初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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美丽的凤凰公园坐落在高密市的西边,它的建筑风格就像古代那优美的御花园。弯曲的小路、山水、花草、树木,一应俱全。
从凤凰公园的东门进入,沿着台阶就能走进凤凰阁,站在它的最顶端向下望,凤凰公园的景色大半收入眼底。
在凤凰阁的西边,郁郁苍苍的树丛掩映着清澈见底的湖水,如果你到近前去看,你会发现清澈见底的湖水也被染成绿色的了。
向南看去,你会看到美丽的大花坛,有芍药、牡丹、月季,还有一些不知名的花朵……它们争奇斗艳、芬芳迷人,好像在等着人们去观赏呢。我想,如果有一种花得到了人们的赞赏,心里一定会很高兴吧。
小朋友们最喜欢的就是位于凤凰阁北边的游乐场了,那里有蹦蹦床、迷宫、过山车、碰碰车、水帘洞等等。我最喜欢的是迷宫和水帘洞,因为迷宫不仅好玩,而且里面绿树成荫,几乎看不到一缕阳光,夏天进去的时候不仅会让人感觉非常凉快,而且所有的疲劳和不快都会烟消云散。在水帘洞里,考的是反应能力,你坐在一个小车上,手里拿一个带柄的网,刚开始洞里乌黑一片,在灯亮的时候,你会发现水底下有一些水果,大多数是假的,如果捞到真的你就可以挑选一个喜欢的玩具带走。
凤凰公园真是热闹非凡,每当我走进去,就会闻到花儿的清香,听到鸟儿的叫声,看到在微风中沙沙作响的树木,还有一群快乐的玩伴。我爱凤凰公园。
Early morning,sun farther—in—law showed smiling face,small alarm clock “ bite the bell bites bell “ the ground cries,seem to saying:“Beautiful,should get up!Should get up!!
Li Lixing,see sun farther—in—law came out,asperse on pale green branch full bright sunshine。 Li Li wore a beautiful powdery dress,wore a sky—blue pants again。 At this moment,transmit outside the window “ chirp “ cry,li Li looks up to look,a birdie is crying,seem to saying:“Li Li has breakfast quickly,I and you go to school together。 I and you go to school together。
Li Li eats breakfast rapidly,carry small satchel on the back,go to school together with birdie。
高密英才学校成立十二年来,一直致力于基础英语教学的研究和探索。我们独创的儿童英语才能教学法从方法和理论上解决了中国基础英语教育的根本问题。凡是在我校长期学习的学生,英语都是班里最好的。我们期望始终做一所以教育为本 的学校。目前在高密仅有的三所专业的英语学校中,我校的办学时间最长,教学效果最好,而学费是最低的。因此,在教育过度商业化和应试化的今天,我们需要社会的关注、支持和保护。
儿童英语才能教学法是一种专业的英语教学法。我们充分利用孩子8-12岁的学习语言黄金时间,全面培养孩子的识字能力、阅读能力、听的.能力、说的能力、写作能力,为孩子一生学习英语打下坚实的基础。教育是一次性的,没有回头路可走。期望家长尽早让孩子接受我们的教育,不要错过最佳时机。
9月4日,国家公布了新的高考方案,语文、数学和英语三科各为150分不变,英语可以有两次机会。这说明,英语对孩子们更重要了。我们热诚地欢迎更多的家长和学生走进英才学校,了解英才学校。
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大,但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能,人们可以i用电脑做很多事情,比如说看电影,听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器,所以我很喜欢电脑。
在我的家乡高密,有一座美丽的公园——凤凰公园。那里是男女老少都喜欢去的地方,因为那里的'环境优美,景色如画,让人流连忘返。
凤凰公园里许许多多的树木,有高大挺拔的杨树、芳香扑鼻的桃花、婀娜多姿的垂柳、黄焰焰的迎春花……,正是这样的一棵棵树木,组成了一片片树林。春天,树木抽出一条又一条娇嫩的枝条,吐出一片又一片嫩绿的小芽。三月的时候,每天都会有好几个人拿着一只漂亮的风筝,来到一个小山丘或是一个小草坪上放风筝。抬头一看,天空都快成了风筝的竞技场,真是美不胜收。夏天,树长得十分茂密、浓绿,树林遮住了人们的视线,阳光从缝隙射到草地上,金光闪闪。秋天,所有的树叶都变成金黄的,像黄蝴蝶一样在空中飞舞,这不禁让我想起了“碧云天,黄叶地,西风紧,北雁南飞,……”这美妙的古诗。惟有那火红的枫叶在风中向人们招手。冬天,四周一片雪白,如果你觉得现在很缺少生机的话,那你就大错特错了!只要你看到那傲然挺立在刺骨的寒风和鹅毛大雪中的雪松,你的心里会不由自主的产生一种钦佩之情。
公园还有许多小湖泊。有的清澈见底,能看到水里的小鱼在嬉戏玩耍。有的深不可测,颜色深沉。在这些小湖泊中,我最喜欢的就是小西湖了,它的周围绿树成荫,鲜花盛开。湖水静得像一面镜子,绿得像一块碧玉。小船从水面慢慢得滑过,几乎不留一点痕迹。微风从湖面上吹过,使人神清气爽。天气好时,阳光像从天上撒下来的金子一样落在水面上。岸边的柳树随风摆动着柔美的枝条,影子倒影在水面上,就像一个漂亮少女一边照镜子,一边摆弄着自己的长发。周围的花草给小西湖编了一个朴素的花环。
公园的小山丘连绵起伏,她的上面长满了绿树和鲜花,就像穿上了漂亮的衣服。这么多这么美的景象,你要是有机会,一定要去亲身体验呦!
正是因为这里的水和树木,让这里的空气是那么的清新。人们就给她起了一个名字,叫“天然氧吧”。你有时间,一定要去“亲口呼吸”。
过去的凤凰公园可不是这样的。以前,这里除了一些小草坪,就是几棵干巴巴的大树,就相当于一个广场。
其实,在高密,像凤凰公园这样的建筑物还有很多,比如空气清新的南湖植物园,美丽的小康河,热闹的文体公园……正是因为这些茂盛的“森林”,使高密成为了一个“森林城市”。
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