初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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我走上前去,厉声质问妈妈:“你为什么要宰我的鸭儿。你不觉得这样很残忍吗?它是我的好伙伴,你却这样伤了它。书上不是说动物是人类的好朋友,我们要保护动物吗?”爸爸说:“区区一个鸭子,有什么好哭。”我再也不想跟他们辩了,于是直冲入房,捂住被子,号啕大哭起来。
吃完饭,我打开电视,在转到宠物频道时,我看到有一个人养了一只鸽子。有一天,那鸽子在树上被卡住了,飞不下来。于是,主人就不顾危险爬到树上去,将鸽子救了下来。但是却把他困在了树上,直到有人打了求助电话,他才平安地下来。
是呀,为了一只动物,那个养鸽人却能不顾生命危险去救助,多么令人感动呀!我们人类与动物就应这样和睦相处,好好保护我们地球的生态环境。不过,我听老师说,对圈养来改善生活的家禽、家畜,我们是可以区别地分开来对待的。
爱护弱小,是我们中华民族的传统美德。我想,用在这里,也是相通的。所以,我们一定要珍惜动物的生命,尽量不要伤害他们。
观点明确,论述深刻、发人深省,文约而意丰,论述语言有理有据、有力、富有文采、形象生动具体,给伤害动物的人们敲响了警钟。
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大,但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能,人们可以i用电脑做很多事情,比如说看电影,听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器,所以我很喜欢电脑。
小猪捉老鼠一个大热天,小猪热得冒大汗,为了解暑,它特地从超市里买了一个又大又甜的'西瓜, 一蹦一跳地抱回家。
小猪很爱干净,它把西瓜抱回家之后,就去河边洗手。这时候,一群老鼠溜出来了,它 们发现了西瓜,马上钻进西瓜里面,吃光了西瓜肉,只剩下空空的瓜壳。然后,老鼠们摸着 圆鼓鼓的肚子,钻回了洞里。
小猪回来了,家里安然无恙。于是它去拿刀切西瓜了。把西瓜切开来的时候,小猪才发 现西瓜里空空如也,一点果肉也没有。这时,它发现了老鼠啃过的洞,它非常生气,决定要 教训这群可恶的老鼠。它想到了一个非常好的办法。只见小猪把奶酪系在一条绳子上,然后 用剩下的西瓜皮为主老鼠洞,再把奶酪放在老鼠洞前。
小猪准备好了:作战“的材料,摆好陷阱,就等老鼠找上门了。一开始,老鼠们闻到了 奶酪的香味,然后像恶鬼脱胎一样飞速跑来,小猪看见老鼠要上当了,就马上把系在奶酪上 的绳子网上一拉,那群老鼠直接撞到了西瓜皮,连大门牙都掉下来了。剩下的老鼠剪了,吓 得目瞪口呆,全都乖乖投降了。
这个故事告诉我们一个道理,遇到困难要临危不乱,冷静想办法解决问题。
在一个陡崖边上住着三个伙计,崖上是草地,住着山羊,而崖下的峡谷,住着河马,崖壁有一个山洞,住着狼。
但在这之前,有四个伙计,原来还有一只兔子住在狼洞底下,可不幸被狼吃掉,这不,狼又盘算着夜黑风高找个机会吃掉山羊,而好心的河马总是一再在河谷大叫,惊醒熟睡的山羊让他逃命,狼气得牙痒痒,三番五次的威胁河马,而生活在这一片的动物们都恨透了狼
一天,山羊趁狼进了山下坡喝水,河马一边同情山羊的不幸,一边和山羊商量着什么,在那天晚上,山羊突然大叫着疯了一样往坡下跑,狼觉得抓羊的时机来了便一路追下去,到了河边,山羊跃上一块石头,跳去了对岸,狼紧接上去,可这块石头却突然立起来,将狼摔进又深又急的河流里淹死了
原来早在山羊喝水的时候,就在与河马讨论除去狼这个山林威胁的事情了,山羊假装引起狼的主意,河马在河里假装石头,就这样一唱一和,终于除去了万恶的狼
其实啊,生活也一样,在我们遇到坏人威胁时,直接反抗或许会让我们身心俱伤,我们要开动我们的头脑,学会与敌人智斗,能保护自己才是最明智的勇敢
那天,阳光明媚,我怀着喜悦的心情来到了动物园。还未进入动物园,却已发现外面早已是人山人海,到了里面,我们沿着小路来到可爱的大熊猫面前。
熊猫有几分像熊,也有几分像猫,怪不得我们都叫它熊猫。胖胖的身体,肥肥的四肢,最有趣的是它那特大号的墨镜,当时我想:可能是因为熊猫经常熬夜,所以才出的黑眼圈吧!熊猫的毛非常的细滑,毛茸茸的耳朵不时的伸缩,好像在倾听我们说话一样。看着熊猫憨态可掬的样子,不是地觉得它很搞笑,但仔细一看又觉得它十分地可爱,怪不得它是我们的国宝呢!熊猫吃竹子是,现是紧紧的'抓住,好像生怕有人要抢了它的似的。接着它左一口,右一口,吃得津津有味。不愧是一个吃货啊!
看过了可爱的大熊猫。,我们又来到调皮捣蛋的猴子面前。猴子的外形十分有趣,一张桃子形的面孔上,嵌着两颗闪着金光的眼睛在不时的打着转,好像在想什么鬼点子似的,那小小的鼻子,但鼻孔却很大,大大的鼻子下面有一张尖尖的嘴巴。看着可爱极了!看它活动的时候又蹦又跳,有和小伙伴追逐打闹的情形你就知道它平时是多么的顽皮了。但猴子也是十分聪明的。要不然也不会有这么多的鬼点子了。
看完了调皮可爱的猴子,我们又来到了凶猛的老虎面前。老虎可不像猴子那样调皮,也不像大熊猫那样可爱。老虎,有着大大的眼睛,发达的四肢,强健体魄以及惊人的速度。老虎头上烙有天然的王字,嘴上的胡子翘的老高,令人胆寒的炯炯有神的双眼不停的向四周张望,它身上金黄,还有一道道的黑色的斑纹,看上去,十分地凶猛可怕。虽然它被关在铁笼子里,但它依然是一个威风凛凛的大王。
看完了令人胆寒的老虎,我们又去看了高高的长颈鹿,还有可爱的金鱼,美丽的孔雀······
这次的动物园一日游给我的印象最为深刻,那里的动物,仅很可爱,有的还很调皮。我觉得动物园就是一个美丽的大森林。
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