changes in me 英语作文六年级【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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changes in me 英语作文六年级【二】
This afternoon I went to the park which was built recently near my home.In the park,I saw many beautiful flowers and trees.The air was quite fresh and brids sang happyly.All the people there were singing,dancing and playing games.What a lovely place!
今天是五天。我去公园与我的家人庆祝这个节日。那里是许多人在公园里。他们中的一些人被拍照，别人是去观光。多么幸福地看着他们。
今天下午我去最近建成的我家附近的公园。在公园里，我看见许多漂亮的`花和树。空气很新鲜，鸟儿地歌唱。所有的人那里是唱歌，跳舞和玩游戏。多可爱的地方！
changes in me 英语作文六年级【三】
Early morning，sun farther—in—law showed smiling face，small alarm clock “ bite the bell bites bell “ the ground cries，seem to saying：“Beautiful，should get up！Should get up！！
Li Lixing，see sun farther—in—law came out，asperse on pale green branch full bright sunshine。 Li Li wore a beautiful powdery dress，wore a sky—blue pants again。 At this moment，transmit outside the window “ chirp “ cry，li Li looks up to look，a birdie is crying，seem to saying：“Li Li has breakfast quickly，I and you go to school together。 I and you go to school together。
Li Li eats breakfast rapidly，carry small satchel on the back，go to school together with birdie。
changes in me 英语作文六年级【四】
最近一直阅读了读一本英文书《me before you》，因为被小说的情节吸引，但每天的阅读量是固定的，不能超量，于是我按耐不住看了电影版，总体上来说还是不错的，至少男主的笑容很有魅力，我非常喜欢。
就像电影中的女主，如果你把自己限定在某个范围或者区域里，你就无法真正认识你自己，无法去发掘更多的潜力与可能。因为车祸而高位截瘫的will曾是那么热爱生活，后来却被困在小小的轮椅之上，尽管家庭富足，他不用担心生计，但是，那曾经可以自由驰骋，自由翱翔的心灵是不堪囚禁的。他与父母约定的在他选择安乐死之前再活半年。半年里，lou的到来给了他爱与快乐，却未能改变他要结束生命的决定。看到will选择在lou和家人面前安乐死的时候，我忍不住落泪，但若换成我，我也一定会像will一样。
不是玛丽苏的结局，will虽选择了离开，却给lou留下打开了新世界的希望和资源。她不再因为家庭的经济来源问题被困在那个小镇，她可以自信地穿着最爱的大黄蜂条纹打底裤，坐在巴黎的街头，品味着经典的苦咖啡和新出炉的牛角包，然后微笑着走进那家香水店，购买will推荐的`那款适合她的香水，带着will给她的永恒的爱与希望前行。
结局虽不圆满，却是最好的，因为will不用再过每天睁开眼就期待这一天结束的日子，心灵不会再被身体禁锢，因为lou终于可以去过自己的生活，去看更大的世界……
will应该从来没想过自己会被一辆摩托车毁掉一生。生命或者说生活永远都是未知的，我们无法窥探未来，或许，解放自己，过好自己的每一天，去发现，去尝试才不枉生活。但在我们的文化中，各种关系和羁绊很多时候你是无法放下的，因为就算你是对的舆论的压力太大。
在过去的一年里，应该很多人都觉得很累，或许这已经是一种常态了。上班的人有太多迫于生活的压力而发条式的前进着，全职妈妈们也疲于24h全年无休的工作。或许，我们都需要一点点时间，一点点空间，去疗愈我们自己，哪怕只是看几页我们喜欢的书，或者看一部我们喜欢的电影，哪怕是在阳光明媚的午后，坐在窗前静静地发会呆，释放一下心流，又哪怕只是听一首歌，品一杯茶……只要我们是全身心的陪伴自己。
