梦想,对于很多人来说就像那遥不可及的星辰,但依然有人被它的美好灿烂所折服,从而勇敢地去追求它。
付丽娟,一个13岁的女孩,跟还在父母怀里撒娇的我们差不多大的年纪,她却进行着高难度的闪队训练。是什么力量支持着她?是追求梦想的力量。
谁能想到,现在著名的钢琴家郎朗曾经只是一个乐团里小小的替补,但他从未停止过练习,因为他知道,即使上台的机会渺茫也不能放弃一丝一毫的机会。为什么?因为他有着对钢琴的热爱,对梦想的执着追求。
我们每个人都有梦想,可大家有追求梦想的力量吗?梦想的实现并非一朝一夕,并非一帆风顺,实现梦想的道路上需要付出辛勤的汗水甚至是苦涩的泪水。大家可曾知道,最美舞者廖智老师在汶川大地震中失去了自己的孩子和双腿,在疼痛的`折磨下,她毅然选择了坚持,决然穿上了假肢,重新开始了她的舞蹈生涯。她的力量的源泉是什么?是梦想。
我也曾在追求梦想的过程中跌倒过,彷徨过,迷茫过,但当我看到廖智老师的事迹时,我突然发现我的挫折根本不算什么,比起她的挫折来,那简直是沧海之一栗。
梦想是如此美好的一个词语,它就像夜空中闪耀的星辰一样,永远那么璀璨那么诱人。既然如此,我要展开梦想的翅膀,去努力实现自己的梦想。我想用淡淡的笔墨去描绘一个个生动的画面,我希望自己的文字变成铅字印在书上,我希望有一天我的文字能给大家带来快乐,我希望有一天很多人知道在世界的某一个角落还有一个我在描绘着一个个生动的故事。
我知道我并不优秀,我也并不特殊,但我相信,有梦就一定能够成功,或许在追求梦想的道路上会有坎坷,会遇到形形色色的困难,但只要不放弃,我的梦想终会开出最美的花朵。
一个人想要成功,想要改变命运,有梦想是重要的。……我觉得每个人都应该心中有梦,有胸怀祖国的大志向,找到自己的梦想,认准了就去做,不跟风不动摇。同时,我们不仅仅要自己有梦想,你还应该用自己的梦想去感染和影响别人,因为成功者一定是用自己的梦想去点燃别人的梦想,是时刻播种梦想的人。当然我和我的哥哥也不例外,因为我们都有一个大学梦。
我哥哥小时候因为一场车祸,导致卧床不起,他从小就有一个梦想,那就是考上大学,成为一名光荣的大学生,可是天有不测风云,人有旦夕祸福,不幸的事发生在我哥哥的身上,他愿望无法实现了,我自己也想成为硕士生,帮哥哥实现他未能实现的梦想。
成为硕士生,说简单也不简单,说难也不难,只要认真学习,努力读书,正如鲁迅先生曾经说“时间就像海绵里的水,只要愿意挤,总还是有的`”。不放过任何一个可利用的时间学习,让时间为我服务,在短短的时间里,也能学习许多知识,畅游在知识的海洋。
我要实现这个梦想,就一定要先学会坚持,坚持才会有胜利的曙光出现。在上课时,要学会认真听讲,把老师讲的知识充分“消化”;在家休息时,多看看书,多长一些见识,懂得的东西就更多;在放假期时,保证完成作业的同时,也要预习新的学期里的课程,这样的话,在开学时,就会胜人一筹。
言必行,行必果。我相信这一句话,只要我说出了,一定会做到,加油!现在当务之急就是要先学会认真对待自己的学业,只有做好了这一点,才能实现自己的梦想。
梦想是需要一步一步慢慢实现的,而不是一步登天,一下子就能实现的,只有脚踏实地地做到现在的每一小步,才能离胜利更进一大步,愿我早日实现梦想。
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
是创新让”苹果“站了起来,是创新让乔布斯成就了梦想。
当洛基亚还在创造全键盘手机时,乔布斯的苹果公司已经明白手机的按键应越少越好,当iphone一上市,理科以他时尚简约的外形,简单易学的操作和其简单外表成反比的大量功能迅速的占领了全球的手机市场。以至于现在”苹果“每推出一部新机,即使价格比普通手机高出几倍到几十倍,抢购热潮仍会引起万人空巷的局面。这便是创新的力量。为何中国出不了乔布斯,中国目前已经成为世界最大的制造国。上到精密电子,下到袜子、打火机,中国制造创业的发展日新月异,但是为什么中国就出不了“乔布斯”?就是因为创新的缺乏。只有中国制造,中国创造却不够,少有“颠覆新”产品出现。所以是创新让“苹果”脱颖而出,是创新让乔布斯功成名就。
创新让毕加索把抽象派进行到底,让《公牛》在抽象中包含形与神。
毕加索擅长在其他画派的基础上进行改造,将作品提高到新的境界。比如抽象派常常用几何图形去变现意蕴,到了毕加索那里,则简而又简。1945年12月日,毕加索画了一头公牛,他把公牛画得十分逼真,但他并不满足。在以后的一个多月里他一共画了九次公牛,每一次公牛都比前一次更“消瘦”,许多多余的`东西被删掉,当人们看到成品时很难想象,画家花费许多心血画就的寥寥数笔,却精炼的表现了公牛的形与神。是创新让毕加索在抽象画上圆了自己的梦,是创新让《公牛》昂首向前。
创新与梦想就像一对暖生的兄弟,不管是杰克逊、乔布斯还是毕加索。有梦想的人一定勇于创新。勇于创新的人,我相信一定会实现自己的梦想,成就自我。
首先需要自我的主观控制,如正确的大方向,循序渐进的各个步骤,然后步步为营。其次客观的条件也是不可缺少。人类生存的基础是物质资料的'生存方式。只有做到像革命的本钱——身体也是为以后打下坚实的基础。同时,在这个奋斗过程中,傲气不可有,傲骨却必须有。身体只是一份躯壳,内在的精神气骨才是可贵的。最后,在主客观条件都已具备的同时,要把握机遇,促成量变变向质变的一个飞跃。然后才可以实现人生梦想。
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
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