Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
我十分喜欢我的房间,虽然它很普通,但却清新舒适。
走进房间,一眼就能看见一张乳白色的书桌。书桌上面整齐地放着笔筒、台灯,还有一排由高至低摆放的课外书。空余时间,我经常端坐在椅子上聚精会神地翻看它们。书桌顶端还摆放着两只可爱的毛绒玩具和一盆“死而复生”的何首乌。之前,何首乌的叶子已经接近枯萎了,可在我们的悉心照料之下,它竟奇迹般地舒展出绿叶,给我的房间增添了几分生趣,我十分喜欢它。
我的小床在西南面。淡淡的颜色十分耐看。床单同是相似的颜色,看起来很是协调。
南面角上有一个大柜子,柜子上贴着我得过获得的奖状。在柜顶上,趴着一只毛绒大狗,雪白的身子,乌黑的眼睛,头上还戴着一个蝴蝶结,它是我的好朋友。
在东南面有一个面积不大的阳台,里面摆放着许多植物。有吊兰、文竹、杜鹃等等,每天清晨起来,望着这些植物,我都会觉得神清气爽。阳台前的窗帘是两层的,淡绿的底色,上面有许多饱满的花儿。
这就是我的房间,能给我带来无限温暖的房间!
人要活得精彩,在人生的漫长旅途中,我们要做得足够好,尽力地在人生大道上留下深痕,在岁月长河中刻下永恒。生活是一条崎岖坎坷的路,路上有着荆棘沼泽,也有鲜艳的花果。我们要笑对人生,也就是要笑对生活,这是一种心态,也是一种境界。生活中有疲劳,也有痛苦,有挫折,也有酸辛。这些使人觉得很累,但只要心中燃起一簇希望的亮火,点起一盏明灯,理想便会闪闪发光,生活就会多姿多彩。虽然,生活是艰难的,但我们要做生活的强者,不做懦夫。
每个人都希望站在山顶,但所有的幸福都发生在你攀登的时候,一个人只要不自弃,相信没有谁可以阻挡你前进。我不欣赏那种怯懦、安逸的人,我钦佩那种表现出奋力向上精神的人,那种永不屈服的人更令人尊敬。失败是艰难的,但是,不去努力争取成功,却更为糟糕。失败并不可怕,可怕的是不敢正视失败,生命的真谛在于奋斗,在于坚持不懈的追求,在于失败后的又一轮拼搏,真正的强者,不是在失败中诅咒成功者,也不是怨天尤人,而是在失败中反思自己,发掘自己内蕴的宝藏,力图重振旗鼓,卷土重来。
虽然在失败中流过泪,伤过心,但要擦干眼泪,更加发奋,去拼搏,争取更大的胜利。诗人曾经说过,“流过泪的眼睛富有开阔的视野,失败过的人生将近孕育着更大的成功。”记住:只要站起来比摔倒多一次,那你就是胜利者。有的人面对自己的.贫困和生活的失意,总是羡慕和妒忌他人的富裕、幸运,抱怨自己生不逢时,大骂世道不公,怨天尤人,却不寻求改变现状的正确途径,坐等靠要,或者是自暴自弃,感到生活没意思,毫无欢乐而言,那么,这种人的精神比物质还要贫困。
与之相反,有的人能面对同样的生活压力,却不怨天尤人,而是面对现实,视之为一种对人生和生命的挑战与考验,努力奋争,尽自己最大的力量去改变现实中的不如人意,同时,也不对生活抱以过高的奢望,充分地感悟着人生,享受人生,从而活得有滋有味。生活是一本书,书的题目是“生活“。让我们都来写好自己的生活之书吧。生活告诉我们,然自界的季节可以变换,拉断的琴弦可以更换,演糟了的戏可以重排,唯独人生没有第二次 .
所以,我们要活出个样来,给自己和爱自己的人看看。在生活中,最关键的是要学着自己坚强。人生的道路上,谁都有可能跌倒过,但要勇敢地站起来。经历了摔打,经历了风险,才能在前行的路上潇洒的驰骋。 正是:不经历风雨,怎能见彩虹。所以说:人的一生应当这样度过,当你回首往事时,不因虚度年华而悔恨,也不因碌碌无为而羞耻,当困难来临时,要勇敢对它说:“来吧,困难,我一定把你搞定。”这才是生活的强者!
我慢慢地从床上苏醒,走到日历前一看,:“太棒了!”我叫着,今天是我盼望已久的日子,是我庆祝的日子,我心里美滋滋的,脚下像踏着幸福的云。
上午,我去学英语,可中间那让我可怕的堂听,气得我火冒三丈,下午,我去打羽毛球,和中级教练打,累的我气喘吁吁。
我迈着沉重的脚步,慢吞吞地走回了家,“哇,好香呀!”我大叫着,闭上眼睛,停下脚步,静静感受着这美好的时光。这时,你会发现,世界静得出奇,在草丛中,你可以听见昆虫正在开最后的生命会,听,他们多快乐。在森林里你会发现,动物们正在开心的捉迷藏,看,那毛茸茸的尾巴会是谁?在花园里,你可以闻到花朵那迷人的芬芳,鼻子不再哭,不再悲伤,它给花朵的芳香吸引住了。
我加快了脚步,来到了香的源泉。一进家门,敏锐的眼睛一扫,我就发现了异样,那勤劳的'身影不知所终。“爸爸。”我喊着,“妈妈去哪里了?”爸爸在厨房一边做菜一边回应:“妈妈去惠州了。”
我一听,大惊失色,为什么妈妈要在这个时候去惠州,为什么,爸爸似乎看出了我的心思,“我们知道今天是你最看重的日子,我们都准备好了。”说完,爸爸就转身从冰箱里拿出一样花花绿绿的东西,是蛋糕,这时,我的心中涌出了一丝感动。
这感动来自于一种爱,它经常出现在我们的身边,但我们不曾注意,不曾发现。当我们晚上踢开被子,是谁,帮我们一次又一次的盖好;当我们在路上迷失了方向,是谁,帮助我们从困难中走出;当我们摔倒在地,是谁,鼓励我们,让我们站起来,又充满了自信,是父母,是他们的爱让他们强大。
11月17日,这天,让我知道了父母爱,让我重新做了自信的自己,而11月17日这天,是我11岁的生日。
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