英语老师如何批改作文更有趣【一】
很多人吐槽“听了很多道理，依然过不好这一生！”。这其中最重要的原因是，多数人只停留在听这个层面，有一部分人停留在听懂这个层面，只有很少一部分人是不但听懂，而且还去做了。
读书也是一样的道理。比如读完《小狗钱钱》这本书，你可能对“会下金蛋的鹅”印象深刻，你也懂得理财的八字真言：多买资产，少买负债。那你就应该马上践行这个想法：首先，开始记账。然后，通过记账减少那些不必要的开支。最后，去买那只“会下金蛋的鹅”——资产。
再举个例子，有10个好友看我投资指数基金收益不错，想进一步了解。我先推荐给他们一本《指数基金投资指南》，一个月后得知，有7个人买了这本书，有3个人读完了这本书，最后只有1个人开了户，经常和我交流，而且已经开始定投了。
正所谓“纸上得来终觉浅，绝知此事要躬行”，要想过好这一生你得去践行。
英语老师如何批改作文更有趣【二】
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先，提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段：提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段：正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段：摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次，提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性，连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity：段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛，也不可太具体，做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明，另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence：关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰，层层展开。
完整性(completeness：以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头，这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次，提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型：It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单，注意练习并接句的使用，会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as，如：
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头，句式简单，我们可以通过把since提前改变句式，如：
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后，提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法：millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论，辩论”的意思，而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.，相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略：使用最近所学的单词，如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后，我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文，以供参考：
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
英语老师如何批改作文更有趣【三】
Expert tips on how to prevent avian influenza H7N9 collated by current argument data dictionary
1.平时加强体育锻炼，多休息，避免过度劳累，不吸烟，勤洗手;注意个人卫生，打喷嚏或咳嗽时掩住口鼻。
1 usually strengthen physical exercise, rest more, avoid excessive overworked, do not smoke, wash their hands; pay attention to personal hygiene, when sneezing or coughing and cover your nose and mouth.
2.保持室内清洁，使用消毒液清洗的地毯，避免使用难以清洗的地毯，保持地面、天花板、家具及墙壁清洁，确保排水道通畅;保持室内空气流通，应每天开窗换气两次，每次至少10分钟，或使用抽气扇保持空气流通;尽量少去 空气不流通的场所。
2 keep the room clean, use disinfectant cleaning carpets, avoid the use of hard to clean the carpet, keep the floor, ceiling, furniture and walls clean, to ensure smooth drainage channel; maintains the indoor air circulation, ventilation windows should be at least two times a day, 10 minutes each time, or use a fan to keep air circulation; as little as possible to airless places.
3.注意饮食卫生，进食禽肉、蛋类要彻底煮熟，加工、保存食物时要注意生、熟分开;养成良好的卫生习惯，搞好厨房卫生，不生食禽肉和内脏。解剖活(死家禽、家畜及其制品后要彻底洗手。
3, pay attention to food hygiene, eating meat, eggs should be thoroughly cooked, processing, preservation of food to the attention of raw, cooked separately; develop good health habits, good kitchen hygiene, do not eat raw poultry meat and offal. Anatomy of living (dead to wash hands thoroughly, livestock and poultry products.
同时，在户外洗手不方便的时候，可以使用免洗洗手液，随身携带，随时随地隔离病菌，呵护您的健康。
At the same time, when the outdoor hand-washing is not convenient, can use hand sanitizer, carry whenever and wherever possible, isolate the pathogen, take care of your health.
4.发现疫情时，应尽量避免与禽类接触;公众特别是儿童应避免密切接触家禽和野禽。
4 found in the epidemic, should avoid contact with poultry; the public especially children should avoid close contact with poultry and wild birds.
