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第1段:提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
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第2段:Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法
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第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法
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第1段:Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
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第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
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第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
你们好!
我是唐河县三初中二·六班的付金燕。我知道你们现在正在为中考而努力,你们即将奔赴到“战场”上,一展你们多年奋斗努力的才华!我记得一位诗人 曾说过:“人的一生虽然漫长,但紧要之处只有几步。特别是在年轻的时候!”你们如果没有捉住年轻时的光阴,在青少年时期没有做到正确的选择未来和理想,错 过了好的发展机遇,那么自己的一生道路将会坎坷不平,你们也会为此悔恨终生!所以现在就要树立正确的人生目标和理想,始终不要放弃,坚定信心,鼓起勇气, 克服困难!在求知的道路上绝不停顿,让自己不断的打破常规,不断地向高层次冲刺,使我们的文化知识不断的丰富,进而改进学习策略!
珍视每一天,奋斗每一天,用奋斗铸就希望,用拼搏实现梦想!用你们的责任和使命去谱写青春的乐章!!请你们拿出勇气,拿出智慧,以最好的'状态去书写属于你们自己的辉煌篇章!
假如你们金榜题名,那么我祝贺你们,因为你们没有让你的青春白白的浪费掉;假如你们落榜了,那么我也祝贺你们,因为我知道,通过这次的人生考 验,你们一定会变得成熟起来的。其实,人生的机遇很多,如果真的有一次失去了,这样并不意味着人生的所有机遇都将会与你擦肩而过!人生的路途上,要经历的 考验太多太多了,又何止只是一个小小的!而你们要做的只有学习,珍惜每一分每一秒,放弃了时间,失去了知识;放弃了严格的要求,失去了自己的美德;放 弃了真诚,失去了友谊;放弃了今天,失去将会是你的未来和希望!
所以不管你是成功还是失败,请永远牢记;决定命运的并不是中考而是智力与毅力的较量,亦是心理素质的较量。你们在顽强拼搏的同时,也要注意调整心态,以一颗平常的心面对中考!认真目标,放飞理想!为自己的未来铺上一段金灿灿的道路!
唐河县三初中二六班:付金燕
20xx年9月7日
Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.
Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?
Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.
1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚
写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心,详略得当
在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:
One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言,准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文:
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后:
The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。
"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
提到军训,你一定会联想到“地狱”吧!真是英雄所见略同呀!
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“快出来吃早餐了!”妈妈说道。“哦!知道了!”我大喊了一声,但还在纸上奋笔疾书。你猜我在干嘛呢?写作业?错!写日记?错!我在写“我不怕!”虽然太天真了,但是没错,我正在做军训的心理准备,调节自己的情绪呢!
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此时,我正面对着电脑显示器下载mp3呢!mp3是军训最实用的解闷工具,在车上可以听,在床上可以听,刷牙的时候可以听,最重要的是失眠的`时候可以听!为了下载音乐,耗了我家好多电费呢!还挨老妈批评了一顿。更可卑的是:我竟然花了整整10天才把这项工作准备好。
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“怎么那么久都没有见你看书,快回房间看书。”妈妈吼道。我只好乖乖地回房,但是我是不会看书的!我喜欢看书,还向同学借了几本书呢,但是我现在不能看呀!这些书是留到军训时看的,所以……我坚决不看。书已经准备好了,可是,好象还缺点什么?对了,电筒!想想在阴森森的宿舍里,如果开着灯看书,不仅会影响到其他同学,还会把老师引来……所以,我需要一个电筒。于是从口袋里掏出一些money,冲向商店。
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太阳这几天最为火辣,要是在太阳底下站上一两个小时,也许就成为“传说中的非洲难民”了!在这样的天气里当然少不了防晒霜啦!虽然我的皮肤不白,但是为了避免成为“包黑炭”,我还得把它给带上。
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这时我正穿上鞋子出门购物呢!今天妈妈带我去买日常用品,我也顺便在超市里捡了四瓶饮料。奇怪的是,妈妈竟然同意了……
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一分钟过去了……我躺在床上。
两分钟过去了……我的眼睛闭上了……沉睡着……
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“雨伞带了吗?纸巾带了吗?书呢?桶、席子全好了吗?”妈妈说道。
“好了,好了,我要去学校了。”我说。
我好象有想起什么,对,钱,妈妈还没有给钱我呢!还没等我开口,妈妈就从钱包里掏出一张50圆的钞票给我。
“我走了!”
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“我知道了,再见!”我打断了妈妈的话,根据我的多年经验,如果让妈妈说下去,恐怕到明天还没完呢!
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上车了,这时我听着mp3向目的地出发!
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
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