．
英语作文评分网页【二】
Spring in March, accompanied by the comfortable weather and warm sunshine, our class had a spring outing on Saturday. We went to Renmin Park hold some activities and all of my classmates were so excited that they looked like the birds just coming out from birdcage.
We playing games, boating, and fishing there. At the same time, we enjoyed the beautiful scenery of spring. Some people in the park also joined us and had fun. We had a happy day and the relationship of classmates were getting closer.
英语作文评分网页【三】
Dear Dad,
Long time no see, I do miss you. Well, let me tell you something about my life here.To tell the truth, i live a normal life just as anywhere i can live.(我过着一个在任何地方都普通的生活 My life is revolved on work and work.(我的生活除了学习还是学习Frankly,i feel tired sometimes(老实说，我有时候觉得很累.But i see, studying is the whole life to students like me.(但是我知道，学习是像我这样的学生的全部 So no matter how difficult, i will do my utmost .所以不管多艰难，我都会尽自己最大的努力。
Best wishes for you .
英语作文评分网页【四】
Spring came with ail its glories. The new grass exposed its green colour. The pretty flowers opened their blossoms. We were tempted to go for an outing.
It was Sunday, the 20th of April We set out very early on bikes, carrying bottles of champagne, beer and bags of cakes, bacon and cooked eggs. We rode along the winding paths in the fields, across the meadows and down the roads. The willow were fresh and green. The swallows were flying to and fro, up and down the sky. The birds, like musicians, snang their melodious songs in the trees, and the butterflies, like colorful dancers, were fluttering here and there. We breathed the fresh air deeply and laughed heartily.
At 10 am we arrived at the foot of the Shushan Hill. We left our bikes with a bike repairing shop and began to climb up the Hill. Near the top, under a big tree with luxuri ant foliage we had our picnic. We drank and ate, talked and laughed. After the picnic we stood in the breeze with our hands on our waists, enjoying the fine landscape. Then we lay on the grass talking about our life and studies.
At about 4 pm , we returned with balmy greenness on our backs and freshness in our hearts.
英语作文评分网页【五】
This is my first week in ** Senior Middle School.Everything here is new for me.Our school is an old school but it`s very beautiful.I have 50 new classmates in my class.They`re all very excellent, I think, and I felt a little sad.Because I`m too common.But come to think of it,it`s a very good thing.I believe I can also be very excellent if I study with such excellent classmates.I didn`t know why Ms *** chose me to be the committee of study.But I know it`s a good chance for me to raise my ability.All I can do is do my best in the future.I am sure that Ms *** and my classmates can help me when I do something wrong. Because they`re all very kind.It`s a pleasure to work and study with them.I`m really very happy.I`m not an outstanding student in this class,but I can do the same thing like others.I believe I won`t make anyone disappointed.