5.注意生活用具的消毒处理。禽流感病毒不耐热，100°C下一分钟即可灭活。对干燥、紫外线照射、汞、氯等常用消毒药都很敏感。
5 pay attention to disinfection and living appliances. Avian influenza viruses do not heat, 100 ° C, one minute can be inact
英语老师如何批改作文更有趣【四】
今天上午，我们班上了一堂有趣的英语课。
人都到齐后，老师就开始上课了，她先教我们读单词，只见她吐词清晰，她读一句，我们就跟着读一句，然后再问我们问题，答对时老师就会面对笑容地说：“good或very good。”更有趣的是：她还用玩游戏的方式来教我们学习……
今天这一课道具要用蛋糕，老师先把题讲完，就利用剩下的一个半小时去订做蛋糕，还说：“买回来后就让大家一起分享。”听后，大家都兴奋不已，于是，我们就自觉地打扫卫生，有的扫地，有的洒水，还有的拖地……
大约一个小时以后，我们在二楼看见老师回来了，为了逗老师开心，那些顽皮的小家伙有的躲了起来，有的放起了音乐，还有的吹起泡泡来，老师一进门，呈现在她眼前的是一个“泡泡天地”，我们真的把老师逗笑了，老师把蛋糕放在了许多桌子的正中间，然后轻轻地把它打开了。我们欢呼着把蜡烛插在了蛋糕上并且点燃了，然后用英语唱起了生日快乐歌，当我们正准备吹蜡烛时，老师提醒我们要Make a wish!原来是许愿的意思啊!我在心底里许了个愿，希望以后能当上国家足球队队员。许愿后，我们就吹灭了蜡烛，开始吃蛋糕啦，我故意把奶油弄得额头上、鼻子上、脸上和下巴上到处都是，同班同学都用那流利的英语来描述着我的这张“小丑”的脸，然后，开心地笑了，我们完全变成了一群可爱的外国学生。
今天上午的这堂英语课我们既吃了蛋糕，又学到了英语，真是有趣极了!
英语老师如何批改作文更有趣【五】
How to prevent the H7N9?
As is well known,the A flu is spreading throught our country. However, if we negnect it, the deadly H7N9 may cause more infectors,or even more deaths. So what is the most important is that we should take some effective measures to prevent it.They can be listed as follows.
Firstly,it is necessary for you to realize the Avian flu can be prevented if you develop good living habits. For example,you shouldn’t forget to wash your hands before meals.Besides,don’t spit everywhere and try to cover your mouth or nose with paper or hankerchiefs when you have to cough or sneeze.What’s more, remember to wear the mouth-cover if you have to go to the public places, such as the crowded cinemas,supermarkets, buses,where the A flu may spread easily.
Secondly,of course, taking exercise more often and taking good sleep to build your body are wise choices for you to reduce the risk of being infected.
Last but not the least, if you are unlucky to be infected with the slight flu cold, try to stay at home,and take some medicine. Do pay attention to your daily body temperature. If you have a high fever, go to the hospital without delay for further treatment. Make sure you are not expected to come back to school before the cold or flu is cured.
Only by doing like this can you prevent or defeat the A flu in the end.
英语老师如何批改作文更有趣【六】
小学六年的学习生活即将过去，在这天真无邪的二千多个日子里，不知上了多少堂生动活泼的课。多姿多彩的美术课，探索大自然奥秘的科学课，妙趣横生的语文课……都在我的心坎上留下了深深的烙印，但给我印象最深的还是五年级时上的一节英语课，仿佛就在昨天。
回想起来，同学们是那样天真活泼，课堂是那样富有情趣，令我自豪。
那是春天，大地复苏。校园里鸟语花香，英语老师迈着轻快的步伐，走进教室，交给我一项重要的'任务——当一次老师，我愉快的接受了任务。
