中考,意味着辛勤工作后梦想的收获;意味着汗水浇灌出成功的花朵;意味着努力奔跑后冲破终点的喜悦。中考,应当是一个温暖的字眼。
假如明天就中考,我要以一个宁静的心情去参加考试,让中考见证我辛勤奋斗的历史;挑灯夜战,孜孜不倦,只因心中拥有梦想。我要让中考实现自己的梦想;走进理想的高中,海阔凭鱼跃,天高任鸟飞。我要让中考见证我的辉煌,为自己的向前迈进注入一份信心,一份新的力量。七月,收获的季节。
假如明天就中考,我会花时间记住每一个同学,有互相帮助的友谊,有互相打闹的纯真,有互相关怀的.感动,有互相体谅的理解。我痛苦并快乐着。我会用自己最真挚的心,来为每个同学祝福;我会用最真诚的泪,溶化初中生活的一切苦辣酸甜;我会让眼泪变为珍珠埋藏在心底,成为一生最宝贵的记忆。六月,流泪的季节。
最难忘却师长的谆谆教诲、父母的字字关心。假如明天就中考,我会用成绩来报答老师的辛勤培养。我要用那张重点高中录取通知书来报答母亲煞费苦心的唠叨、父亲被时光染白的鬓角。我要以骄人的成绩,留给父亲最深的感动。爸妈,你们绝不会白白付出,我也绝不让你们白白付出。六月,感恩的季节。
假如明天就中考,我不会感叹时光流失太快,一转眼便三年。因为我拥有青春,拥有大把的光阴。假如天就中考,我要让它使我的青春更加绚丽多姿,我要让成功的花朵更加娇艳美丽,我会让它把人生装扮得更加充实无憾。六月,装扮的季节。
假如明天就中考,那么便让它快些来它!我要以一个胜利者的姿态征服它,让它重新刷洗我的人生。中考应当可以温暖人的一生。
1。 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者,使人到真实可信,如身临其境。如:
The other day, I was driving along the street。 Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast。 I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side。 But it was too late。 The car hit my bike and I fell off it。
用第三人称叙述,优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制,而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者,直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前,文章的客观性很强。如:
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard。 On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover。 Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short。 What could he do? Then he had a good idea。
2。 动词的时态
在记叙文中,记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高,且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的',这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化,正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3。 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙,都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作,较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙,读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果,让所叙之事跌宕起伏,使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃,从而为文章所吸引,深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当,则容易弄巧成拙,使文章结构散乱,头绪不清,让读者不知所云。
4。 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如:
In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things。 Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao。 It is really a beautiful city。 There are many places of interest to see。 But what impressed me most was the sunrise。
The next morning I got up early。 I was very happy because it was a fine day。 By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red。 In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing。 The sun was very red, not shining。 It rose slowly。 At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball。 At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright。
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5。 叙述与对话
引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述,可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态,使记叙生动、有趣,使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果:
I was in the kitchen, and I was cooking something。 Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front。 I thought maybe someone was knocking the door。 I asked who it was but I heard no reply。 After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor。 I realized it was the cat。 I felt released。
这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字,但经作者这么一写,就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式,没有人物语言,把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整:
I was in the kitchen cooking something。 "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front。 Thinking someone was knocking at the door, I asked, "Who?" No reply。 After a while, I saw my cat running across the parlor。 "It's you。" I said, quite released。
明天就是过独木桥的日子,我在"题海"中忙碌着,欣然发现:"忙"也可分为下中上等。忙的时候叫踏实,很忙的时候叫充实;忙得气都喘不过来时,反倒会气急败坏。心里骂着万恶的应试教育时,嘴里还不时的嚷嚷到:"孙子才考高中呢!"可偏偏还得干孙子要***事。
老爸进来了,手里拿着茶杯:"来,喝杯牛奶吧!"我无精打彩地接过茶杯,感觉很紧张。老爸拍了拍我的肩,无声的笑了笑,当我以为老爸的."临考动员"已"千呼万唤始出来",不料竟"犹抱琵琶半遮面"。"好好考吧!"相对无言,心里却比长篇大论还要令人心情沉重。
老妈也"粉墨登场",端着碗小米粥,叫我停下来休息一会儿,一边心疼地摸着我的手:"Look,手都生老茧了。"妈妈拍了拍我的头,便走出了房间。
想想中考也离我不远了,三年的艰辛尽在着一考,成王败寇就在这一息之间。我多么希望这一天不要来临,可我知道这一天迟早要来临的。
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
导入:
第1段:Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文:
第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
结论:
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
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