您好!
您知道吗?每当我走过语音室时,总会透过明净的玻璃窗去看看里面的设备,语音室里的一切对于我来说都是那么新奇,那么吸引人。跟着您,在高科技设备装配的语音室里学英语,是我当时最大的愿望。可是,自语音室建好以来,您从未带同学们进去参观过,更没带同学们进去上过一节课,这使得我的愿望变得那样渺茫。
王老师,记得您每次在我们教室里上课时,起码有三分之一的同学在小声说笑,因此,教室里总是乱哄哄的`,可您却很少制止。王老师,维持课堂秩序是您的职责呀,您为什么不去制止他们?还有,您每次提问学生时,一旦同学回答不上来,您总会露出一副不耐烦的神情,为此,许多同学感到很伤心,好多同学也不喜欢上您的课。
王老师,学校培育了我五年,我希望学校越办越好,希望老师能教得开心,我们也能学得开心。因此,我诚心诚意地给您提几条建议,希望您能采纳。
一、每周带同学们到语音室上一次英语课。
二、您不要不管那些上课小声说笑的同学。作为一名教师,您有责任对他们进行批评和教育。
三、今后,请您对那些回答不上问题的同学多一些宽容和理解,并耐心地讲解,这些同学会非常感激您的,他们也会越来越喜欢您的。
王老师,如果您能采纳我的建议,我将十分开心。我坚信您一定会成为我们心中的好老师!
祝您工作顺利!
您的学生:张辉君
3月26日
今天,我们全家到莫干山游玩。莫干山空气特别新鲜,到处都是竹子,而且是个非常有名的旅游胜地。
我们来到莫干山山脚下,一排排竹子环绕着山路,一直通向山顶,像一条“竹子龙”在欢迎我们。我向山顶望去,一座座大山在白茫茫的云雾中呈现出来。我们接着就开始爬山了,妈妈告诉我:“这山有点陡,要想爬到山顶有点难,需要有一定的信心和体力”我笑着说:“我一定行的”。我们爬到半山腰,我实在走不动了,就坐在石头上不想走了,但是爸爸和妈妈已经走在了前头,我想到了妈妈的话,站起来憋足劲,一股作气赶过了他们,妈妈在后面直喊:“等等我”,我偷偷地直乐。
我们来到望月台,我往下一看,哇!好美的景色呀!美丽的剑池山泉从山上哗哗流下来。我还看见避暑山庄里有许多外国游客,妈妈说:“这些外国人每到假期就会到山上来度假”,我非常兴奋,外国游客还和我打招呼呢,可我只会说:“Hello,Hello”,而他们说的话我一句也没听懂。
回家的路上我再也无心游玩了,我想:今天虽然我没能和这些外国游客交谈,回去后我一定认真学习英语,再过几年,我来莫干山玩时遇到外国游客,我就会非常流利地和他们交谈,我还会介绍莫干山更多美丽的景色呢!
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:
互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:
Early morning,sun farther—in—law showed smiling face,small alarm clock “ bite the bell bites bell “ the ground cries,seem to saying:“Beautiful,should get up!Should get up!!
Li Lixing,see sun farther—in—law came out,asperse on pale green branch full bright sunshine。 Li Li wore a beautiful powdery dress,wore a sky—blue pants again。 At this moment,transmit outside the window “ chirp “ cry,li Li looks up to look,a birdie is crying,seem to saying:“Li Li has breakfast quickly,I and you go to school together。 I and you go to school together。
Li Li eats breakfast rapidly,carry small satchel on the back,go to school together with birdie。
亲爱的海青:
我知道你现在闷闷不乐,感到很难过。但是,我并不认为你应该如此。
我知道你的家庭不富裕,所以你父母买不起名牌给你,这使你不高兴。但是他们送你来学校读书,使你能够接受良好的.教育并有一个光明的未来,这对你的父母来说并不容易。你应当考虑一下你的父母。不要要求得到超出你父母能力范围的东西,不要爱慕虚荣。
我也认为你应该将精力投入到学习中去。读更多的书,你能从中学到很多。没有名牌的攀比,我想你会变得快乐。
希望能帮助消除不快。祝你快乐。
你的朋友 黄平
A Letter to Haiqing
Dear Haiqing,
I am very sorry to learn that you are unhappy now. But I don‘ t think you should be unhappy.
I know that your iamily is not rich. So your parents can‘ t afford to buy you something of famous brands, which makes you unhappy. But they have sent you to school so that you can receive good education and have abreght future. This is not easy for your parents. So you should think about your parents. Don‘t ask for something that is out of your parents‘ reach. Don‘ t be vain-glorious.
I also thind you should put your heart into study. Read more books and then you can get a lot from reading. Without the famous brand competition you will become happy.
I hope I can help you out of unhappiness. Wish you happy.
Yours,
Huang Ping
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