英语作文五年级30个词左右【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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英语作文五年级30个词左右【二】
一天中午，要吃饭了，调皮父亲和宝贝妈妈已经就坐了。
可看到儿子小刺猬头的位置上却没有影，调皮父亲于是就问：“我亲爱的老婆大人，您因该知道小刺猬头在哪吧。”宝贝妈妈指着书房说：“全地球人都知道。”于是父亲大步流星的向书房里走去，大声说道：“我的小刺猬头皇帝，该用膳了。”调皮父亲看里头没动静，便走进书房，打开书房门一看，小刺猬头正趴在地上专心致志的看书呢！调皮父亲就用手一把，把小刺猬头的耳朵揪了过去，大喊道：“哥们，该吃饭了，再不吃饭就不够哥们了。”小刺猬头故做害怕的说我的不良青年老大。”调皮老爸心想：这小兔崽子每天到这个时候都会去找人玩的，怎么这几天居然呆在书房里好好的看书，我这个聪明绝顶的父亲可要好好查查，什么《幽默大师》。说着就趴在地上、手托腮边，看起《幽默大师》起来。当小刺猬头坐在位置上时可调皮父亲的位置上却空空如也，宝贝妈妈发话了：“我们就再等一下秃头太监。”小刺猬头说：“喳，娘娘。”过了十分钟后调皮父亲还没有来。饭菜都凉了，宝贝妈妈又发话了：“小刺猬头，你给我去把秃头太监喊来。”小刺猬头心想：他刚刚恶整了我，这一次我要报仇。小刺猬头打开书房的门，看见调皮父亲像一匹马一样趴在地上，小刺猬头赶忙坐了上去嘴里叫着驾驾，还用手不停的拍打调皮爸的屁股。调皮父亲忙起来说：“大人，你把这本书借我看行吗？求你了。”小刺猬头仍然是不领情,父亲求了再求，小刺猬头终于答应了。小刺猬头便拿起“奏折”念道：“奉天成命，皇帝召曰，快去吃饭。”调皮父亲说：“喳！”
瞧！这对父与子高兴的出去了。
英语作文五年级30个词左右【三】
小区里住着一户三口之家，三个人过着幸福的生活。
今天是周末，母亲炖了一锅乌鸡汤，准备给每天努力上学的儿子和每天早出晚归上班赚钱的父亲好好儿的补一补。
父亲正坐在餐桌边的沙发上看球赛呢。他早就闻到了鲜美鸡汤的香气，心里暗喜道：老婆可是蓝翔技校毕业的，肯定很好喝的，多喝些！
不久，厨房里响起了甜美的声音：“吃饭啦！快来盛饭——”
父亲听见呼唤，立即放下遥控器，赶忙去帮着盛好饭，然后，安静地乖乖坐好了，以向母亲表现出自己的听话。
另一边，儿子的房间里门紧闭着，没有动静。这个吃货儿子今天有点异常。原来是一本漫画牢牢地吸引了他。你看，他正趴在地上，双手支撑着下巴，静静地盯着眼前的'书。漫画书中的画页精彩绝伦，以致使他入了迷，甚至都没有听见妈妈的叫声，也没注意从门缝中钻进来的缕缕香气。
忙碌的母亲突然注意到了还没出现的儿子，便派父亲前去叫唤。
“儿子，吃饭啦！看什么好东西呢？”父亲推开门，拉起儿子，使了一个手势示意他出去。
他在看什么呢？好奇的父亲临出门前瞄了一眼书。没想到，这一瞄之后，那本书竟如有磁力一般把父亲生生拉住了，使他不由自主地俯下身去，然后慢慢坐下看起来，最后竟然就如孩子般趴着读起来，嘴角溢满微笑......
