myday英语作文80字左右五年级【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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myday英语作文80字左右五年级【二】
一个风和日丽的早晨，爸爸懒洋洋的从温暖的被窝里爬起来，大喊道：“儿子，几点了？”爸爸等了半天，见儿子不理他，就急急忙忙穿上衣服，跑出房间。
“咣当”，原来爸爸不小心碰在妈妈身上了。爸爸一慌，连忙说：“l’m sorry，sorry！”妈妈见了，哈哈大笑：“你今天是怎么了？对了，今天中午我会给你和儿子做一顿丰盛的午餐。”爸爸一听，‘口水直流三千尺’，一下子就把儿子的事忘了。
中午，爸爸早早的就坐在餐桌旁等待着香喷喷的饭菜得到来。10分钟，20分钟，30分钟，爸爸等待已久的饭菜还没有来，就向厨房走去。刚走到门口，妈妈就大声招呼：“吃饭了！”爸爸一看，连忙说：“都饿死我了，赶快开饭！”爸爸和妈妈刚准备吃，妈妈就想：儿子呢？急忙说：“不能吃，儿子还没来，快去找儿子！”爸爸一听，便向房间走去。爸爸边走边想：这个小混蛋，都十二点了，怎么还不来吃饭，想饿死我么？
爸爸一进门，发现儿子在看书，便生气地说道：“快去吃饭！”儿子一听，不敢久留，急忙跑去餐厅吃饭。儿子走了以后，心想：儿子到底在看什么书，那么津津有味？爸爸一看，哇……
儿子到了餐厅以后，口水立马了里出来。正当儿子准备吃的时候，妈妈一看，爸爸呢？急忙说：“不能吃，你爸爸还没来呢，得等等你爸爸。”儿子一听，只好放下了手中的筷子。
10分钟，15分钟，20分钟，等待已久的爸爸却迟迟不来。妈妈一生气，对儿子说：“去去去，快去找你爸爸去。”儿子一生气，便向自己的房间里走去。心想：这个坏爸爸，还让我来吃饭，自己都不知道去哪儿了，哼！当儿子走到自己的房间的时候，发现爸爸也在看我的书。心想：原来爸爸也有一颗童心呀！
傍晚，当儿子一起这件事对我时候，全家洋溢着幸福的气味！
myday英语作文80字左右五年级【三】
我的弟弟，他调皮、爱捣蛋。不过，他最大的特点还是贪吃。
有一次，我和舅妈带着弟弟出去逛超市。在车上，弟弟嚷嚷着要买巧克力，舅妈答应了。“鸡腿也要。弟弟说，舅妈也答应了。接着，弟弟又说了一大堆东西，诸如薯片之类的.。舅妈忙得不亦乐乎，随口就答应了一声。可到了超市，弟弟一下抱了十几样东西到车上，舅妈不让，弟弟于是就撒起娇来。舅妈拗不过他，只能让弟弟买了这些东西。回到家里，弟弟随手一抓，就把零食往嘴里塞，满嘴都是饼干屑，吃得满地都是。第二天，我打开抽屉，一惊：唉，新买的巧克力呢？都不见了耶；还有饼干呢？只剩下两袋了唉；还有酸奶只剩下五瓶了耶，不是买了八瓶的吗？这是怎么回事？我问舅妈。舅妈笑而不答。我猛然醒悟；大呼：好哇，弟弟竟然吃了这么多！
吃晚饭的时候，弟弟见到自己喜欢的鸭子，兴奋得两眼发光。一连吃了七大块鸭肉都不够。外公劝他不要吃了，他不听，拿了个鸭腿往嘴里塞，一连吃了两大碗饭，还不够。把鸭翅也啃了个一干二净。吃完后，还拿个大苹果作点心，三下两下就吃完了。可真够贪吃的。
弟弟现在上小学二年级，体重也已经跟我差不多了。我很喜欢我的弟弟，你呢？
myday英语作文80字左右五年级【四】
在一个静悠悠的美丽的傍晚，家家户户都点起灯，开始吃晚饭，有一家，也不例外。当妈妈在餐桌上摆好许许多多的美味佳肴时，儿子却不见了。妈妈似乎有些生气，对身材不均，体形不匀的儿子的父亲说：“快！把儿子给我叫来，吃饭了！今天晚上的晚餐可是营养、丰富的很啊！”父亲似乎拿到了一块“干活板”扭动滚圆滚圆的身子，挺着一个像皮球般的啤酒肚，大摇大摆地朝儿子的房间走去。
父亲走进自己儿子的房间，映入父亲眼帘的，是他的儿子正扑在地上津津有味地在看书，两只短短的小脚还翘了起来，不停地一前一后地摇动着，有时，头也情不自禁地点了点。父亲和蔼可亲地对儿子说：“儿子！快起来，吃饭去！今天***妈为你准备了一桌子的好吃的哦！”儿子拍拍小屁股，站起来，微微一笑，朝餐厅走去。父亲不明白，是什么书这么有吸引力，把儿子弄的神魂颠倒。他歪头一看，哦！原来是本漫画书啊！他也当不住好奇心地来到，好奇心驱使着他，父亲便也进金有味地看起了漫画书。
刺猬头儿子坐在餐桌前，总觉得好象缺了点什么，哦！爸爸也不见了。妈妈呆了，这是怎么回事啊？来了一个，又不见了一个，真是搞不懂他们这对父与子。“儿子！快把你父亲给我叫来！饭、菜都要凉了！
真是搞不懂你父亲！”妈妈生气地说。儿子跳下凳子，朝自己的小房间走去。儿子走到门口，只看见自己的老爸像个老顽童似的学着自己以前看漫画书的样子，扑在地上，翘起两只脚，一前一后，一前一后地交错着，摆动着。手支撑着那个秃子大胡子头，看得津津有味，目不转睛。儿子大声呼唤着父亲，可是父亲怎么“听”的见呢？他已经完全被这本漫画书吸引住了，他看得如醉如痴，仿佛置身在幻想境界里。
