我相信,我的未来绝对不是一场梦!因为,我知道我现在的每一份努力,都是在为将来建立事业大厦而砌下每一块牢固的砖;我现在的每一滴汗水,就是成就将来的智慧结晶
爱迪生为了点亮世界上的第一盏灯泡,经历了无数次的失败才取得了成功;王安石位了练就一首流芳千古的好诗,不惜经历千锤百炼。然而,向他们一样的人不计其数。
一位伟大的科学家为了研究,可以以牺牲自己的青春作为代价,一位千古诗人为了成就一首好诗,需要经过无数次的推敲与琢磨!而我,为了证明自己的未来不是梦,应给从现在开始,努力学习,天天向上!
苏东坡曾说过,“书山有路勤为径,学海无涯苦作舟。”这句话说得可真好啊,万事都有个头,唯有学习,是没有终点的。所以,即使我们已经有了美好的未来,也应该“活到老,学到老。”
无论现在说得多好也是徒劳,只有经过实际方可实现自己的梦想。所以,我们应该从现在开始,倍加刻苦学习,用功读书,为自己美好的未来做铺垫!
20年后我可能成为一个科学家,也可能成为也一个文学家,或者是发明家。如果是发明家,我要发明许多东西,为人类造福。
我首先要发明一种特别的鱼,它的嘴巨大无比,一口能吞下几吨重的垃圾,身上长满五颜六色的鱼鳞,反射色彩斑斓的光线。它能把吃下去的垃圾变成一种特别的种子排出来,种子落到海底,经过海水的浇灌,光线的照耀,就快速的生根、发芽、开花、结果,果子有很多种,有粉红色的桃子、红彤彤的苹果、黄灿灿香蕉、水灵灵荔枝,还有各种各样的蔬菜。
地球上的人越来越多,如果地面上住不下,可以到海里去住,海里的人可以吃那些水果荷蔬菜,可以吸收鱼鳞反射的光芒。
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
这里桃红柳绿、鸟语花香……你一定以为这里是公园吧?NO!这不是公园,这里是我们未来的世界——月亮之城。
在一个春意盎然的日子里,一座宇宙飞船带着全世界的人们飞到了这座令人神往以久的月球上。人们把R1城市美容师机器人留到了地球上。多少年来,因为人类的不断地使用污染环境的物品,制造污染河流、青山的废气、废水,使地球上的空气、蓝天、河流、青山、绿树等都已经没有了往日的模样,它要留在地球上清理那些垃圾,还地球妈妈一个美丽的颜容。
月球上没有房子,所有的人都被漂亮的嫦娥仙子邀请到了她的“广寒宫”里居住。在月球上,有月亮仙子和玉兔做伴,每天还有可口地美酒佳肴,人们住在那里不用辛苦地工作、不用拼命的赚钱,小学生们也不用辛苦地读书,日子过得逍遥自在。刚开始,人们觉得月球上的一切东西都比地球上好多了,但是随着时间一天天的过去,人们开始留恋在地球上的时光,在那里,人们每天虽然很辛苦的工作、赚钱,学生们每天也要辛苦地读书、学习,但是人们之间多么和谐、快乐呀,每天吃着是自己的劳动赚来的成果,比什么都甜美!
真是“天上一日,人间多年”呀!经过几十天的时间,也就是地球上已经几十年的光景了,地球上的环境已经被R1城市美容师机器人改变了模样:空气清新了、天空更蓝了、河水更清了、青山更青了、绿树更绿了……小鸟们叽叽喳喳地成群、鱼儿成堆地在河里悠闲自在,就连地球上早已灭绝的恐龙也复活了,在绿树丛中不停地穿梭、嬉闹。当我们在月球上看到地球上的变化后,迫不及待地坐上宇宙飞船又回到了地球上,看着自己熟悉的家园,人们的眼角湿润了,懂得了“保护地球母亲,就是保护我们自己的家园”,于是勤劳的人们又通过自己的智慧和劳动,将地球打扮地更加漂亮,把它作为和所有恐龙、鸟类、鱼群的家园,地球上从此笑声多了、歌声多了,动物们和人类一起载歌载舞,成为了天长地久的好朋友。
这一切都是真的,同学们。人类如果相信自己就一定能实现这个梦想,因为——我的未来不是梦。
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