六年级英语作文冬季【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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六年级英语作文冬季【二】
冬季，在大家心中都有对它不一样的怎么看。有人说：“它是纯洁无瑕的。”有人说：“它太单调了，除去白色，还有哪些色彩？”有人说：“它太孤独了。”而我说：“冬季是一个漂亮的季节。”
飞雪悄悄来到人间，为一望无边的田野盖上了一层厚厚的“棉被”。雪飘自如，好似从天而降的小妹妹，唱着歌儿，在空中开心的玩耍；它们身着白衣，在天空中飞舞盘旋就像是一位位舞蹈家，在跳着优美又轻快的芭蕾；雪花在地上打着滚，日渐滚入了一个雪堆里，消失的不见踪影。
站在窗前，假如你仔细看，会发现，冬季正在上面作画，好似一张张剪纸，贴在窗上，栩栩如生，被人不禁浮想联翩，身临其境。打开窗户，窗外白雪皑皑，好像一眼望不到边；空中鹅毛大雪，将大地冲洗的被人美到窒息。
哪个说它就只有白色了？它还有腊梅！朵朵梅花在枝头竞香开放，梅香幽幽，正如“遥知不是雪，为有暗香来”的清幽之美。腊梅的花瓣是金黄色的，甚至有的透明。可假如那颜色太浓了，就少了这份清高的孤傲；假如太淡了，就少了这份对寒冬不畏惧的毅力。所以这是任何一位大师都临摹不出的风韵，梅花在雪的衬托下，好像多了一丝妖娆；香味在空气中愈加迷人清爽。梅不愿与群花在春季竞相开放，它独秀一方，这不禁被人想到了柳宗元、鲁迅等著名人物。
小孩们见下雪了，就开始撒欢了，他们在雪中蹦跳着，有些打雪仗，有些堆雪人，有些滑冰，有些滑雪，玩的不亦乐乎，他们为冬季增添了一处别样的风景。
啊！冬季是漂亮的！
六年级英语作文冬季【三】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的\'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
六年级英语作文冬季【四】
一提到冬季，大家就自然感到冷落、枯木萎草的景色联系在一块，好像冬季是无情无义的。然而，我今天却要为冬季呐喊一声，赞美家乡冬季那高尚的风格。
家乡的冬季很美，虽然没雪花飞扬的风雅景色，大雪遍地的壮观秀丽风光，但它在我心中却是个“宝地”。老舍先生对济南冬季的山山水水是那样的一往情深。在他眼里，济南的冬季所有都是那样的美，所有都是那样的可爱。是一方“宝地”，一个“理想的境地”。我像老舍一样，但他是对济南，而我却对自己家乡的冬季也是那样一往情深。
济南的冬季是温情的，而我家乡的\'冬季是很漂亮，为何漂亮呢?下面由我一一介绍：我的家乡冬季时遍地也都是绿色，家乡的河边种满了松柏树，松柏的生命力顽强，它在冬季是最后凋落的。孔子也曾说过“岁寒，然后知松柏之后凋也”。
我家乡的冬季和济南的冬季一样。这里虽不像济南一样下雪，却一样是温暖家适的。在这里农田把家乡围了一个圈，这一圈农田在冬季特别可爱，仿佛把我的老家放在一个小摇篮里呵护着，感到温馨和温暖。
我的家乡虽不像济南，但它依然是漂亮的，我想它给人就是一种美的享受，但人陶醉其中，感觉温暖和舒坦，让人回味无穷……
六年级英语作文冬季【五】
冬季来了，雪花悠悠扬扬地落下来，落在树梢上，树梢白了；落在屋顶上，屋顶白了：落在大地上，大地白了。这个时候，脑子里只剩下了一个字“美”。
雪花是美的。洁白的雪花像千万朵小小的云彩飘落下来，不是十朵，不是百朵，更不是上千朵，而是成千上万朵。它们形态各异，各不相同，什么“三棱六角”，什么“七棱八角”，哪个能说大自然不是最神奇的魔术师呢？雪话似那一群婷婷玉立的小仙女，成群结队从空中飞来，难道这不是大自然给大家的恩赐？
最好看的的还是要数梅花。“雪似梅花，梅花似雪，似和不似都奇艳。”写的梅与雪交相辉映时的情景，远看上去一位仙风道骨的老人面对微笑，近来也似仙女穿着七彩霓裳欲要离去。在这梅雪交映的美景，我仿佛就是一棵树，头发长成树冠，胳膊变成树枝，脚下长出跟须，深深扎进冰冷的泥土，冒着风雪，傲然挺立。“风递幽香出，禽窥素艳来”，皑皑白雪中红梅挺立，是否别有通常境界呢？
冰棱也是美的。那些挂在屋檐下的冰棱是最好看的的，在阳光的照耀下五彩缤纷，光彩夺目。长长的冰棱就像一把把长剑，一块块水晶，这就是冰的无限魔力。
墙角数枝梅，凌寒一个人开。遥知不是雪，为有暗香来。这就是漂亮的冬季！