此时，餐桌上，那碗乌鸡汤的香气诱得儿子口水直流。母亲看了儿子一眼，用手指了指房间，让儿子去把父亲叫出来。
儿子把门一推，发现了那个置身书中的父亲，竟与他方才没什么两样。
哈哈，这真是一对在同个模子里刻出来的父与子！
英语作文五年级30个词左右【四】
苹果是一种营养丰富，用处多，样子漂亮的水果。
我来诶你介绍一下苹果。苹果的外形漂亮，像一个红彤彤的大气球。苹果的形状却像一个小拳头那么大，但是味道很好。吃上去脆脆的，你会觉得一股香甜的气味扩散开来。如果你摸一下滑滑的苹果，你会觉得像鸡蛋一样光光的。如果你仔细看苹果的皮，你会觉得小点和黄条和在一起会像一副油画。
苹果不但外形漂亮，味道香甜，作用也很多。儿童经常吃苹果，可以促进大脑发育，增强记忆力。这是因为苹果不仅富有大脑所需的营养成分，而且含有有益于儿童生长发育的纤维和能增强记忆的锌。
苹果还含有一种神奇的“苹果粉”，苹果粉的作用可就大了去了。苹果粉具有七种功效：一是抗氧化作用，可保持食物新鲜；二是消除异味，可去鱼腥口臭；三是预防蛀牙；四是能抑制血压上升；五是能抑制活性氧发生；六是抑制黑色素；七是能抑制过敏。
苹果还有很多别称呢！比如“明目果”。为什么叫“明目果”呢？因为它含有对视力起关键作用的维生素A和微量元素硒。除了“明目果”还有“记忆果”等很多别的名称。
接下来我给你讲个关于苹果的新闻，美国人在一天定了一个苹果日。就是一天不吃东西光吃苹果。因为苹果能分散脂肪让人变瘦。
苹果的`营养很丰富。苹果里含有蛋白质，脂肪，碳水化合物，维生素C，维生素B2，胡萝卜素，以及钙，磷，酸，柠檬酸，等有机物和纤维及果酸胶。
苹果是一种对身体非常好的水果，大家一定要多吃一些苹果！
英语作文五年级30个词左右【五】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
英语作文五年级30个词左右【六】
哐啷一声，一颗皮球砸碎了窗户上的玻璃，直直地飞了出来，在地上的玻璃渣上打转。嘿，臭小子，叫你调皮。别跑！父亲竖着眉头，胡子都气得了立了起来，大步向前追着。
他的前面也有一个人，一边奋力向前奔跑，一边上气不下气地说爸爸，对不起，我错了，别追我啦！刚说完，就跑了个没影儿。臭小子，别叫我再见到你！
父亲仍在生气，低着头看着报纸不吭声，紧紧皱着眉，愤恨地盯着报纸，好像要盯出两个洞来，没一会儿，父亲就开始有些焦虑，只得硬着头皮继续读下去。咦？那小子究竟哪儿去了？父亲心想，把手中的报纸拿倒了也浑然不觉。
父亲有些坐立不安起来，他放下了手中快要被翻烂的报纸坐起身来，紧紧皱着眉头。儿子刚才自己跑出去了，现在人贩子这么多，儿子才那么点大，被坏人拐跑了怎么办？说不定就再也见不到了！父亲心想。钟摆一摇一晃，父亲也开始心神不安，在客厅来回踱步。
不行，我得找他去。父亲拿上帽子，外套也没穿，就匆匆走出去，用手扩成一个音筒，大声喊道：儿子，回来吧，你在哪儿啊？父亲见许久没有回应，急得直冒冷汗，爸爸错了，你回来吧！
父亲找了好久好久，带着失望和自责回到了家门口时，一个皮球从玻璃窗里飞了出来，还是熟悉的力道，嘭的一声，球砸到了父亲的头上，还打飞了帽子。本该生气的父亲此刻欣喜若狂，一把抱住了正准备落荒而逃的儿子，流下了两滴泪水，也不管什么所谓的男山有泪不轻弹，没忍住掉了两滴眼泪。儿子则在为自己逃过了一劫而高兴。父亲哭着说道：儿子，对不起啊，爸爸下次不打你了。不要再乱跑了儿子听了这话，紧张地说道：爸爸，那个我又打碎了一扇窗户也没事？
父亲一听这话，立刻从找到儿子的惊喜中脱离开来，大声吼道：你小子站住，别以为我会放过你！爸爸，我就知道你会骗我，我错了
