初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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又有多少人面对着流水,吟诵着“逝者如斯夫”,发出无可奈何的叹息,你对他们却总是置之不理,让他们去感悟其中的奥秘。“滚滚长江东逝水,浪花淘尽英雄”又有多少风流人物,不甘驱从你的驾驶,在时光的长河中奋力拚搏,于是,你显出满意的赞许,让他们的\'精神常留天地间。清人文嘉《明日歌》中曰:“我生待明日,万事成蹉跎”,又有《今日歌》曰:“人生百年几今日,今日不为实可惜”。许多人等待着那无穷尽的明日,不妨先读读这些诗句,或许会有所感悟,或许会认认真真把握今天。
人的一生多么短暂,在这茫茫的时间长河中能算得上什么呢?然而,既然只来此一趟,岂能让它白走?多少也得留点东西,让我们把握好时间,去创造更加美好的明天吧!
回忆着过去那充满欢乐、温馨的日子,我不禁感到了丝丝遗憾。在六年的时光里我何曾留着像那游丝般的痕迹呢?没有。如果时间可以倒流话,我将安排好自己的时间,来填补自己的种种遗憾。
记得以前我三年级,有一次学校里举行乒乓球比赛,我们班许多同学都非常高兴,都踊跃参加。那时侯,我的乒乓球水平在我们班可算得上“好”这个字了,但那时的我非常胆小,怕出丑,所以没有参加,失去了一次展现自我的.机会。假如时间可以倒流,我一定在老师问完后第一个举手,然后跟爸爸进行艰苦的训练。到比赛时,凭自己全身力量***进决赛,夺得冠军。
假如时间可以倒流,我希望变回以前那个在家天真活泼,什么都不怕,而且老是闯祸,在校却胆小如鼠的上一年级时的我,因为可以无拘无束的和我那才3岁的表弟玩耍。
现在我已经是一位在低年级看来的大哥哥,要面对的是通向成功之门的曲折小路,只有不停地走啊走,摔交了爬起来,有障碍了翻过去……才能走到成功之门,打开它。
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假如时间可以倒流,我想回到我童年的时候,去和我亲爱的外公一起聊天,玩耍。在我九岁那年,外公走了,带着他对亲人与世间无限地眷恋走了。他的离去,让我无法证实这突如其来的一切。我的脑海里浮现出当年的画面来:在我还未上幼儿园时,外公外婆就像父母似的精心照顾我,喂我喝奶、哄我睡觉、带我玩耍……然而,我却不懂事,老是惹外公生气。小时候,我因为调皮而不小心打烂了外公最心爱的\'古董,一直没有勇气告诉外公。外公知道后,他也没有责备我,他一声不吭。我知道,外公一定很伤心……现在想起来,我真后悔!泪水已朦胧了我的双眼。我还记得,在我摔倒时,外公一次又一次,用他那厚实的大手扶我起来;我还记得,在我惹外公生气时,他从没埋怨过一句。他那亲切的语言无法在我脑海里消失。但是,这太迟了!外公已离我们而去,我再也没有一个疼我的外公了!假如时间可以倒流,我再也不会惹外公生气了,再也不会了!假如时间可以倒流,我会珍惜那段时间,我会拿许多好吃的,逗外公开心;假如时间可以倒流,我一定会对外公说一声:“谢谢您!”假如时间可以倒流……
可惜的是,时间就像流水一样,有去无回。遗憾永远是遗憾,再也不能弥补……
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