mywinterholiday的英语作文五年级【一】
爱，是对朋友的珍惜。爱，是对自然的渴望。欢迎来到（海蒂）的世界！
海蒂才出生没几天，父母双亡，她被阿姨黛特带到了爷爷家。但是爷爷沉默寡言，性情古怪。最终，海蒂感化了爷爷，并结识了彼得和他的奶奶。可是好景不长，海蒂又被阿姨带到了相距十万八千里的法兰克福去陪大小姐克拉拉学习。克拉拉身体不好，脸色苍白。在海蒂的帮助下，她快乐了。
法兰克福的生活虽然富裕，可一点也比不上牧场。海蒂在塞斯曼先生的帮助下，回到了家。
在书里，我最喜欢的是海蒂。她单纯，善良，勤奋。我要向她学习，做一个好孩子。我相信我一定会做到！
爱，是对朋友的珍惜。爱，是对自然的渴望。欢迎来到（海蒂）的世界！
海蒂才出生没几天，父母双亡，她被阿姨黛特带到了爷爷家。但是爷爷沉默寡言，性情古怪。最终，海蒂感化了爷爷，并结识了彼得和他的奶奶。可是好景不长，海蒂又被阿姨带到了相距十万八千里的法兰克福去陪大小姐克拉拉学习。克拉拉身体不好，脸色苍白。在海蒂的帮助下，她快乐了。
法兰克福的生活虽然富裕，可一点也比不上牧场。海蒂在塞斯曼先生的帮助下，回到了家。
在书里，我最喜欢的是海蒂。她单纯，善良，勤奋。我要向她学习，做一个好孩子。我相信我一定会做到！
mywinterholiday的英语作文五年级【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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mywinterholiday的英语作文五年级【三】
这本书十分经典的描绘了海蒂这个年纪幼小的小姑娘在阿尔卑斯山上居住的经历以及在富兰克托的一段经历。
主人公海蒂是一个心地善良、天真的小姑娘，她热爱生活，热爱大自然，乐善好施，乐于助人。爸爸死后，先是妈妈把海蒂带到爷爷家，爷爷是个性格孤僻却又嗜酒如命又沉迷赌博的怪老人。之后为了海蒂的身心健康姨妈又把她送到了富兰克托的一个有钱的亲戚家。亲戚家的女儿克拉拉一条腿瘫痪了，总得坐着轮椅，根本没有朋友，很孤独，很寂寞，期望有个朋友一齐玩。海蒂来了以后和克拉拉很快成了朋友。在海蒂的帮忙和鼓励下克拉拉又重新站了起来，这时我感觉到人间的温暖，友情的滋润。
我要向海蒂学习对每件事都充满信心，再也不能遇到困难就想退缩。我要向海蒂学习做事那么果断，再不能老犹犹豫豫。透过读这本书我明白了如果要想让别人尊重你，你也务必要尊重别人。就像克拉拉腿瘫痪了，海蒂并没有嘲笑她，而是帮忙克拉拉站起来，才得到了别人的尊重。
海蒂这本书不愧是名著啊！它真的教会我许多道理啊！
mywinterholiday的英语作文五年级【四】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
mywinterholiday的英语作文五年级【五】
暑假里，我读了一本叫小海蒂的书。
小海蒂是一个善良、活泼的小女孩。她从小没有父母，和爷爷一起生活在阿尔卑斯山上。她还有一个放羊的朋友彼得，他们一起玩得很开心。
可是，有一天姨妈把海蒂带到了一个有钱的人家。那家的女儿克拉拉脚受伤了，不能走，想找个孩子陪着。虽然克拉拉和海蒂很快成了朋友，但小海蒂一直很想念她的爷爷。直到有一天克拉拉家人发现海蒂得了一种叫梦游症的病，他们把海蒂送回到了爷爷家，笑容才重新回到小海蒂的脸上。我也为她高兴。
我觉得海蒂想念爷爷是个懂事的孩子，也爱帮助人，她还很坚强。我要向她学习。
mywinterholiday的英语作文五年级【六】
读完《海蒂》这本书，妈妈问我最想说的一句话是什么？我大声说：我真想做海蒂那样的孩子！
因为海蒂生活的地方太美了。她能睡在阁楼上，那里有干草可以当被子，还有草铺，草铺上粗布，旁边还有窗户，还能听见树叶沙沙响的声音。那里能天天喝到新鲜牛奶，还能放羊。海蒂真幸福！
海蒂非常善良，很有爱心，帮助了很多人，给许多人带来快乐。我想做海蒂，想过海蒂那样的生活，海底如果是个男孩，我会开心一百倍！
