怎么写好英语作文小学五年级【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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怎么写好英语作文小学五年级【二】
我国家的传统节日可多，有团团圆圆的中秋节，有热热闹闹的端午节，有祭祀亲人的清明节……但我最喜欢的要数喜气洋洋的春节，在这个长长的节日里，人们除旧迎新、走亲访友，谈天说地，其乐融融。
每年春节，我一家都要到乡下的爷爷奶奶家度过。在除夕来临前，爷爷奶奶早早的就把家里的各个角落都打扫得干干净净，准备迎接新年的到来。我的爸爸妈妈也买各种年货，从除夕的白天开始就准备晚上的年夜饭。我也拿出一份神秘礼物，那就是一副我自己写的春联：一路顺风吉星到，万事如意福临门，横批：羊年大吉。我迅速地摘下去年的春联，清理干净后，再小心翼翼地贴上我的得意之作，顿时家里又增添几分过春节的`气氛。爷爷看着不住地点头，夸奖我说：“不错啊，比去年进步很多呀!”
除夕之夜，一盘盘可口美味的菜肴端上餐桌，我全家围在一起吃年夜饭，这天不管有多忙，家人都要团聚在一起吃饭，象征着团团圆圆。吃完年夜饭，奶奶又忙活起来，准备年初一的早餐——酒酿汤圆，那可是我的最爱呢!而妈妈开始收拾碗筷、清理垃圾，因为大年初一是不能扫地倒垃圾的，因为那象征着财富。今年，我决定和家人一起守岁，我一边看精彩的电视节目，一边嗑瓜子说笑话。很快，在噼噼啪啪的鞭炮声中，赶走恶兽“年”，迎来农历羊年。
大年初一，晴空万里，真是个难得的好天气!今天是相互拜年，问候的日子，我吃完汤圆，就向长辈们拜年，祝他们身体健康，万事如意。长辈们也会给我压岁钱，祝愿我快乐成长，学习进步。
欢声辞旧岁，笑语迎新年，我最喜欢过春节，因为她象征着新的希望，新的开始，充满着积极向上的能量。
