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英语作文如何结尾不重复【一】

和开头一样，结尾也是构成文章的主要部分。好的结尾应该言简意深，余味无穷，画龙点睛，水到渠成，有深化主题、突出中心、增强文章感染力、加深读者印象的作用。可以总结全文，可以抒发感情，可以言尽而意无尽，还可以照应开头。常见的结尾方法有

1、首尾呼应法。即文章的开头和结尾要互相照应，特别是在结尾要回应开头，使文章成为一个完整的整体，不至于因为开头和结尾相距甚远，而使文章相互脱节，给人以残缺感。如一考生的作文《朋友》的结尾是：漫漫人生路，朋友会有好多，而像父亲这样的朋友却只有一个，我将永远记住他——我的朋友——父亲。

2、留有空白法。作文要给读者留下一定的想象空间，让读者通过联想和想象去加以补充，从而产生令人回味无穷的艺术效果。如一考生的作文《说句心里话》的结尾：路灯发着暗淡的光，我毫无目的地走在平直的马路上。说句心里话，我也曾怀疑过他们是否爱我，难道衡量的角度除了分数就没有别的了吗？我默默地走着，渐渐路上的人少了，可能是都回家了，可是今天我什么时候回家呢？我不知道……

3、余音袅袅法。这种结尾既深刻又发人深省，能够让读者在读完你的文章之后掩卷深思。如《父亲》一文的结尾：“树欲静而风不止，子欲养而亲不在。”人天相隔，骨肉永离。爸爸，您在哪里？您在哪里？我无语问苍天，无语问苍天啊！

4、总结概括法。在结尾时对全文作简单的总结，揭示事件的意义，点明题旨，深化中心。如一考生的《给我教益的一件事》一文的结尾：这件事使我受到很大的教益。在别人处于困境时，我们应该伸出援助之手。友谊、帮助和理解，能消除人与人之间的隔膜。

5、抒情言志法。结尾用抒情的语句，阐发自己真实的情感体验，直抒胸臆，情感浓烈，感人肺腑，表达作者的愿望和志向，并紧扣题旨，往往能打动读者，引起共鸣。如《爸爸妈妈，你们可知道》一文的结尾：爸爸妈妈，女儿也有自尊，你们别让女儿抬不起头来。爸爸，请不要浑身酒气地把妈妈打得鼻青脸肿；妈妈请不要让那些盘碟再成为你们大战的牺牲品。你们的女儿渴望有一个祥和的家，渴望一片宁静的天地。爸爸妈妈，别再吵了，让我们重建一个美好的新天地吧！

英语作文如何结尾不重复【二】

Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.

So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.

In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.

首先，提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。

第一段：提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….

第二段：正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….

第三段：摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….

其次，提纯范文“段落写作”。

段落写作分为统一性，连贯性和完整性三方面。

统一性(unity：段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛，也不可太具体，做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明，另一方面从坏的方面说明。

连贯性(coherence：关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰，层层展开。

完整性(completeness：以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头，这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。

再次，提纯范文“句子写作”。

1. It has been shown that … …

类似句型：It is known to us that … …

It is said that … …

It is reported that … …

It is controversial that … …

2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单，注意练习并接句的使用，会使句子显的更加饱满。

3. enable v. 使…能够

I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.

4. in that = because

表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as，如：

The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.

此句以我们常用的人称开头，句式简单，我们可以通过把since提前改变句式，如：

Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。

最后，提纯范文“措辞”。

1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。

2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的

形容“多”的表达方法：millions and millions

a multitude of

a great deal of

a large amount of

plenty of

many a

3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论，辩论”的意思，而是“认为”。

I argue that … …

I maintain that … …

I claim that … …

I insist that … … = I think that … …

I hold that … …

I assert that … …

I assume that … …

4. negative adj. 否定的.，相反的

hold negative view = hold opposite opinions

5. phenomenon n. 现象

social phenomenon 社会现象

natural phenomenon 自然现象

6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever

(选词策略：使用最近所学的单词，如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever

在分析并掌握范文之后，我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文，以供参考：

1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会

2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会

3. 我的看法

Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.

However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.

In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.

英语作文如何结尾不重复【三】

记叙文的写作不像议论文的写作，在主体部分往往无法引经据典。但是却可以在结尾适当引用。这样，既可以展示自己的创作才华，也可以收到余音绕梁的表达效果。如2010年高考一山东考生的作文《光明与阴影构成美丽的花》一文的结尾：“忽然想起张炜说的话：‘真正的作家天生应该是个水手。这使我们想到了写出《白鲸》的.麦尔维尔，还有搏击在密西西比河上的马克·吐温，他们都有过水手生涯，一生都在生活的激流中搏斗。长长的流浪，无边的海洋或漫漫的大河，水声，涛涌，遇险与生还。’人生的美丽永远在光明与阴影中交融，难分难解。”这个结尾，作者引用张炜如诗的语言，既暗含了比较的因素，也巧妙而自然地点明了文章的主题，让读者久久回味。