myfriend英语作文七句话四年级【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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myfriend英语作文七句话四年级【二】
自从上了四年级，电子琴就以它的魅力深深的吸引了我，妈妈采纳我的意见，给我报了电子琴培训班，我欣喜若狂，走进教室开始了第一节课，起初几节课的'歌曲挺简单，我还弹得挺不错。可学到《梁祝》主题曲时，我怎么弹都弹不好，坏脾气就上来了。因为在家里，我总是练不好曲子，不是认错了谱子就是弹错音，弹了半天连半个曲子都练得半生半熟，那更不要说把一首完整的曲子弹好了，我如一只疯狂的狮子，跳着、叫着、用手拍着琴，眼里噙着泪水，心想：老师的手在琴键上飞速的行径着，在琴键之间跳动着，一阵阵美妙的琴声随之而来，令人不由自主地跟着哼了起来，而我细长的手指在琴键上却十分笨拙，这下可好了，一拿自己和老师作对比，我火气更大了，一颗颗金豆豆 从我眼中滚了出来，可是这些带火气的金豆豆 并没有让我情绪得到一点好转，我的眼泪流得更凶了，我拼命拍打着琴，认为这样就可以减轻痛苦，客厅里传来爸爸的脚步声，我感紧胡乱一抹眼泪假装弹起了曲子，可是拍琴声终究没有逃脱爸爸的耳朵，爸爸走进房间对我说：不是任何事情都可以用生气来解决，把弹琴当作是一种享受，把一点一滴的失败当成自己前进的道路。 我闭上眼睛，心里想着爸爸对我说的话，努力让自己心平静下来，随着心情的平静，我感觉自己仿佛就是贝多芬，正在舞台上演凑着。
终于，经过我的不懈努力，我的指尖在琴键上跳起了优美的舞，随着舞蹈者的跳起和降落，跳舞的速度和节拍，一首悲伤而悦耳的曲子传进我的耳朵里，她仿佛在向我诉说着古时候梁山伯与祝英台的凄凉故事。
在爸爸的话语下，我改掉了我的坏脾气，这句话让我永生难忘。它是我的指路标，是我的照明灯。
myfriend英语作文七句话四年级【三】
上个星期四中午，我们班就开始停课了，到今天我们班还在停课。
这个周一早上，我和弟弟一起去爸爸厂里玩（因为我弟弟的班也在停课）。
星期一，没有停课很多小朋友都要去上学，而我和弟弟却都到爸爸厂里玩，这让厂里好多大人很意外。
黄伯伯率先问我们两个，“你们今天怎么不上学啊？今天可是星期一啊。”我们就回答黄伯伯，“因为我们班停课，我们呆在家里没事情干，就过来了。”“哦，原来如此。”黄伯伯恍然大悟。接着我们跑去妈妈办公室。
进了妈妈的.办公室，第一眼就见到了小静姐姐，小静姐姐见到我和弟弟来了，大吃一惊，“你们两个今天怎么没有上学啊？”我们又是同样的回答：“因为我们两个的班都停课，我们就和爸爸妈妈一起到厂里来了。”“哦，明白了。”
我和弟弟来到楼梯那边玩，不知不觉那个平时有位被我们称之为“西瓜”的人站在了我们的身后，我们转过来对“西瓜”笑了一下，西瓜就问我们，“你们今天怎么没有去上学啊！？”我们异口同声地回答“西瓜”，“我们两个人的班停课！”“哦，知道了。”
我和小弟弟又在走廊上遇见了金叔叔，他也问了同样的问题，“你们两个今天怎么没有去上课啊？”我悄悄对小弟弟说：“小弟弟，我们已经说过n次同样的话了，这次我们不回答了，直接逃吧！”小弟弟点点头，就赶快逃了。
每见到一个大人，他（她）总会问：“你们两个今天怎么没有去上学？”实在是太烦了，每个人都要问一回，我们回答很累啊！早知道今天就不去爸爸厂里玩了。
