夏天的一个晴朗的早晨,小红到家后面的小山坡上散步,她走着走着看到了一头母牛正用舌头舔一头小牛,忽然小红想到了一个词语“老牛舐犊”。只见小牛轻松的趴在地上,脸上不时发射出幸福的笑容,母牛的脸上充满慈爱,温柔的舔小牛的头。
小红看了这个场面,心里很感动,她对小牛说:“小牛,你真幸福哟!小牛,你有世界上最宝贵的财富——母爱!小牛,你要珍惜母亲的爱,长大了要好好孝顺它啊。”
教师评语:此篇文章对图画有生动的.描述,能解读出图画的温暖之处在哪里,作者感情抒发的很到位,立意浅显而耐人寻味,富有丰富的意蕴,情感真挚,富有哲理,值得一读。
Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.
Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?
Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.
周末,爷爷带着小明去散步,小明吃完香蕉后,随手把香蕉皮丢到马路上。爷爷看见了一脸严肃地说:小明你不能把垃圾乱丢在马路上,赶快捡起来吧!因为香蕉皮很滑,如果有人踩到了很容易摔倒。孩子,还有要从小养成讲究卫生的习惯哦,保护环境爱护我们的家园,人人都有责。你明白这个道理吗?小明一边回答:明白啦,明白啦!一边迅速把香蕉皮捡起来放进路边的垃圾箱里。爷爷满意地笑了,小明也会心地笑了。
这篇看图写话作者能结合图意讲卫生大胆想象,把图上所反映的内容通过语言、动作、表情生动地再现出来,并且切入主题反应出一个道理,从中看出小作者的写作功力已经初步地显现出来。
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