“叮叮叮”，上课铃响了，我深吸一口气，走上讲台，对同学们说:Hello, Nice to meet yo.” “Nice ti meet yo to.”同学们不约而同地回答.我向同学们介绍了自己,同学们马上送给我热烈的掌声。随后,便开始在掌声中上课了，同学们,跟我读单词” “Yes,teacher.” “cover,cover, go” “cover, cover” “sell” “sell, sell.” “ok, agoin.” 接着，同学们又响亮的读了起来。“好，现在我们每组同学充当一个角色，第一组彼得，第二组安妮，go。”我一声令下，充当角色的游戏马上就要开演了。“I like drawing， Let is draw，图片。”顿时，全班大笑，有的笑弯了腰，有的捂着肚子笑。“安静。”我拿着棍子喊道。这时，第二组的唐敏说“你们笑什么笑，没文化，不知道，中外结合吗?一看都不懂。”“哎，还中外结合，我看你是屁和唐敏相结合。”刘兵说。顿时，唐敏无话可说了，用书遮住脸，真想找个地缝钻下去。我说“笑什么，你们不知道鼓励他，反而在这里冷嘲热讽。唐敏，相信我，你会读懂的，加油。”听了我的鼓励，同学们和我一起为第二组的同学加油。第二组的同学昂起头，用洪亮的声音读出了安妮说的话：“I like drawing，Let is draw pictures。”刚说完，教室里便响起雷鸣般的掌声，第二组成功了。我对他们投去赞扬的眼光，他们也自豪的坐了下去。“唐敏，你刚才怎么不钻入地缝里去呀?”“哎呀，地缝里的大王不让我抢他地盘。”说着，大家都笑了起来。
“叮叮叮”下课了，这节课便在欢声笑语中结束了。
我第一次当小老师，既收获了成功，又收获了欢笑。虽然往事不再，但它已成为我记忆中的珍宝。
英语老师如何批改作文更有趣【七】
花了两个半下午的时间把这本书看完了，本意是要学习里面的方法的，记忆中隐约记得，有些，我是有用过的。
选书，我一般没有特别的标准，但爱好会偏悬疑类，不过，我什么类型的书都会看的(因为心里有个写书的梦，所以要多吸纳各行各业的知识。现阶段的书，我都是从关注的公众号上面所推荐的书来买的，公众号里面的文章会有作者介绍及书的详情解说，我感兴趣的，就会记下书名。近段时间，就是通过《书单来了》，了解到村上春树的偶像约翰·欧文，一下就买了他的三本书。
购书，就像书上写的，网络是个不适合熟读的环境，相反，纸媒则更适合花时间慢慢读，我也偏好纸体，只买纸体的，不过，电子书也看的哈;纸书类一般偏有价值的，是要收藏的，电子书就是偏娱乐类的了。
读书，我是喜欢读书的，可像书里所说的，有没有认真读呢，你读过后，又记得多少呢?现在回想，有的书，只能记得大概内容，有的书，只认得书名了，内容几乎忘了，有的书，也是看了几遍了，不过，是那悬疑类的，哈哈，那是我爱好中的爱好了。
读书记录，我以前从来没有思考过这个问题，只是有一直做梦，我要写书，写文章，但从来没有实践过，无导师，不知从何下手，关于这本书，也是凑巧(觉得做梦，也该行动了，就百度了知道的，哈哈。
从阅读这本书开始，我要坚持写读书笔记。读完一本书后写，就是不管多么简陋的一句话，我都应该转化成文字落在纸上，把自己当下的想法及心理过程给记录下来。
记忆中，我是看了不少书的，对了，我看书的速度也是想当的快呢，但是真正记在脑中的并没有什么，因为掌握了再多的信息，如果没有积极的输出，也无法形成知识体系的，所以，以后每一本书，包括重拾以前阅读过的书，都要写读书笔记及读后感，要写文章呀，做好了笔记才是写好文章的基础，提高了思想输出的质量，写作技巧才会大幅度提升。
活动，虽然喜欢看书，但是线下类的读书活动或是讲座，我从来没有去过。一嘛，是因为经济原因;二嘛，性格原因，不喜欢嘈杂的环境。现在起呢，我要改变，关注长沙大型书店官方信息，定期免费的讲座及研讨会，都要积极报名。
最后，关于书里讲的，去实体店购书，当下，是互联网时代，我看中的书都是网购了，几乎没有去过实体店了，关于迷惘购书，及在书店浪费太多时间，好久没有过了哦，这点，我还是有目的性的。
旧书店，印象中去过一两次吧，对于旧书，没有什么概念，再说，对于“古书”，我向来“迷惑”，所以，再也没有光顾过了，记忆中，岳麓山下有一家，天气好转，去爬爬山，也去店里淘淘，就是不知，现在还在不在。
英语老师如何批改作文更有趣【八】
人都到齐后，老师就开始上课了，她先教我们读单词，只见她吐词清晰，她读一句，我们就跟着读一句，然后再问我们问题，答对时老师就会面对笑容地说：“good或very good。”更有趣的是：她还用玩游戏的方式来教我们学习……
今天这一课道具要用蛋糕，老师先把题讲完，就利用剩下的`一个半小时去订做蛋糕，还说：“买回来后就让大家一起分享。”听后，大家都兴奋不已，于是，我们就自觉地打扫卫生，有的扫地，有的洒水，还有的拖地……
大约一个小时以后，我们在二楼看见老师回来了，为了逗老师开心，那些顽皮的小家伙有的躲了起来，有的放起了音乐，还有的吹起泡泡来，老师一进门，呈现在她眼前的是一个“泡泡天地”，我们真的把老师逗笑了，老师把蛋糕放在了许多桌子的正中间，然后轻轻地把它打开了。我们欢呼着把蜡烛插在了蛋糕上并且点燃了，然后用英语唱起了生日快乐歌，当我们正准备吹蜡烛时，老师提醒我们要Make a wish!原来是许愿的意思啊!我在心底里许了个愿，希望以后能当上国家足球队队员。许愿后，我们就吹灭了蜡烛，开始吃蛋糕啦，我故意把奶油弄得额头上、鼻子上、脸上和下巴上到处都是，同班同学都用那流利的英语来描述着我的这张“小丑”的脸，然后，开心地笑了，我们完全变成了一群可爱的外国学生。
今天上午的这堂英语课我们既吃了蛋糕，又学到了英语，真是有趣极了!
